I have no problem with the length of the story. I think it's going to take a lot of time and a lot of effort to flesh out storylines. This is a craft and frankly, while I'm not a cuckold or even a hotwife husband anymore, my wife and I do like reading what xleglover writes. There is sheer brilliance here and guess what? We get it, no charge. Imagine KT Morrison, Kenny Wright, Ben Boswell, Bart Tracer, or a host of others do that?
(BTW, if you want two really hot KT Morrison stories, read "Dominated by The Landlord" and "Happy Endings", both are still unfinished, but are great with Happy Endings writing sounding like something from "Jersey Shore"--something I never watched. KT is brilliant.)
Yeah, if the storytelling is good I like em long as well.
BTW, a LOT of erotic books are free to download if you subscribe to Kindle Unlimited. Just downloaded Cherry Blossoms - thanks for the recommendation. Read about 6 of Ben Boswells and a few others over the past few days. So far, none have been as gripping as the original Mike and Jen opus. I wish X would go back, edit and put out the story in book form. Even if he used someone else that he trusts to do it for him.
I think my favorite part in all of the original story was when Jen stepped into her sisters' house that night and found Mike passed out asleep in the bed with Allie. That said, I was disappointed that X chose not to have Jen actually go into the bedroom, to actually SEE them in bed. I wanted Jen to find Mike sleeping with his head nuzzled into Allie's big tits, her arms holding him tightly, offering him shelter from his pain. That would have been more deserving.