A story I wrote for my wife

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A story I wrote for my wife

Unread post by jodaddyitsaboy » Sun Feb 09, 2014 9:13 am

Names changed to protect us:

I get home and immediately notice a car parked net to the house that I don't recognize.
I think "why don't these church people park somewhere else?" and head inside.
When I get to the side door, it's locked. We never lock our door. I tried knocking, but nothing.
Fishing out my keys, I begin to get annoyed and wonder, where the hell are you.
After fidgeting for what seemed to be forever, I finally get the door to open and walk in to drop off my things.
Then it hits me, where's everybody at? Its a beautiful spring day, maybe out on a walk.
Not seeing a note of any kind I make an assumption and sit down in the living room to watch some TV. But of course, there's nothing on TV this time of day.
Realizing i'm still in my work clothes, I decide to get out of my work clothes and "relieve" myself.
What batter time to masturbate then when Jamie isn't home.
Walking through the bedroom door i'm surprised, confused and completely shocked at the sight I see.
He looks to be in his mid 30's, tall, dark skin, well defined muscles and well manicured hair. He's standing on Jamies side of the bed, shirt off, hands on her shoulders, while she sits in some lacy lingerie I don't recognize. Her beautiful skin practically glowing and the lacy bra supporting her wonderful tits. She looks excited, and I'm not sure why, but I notice her hands are pulling at his belt. She makes quick work of the belt; shes excited. I've never seen her so excited.
I find myself standing, watching. I know I should feel angry, indignant, but all I feel is curious. What would she do? How far would she go? Does she even realize I'm standing here?
It is following that thought when she finally gets to the prize she seems to be after. His cock pops out of his boxers like it's jumping to attention on command. as it springs up, it almost slaps her in the chin, and a bit of pre cum that had been dripping from it whips out and lands on her tits, which she seems to completely ignore. She seems enthralled with this cock that is practically poking her in the forehead.
Holy shit, he's standing almost a foot away! That thing has to bee almost 9 inches long!!! I've never seen another man's cock up close before, and this is definitely one fine specimen, if the pornos are anything to judge by.
Now any man with any self worth would immediately bust out a baseball bat and chase this man as far away as he can.
The best I can muster is a raging hard on.
The sight of her pulling his boxers down was missed by me, but now her tits are hanging free somehow. God what wonderful tits
She hasn't looked over at me yet, but she does start to lean forward.
I know there is no way she is going to suck that cock. It's entirely too large; I don't even think I could. As her head approaches, she parts her lips and begins to kiss the end of his helmet and suck the precum from his cock like it is the fountain of youth.
I notice that her hands are busy as well.
She is dropping the skimpy panties I can only imagine where they came from.
Did she go out shopping today looking for something specific for this man?
Did he bring it for her?
Who the fuck is this guy?
Her panties... wholly fuck, they are soaked. It looks like her pussy must be a running faucet right now. I can smell it.I wish i could see it.
"Ahhh...."
The moan is mine. At some point I must have pulled my own dick out and when i gripped it, it was ecstasy to finally feel some stimulation on my cock.
When I come back from my moment, there she is holding his cock.She is starting to lean back and guide this, this, monster, this cock the size of a 20 oz soda bottle, towards her pussy.
And Oh my god her pussy. It was practically a river of her pussy juice with an obvious wet spot on the bed. Wow. Holy fuck. She is very fucking horny.
I am too. I don't know why, but the sight is so incredibly erotic.
My wife, guiding the cock of a better looking, healthier man who happens to be very blessed, towards her pussy.
She hasn't even looked at me.
The excitement is almost enough to make me cum. I'm not even touching myself any more. My heart is racing. My body feels like it's shaking.
I cant help but think, " holy shit, stick that cock in her! Stretch that pussy. Maker her cum!"
My thoughts are so loud I wonder if they hear me.
Back to reality.
It's there.
His cock is RIGHT THERE...
Her hand holding the base, her legs spread extra wide, her body glowing in the light with a glow I can only describe as youthful exuberance.
Her tits, oh her tits.
Hes leaning forward now, massaging them. Squeezing them.
Her nipples are sticking strait up. They look like bright red push pins sticking up from her magnificent tits.
He's leaning forward more.
Inching ever closer to his prize, my wife.
The moment his cock touches her pussy lips, her head moves.
She is looking at me. Not towards me, or near me.
her head didn't turn in my direction.
She is looking at me.
I see her lips move, but it takes a moment to register what she's saying.
"Do you want to watch me take this?"
It was the first thing she's said since i've been here.
It was like being struck by lightning.
I was glued to the floor, unable to move for a moment, but my body, almost unwillingly, started to move. Stepping out of my pants and underwear, I approach the bed.
As i begin to climb on, I pull my shirt over my head and kneel down next to her.
She moves my head with her hand, not a push.
Never forceful, just guided it.
I realize i'm now staring directly at her pussy, and I can see her juice practically dripping out of her, and his cock head, resting lightly against her pussy lips.
Her hand moves from my head to my rock solid dick, and when she grabs I hear her say "Fuck me".
The cock is moving forward.
Her pussy is beginning to open to welcome him.
She moans as his head starts to open her up.
He's barely a half inch in and I can already see she's beginning to stretch to accommodate.
Slowly, ever slowly, this massive cock is piercing my wife.
She's gripping my dick tight It must be involuntary. I can't imagine she'd squeeze this tight.
Not on purpose.
His helmet isn't even in all the way, but again, I hear from my wife something...
"Holy fuck that's big... I didn't believe you... I'm sorry I didn't believe you... Fuck me. Oh my god fuck me. Just the way I asked for..."
With that, he shoves the rest in.
Usually, i work my cock in her, but she was so wet, I hear what I can only describe as a slurping as her pussy welcomes his girth.
With that...
She has what has to be the loudest largest orgasm I've ever seen or heard.
She still has my dick in her hand, but it feels like shes going to rip it off.
I couldn't have put my head any closer. I could almost stick my tongue out and lick her.
I hesitate, his cock is in her, do I want to disturb that?
As if she was reading my mind, her hand, her free hand, previously holding her leg back so she was wide enough to allow him into her, is guiding my head down.
I need no other motivation and start sucking and licking her clit.
As if on cue, he begins to slide out of her, and thrust back in.
One thrust, that's all it took.
He pulled out and thrust one time, and shes cumming again.
She not only cums, but squirts a massive stream of squirt into my mouth as I am sucking on her.
i haven't a choice but to swallow.
Not because she won't let me, but because I don't want to stop.
When her orgasm begins to subside, my dick is released and i hear her utter something.
I have to hear her, but heard nothing. My head is spinning.
As I continue to lick her, and he continues to fuck her, all I can utter is "huh?"
She cums again, but she's holding her leg and grasping the sheets this time.
He's still thrusting but she manages "wash your mouth out. I want to kiss you while he fucks me."
It was a whisper. It must have taken everything she had to say that while being fucked.
I didn't want to leave but didn't want to be left to fend for myself either.
I roll out of bed to head to the bathroom, but he never breaks stride. In. Out. In. Out. As I swing my feet over the edge and onto the floor
As if on command, my feet land and she unleashes into a massive orgasm again.
Not as big as before. either she's getting used to his size, or she liked it better when I was there...
I do as instructed and am back in what seems like hours, feels like days and was actually probably seconds.
I climb on the bed, and head back to watch, but she stops me and says, "kiss me".
I'm unable to do anything except as instructed As if in a trance or hypnotized.
As I begin to make out with my wife, I hear a voice.
A mans voice.
it is the first time he's spoken.
"I'm going to cum in your pussy..."
We're in the middle of a passionate kiss, but she breaks to address him.
"No, that wasn't part of the deal!"
"Fuck the deal, I am not pulling out!" he replies.
He hasn't broken stride the entire time. I was ready to cum watching, i can't imagine how he feels.
I don't add to this exchange.
It's not my place.
Her enjoyment is paramount right now. If she doesn't get what she wants,
"Oh no, please don't Please cum on my body!"
"I'm going to cum where I like. And I want to cum in your pussy"
"Oh no! Don't stop fucking me! Don't cum!"
"Your pussy is so stretched. There's going to be so much cum. Your pussy is going to milk my balls dry"
"Oh!" She cums again.
It's surreal.
LIke nothing i've dreamt of.imagined.
"Don't... Cum on my tits!"
"There's so much cum heading for your pussy, it's going to push through your cervix into your uterus. Your eggs will be swimming in my cum. You'll be leaking it for a month.you'll be at work, dripping cum. You'l be at dinner, dripping MY cum. You're going to be so full..."
"OH!... God!!! OH FUCK! DO IT!!! FILL ME WITH YOUR CUM!!! I WANT IT SO BAD!!!"
With that, she grabs my head and starts to passionately kiss me again
I'm torn.
I'm scared.
I'm excited and horny.
I'm so fucking horny.
I want to watch this cock fill my wife, but I want to kiss her.
I want her to know I love her.
I want her to enjoy.
Our lips meet and it's electric.
She's pulling me in to her.
He's pounding her hard now.
I know hes about to cum.
I can't believe he's gone this long.
And with that thought, he thrusts and buries his cock as deep as her tight pussy will allow. She breaks our kiss and looks into my eyes...
She's holding my neck tightly. I couldn't escape if I wanted to.
"Oh Josh! Hes fucking cumming in my pussy!!! there's so much!!! I can feel every spurt!!! Oh god hes deep!!! So fucking HORNY!!!"
He's not thrusting.
He's not moving really.
We're kissing again.
I can feel her mouth something.
I don't stop kissing her, loving her.
When we finally break our kiss, I look up in time to see him turn the corner.
And with that, he's gone, and I'm again left with my wife, in bed.
I look back at her, and she is glowing. Simply glowing. Like a woman well satisfied.
"Do you want to see his cum?"...
I want to say no.
I want to not want to.
I will tell her no.
"Oh yes... show me all his cum... show me your stretched pussy..."
I move down the bed to position myself before her.and she simultaneously pulls her legs back to offer an amazing view of her well fucked, soaking wet pussy.
I begin to move in to her, and as I approach and smell her sex. It is an aphrodisiac.
I think my dick actually gets harder.
I didn't think that was possible.
"Oh Josh, his dick was sooo big. I didn't think it would fit. He told me how big it was, and I didn't believe him. I wanted that so bad."
with that, I can't help myself.
I lean in and start sucking up the river of cum leaking from her well fucked, well stretched pussy.
"I'm so sore, but if you suck all the cum out so I don't leak, I will jack you off."
Fuel to the fire.
I suck harder, sucking to get every bit of cum out of her pussy. Not because I don't want it there. No, not that.
Because I want it now that she's done with it.
"Holy fuck, you must enjoy that..."
"mmffmmm" is all I can utter.
"Here, stop and lay down. I want you to get it all".
Like the dutiful husband, I remove my mouth from her pussy.
As I sit up, she is looking down...
"Oh god Josh, you have his cum on your chin still..."
She closes her legs and sits up as I lay on my back into position.
With that, she holds her pussy closed with a hand and positions herself in a reverse cowgirl position on my face.
I continue where I left off...
Moaning again, she begins to grind on my mouth.
Hungrily lapping at all the cum and all her juices,
And she's cumming again...
One massive orgasm.
Almost suffocating me.
She is driving me wild.
Louder and harder than anything i've ever heard her scream.
She collapses, spent.
Then I realize, so did I.
We both fall asleep in a sweaty, hot, sex stained mess.

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Re: A story I wrote for my wife

Unread post by jodaddyitsaboy » Mon Feb 10, 2014 2:37 pm

I suppose with 200 views, I should be grateful for your interest, but I was hoping for some comments, good or bad. Though written for her, she is hardly one to critique my writing. However, I cannot improve without it. Would anyone be willing to off constructive criticism?

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Re: A story I wrote for my wife

Unread post by OZCPL » Sun Feb 16, 2014 2:41 pm

Well you asked for comments so I asked my wife to read it and she said she liked it and she thought your wife would like it. However my wife is usually extremely conservative in her comments of a sexual nature so I would think it is a big good wrap from a woman's point of view.

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Re: A story I wrote for my wife

Unread post by jodaddyitsaboy » Sun Feb 16, 2014 4:26 pm

OZCPL, thanks for your reply.
I did give this to my wife first, but she is reluctant to ever offer any insight, so I appreciate your critique.
I enjoy writing, on several subjects, so your reply is motivation to write more "erotica" destined for my bride. (And ultimately here)
Thanks.

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