I anxiously wait for the continuation of this hot story and your first hot wife experience by a hot blooded Puerto Rican. Thanks for sharing the first kiss and meeting a man that knows from the beginning that he is going to be your LTR BF. Seduction's First Kiss - Fiction
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WOW!!!! That was hot hot HOT!!! When you dress very sexy for your date with him just remember, naughty and lose the panties or thong. Then as he is dancing with you and making you hotter he will know that you are his as you cum to him prepared. I anxiously wait for the continuation of this hot story and your first hot wife experience by a hot blooded Puerto Rican. Thanks for sharing the first kiss and meeting a man that knows from the beginning that he is going to be your LTR BF.
I anxiously wait for the continuation of this hot story and your first hot wife experience by a hot blooded Puerto Rican. Thanks for sharing the first kiss and meeting a man that knows from the beginning that he is going to be your LTR BF. Only a fool test the depth of the water with both feet.
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I know but hoped you would finish it with a few suggestions.mr_hotwifecplsa wrote:This was fiction allen, lol. HOT fiction, but fiction nontheless.
and thanks, Im gald you liked it
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Well yes but that is another story because you are moving from fiction to fact.mrs_hotwifecplsa wrote:so do you like the way we "finished" it? lolallengt wrote:I know but hoped you would finish it with a few suggestions.mr_hotwifecplsa wrote:This was fiction allen, lol. HOT fiction, but fiction nontheless.
and thanks, Im gald you liked it
we do a lot of fantasy sex talk, so we are always coming up with ideas!
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You're right, mr_hotwifecplsa. Your story is an excellent one, and we should have provided you some feedback. I just re-read it, and found it to be well written and exciting. I especially like that it's told from the lady's point of view. Did your Mrs work with you on it, or critique it after the fact? Or did you read it to her after you had it polished? What was her reaction to the story line? Just wondering. Thanks again.
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Mea culpa too. I though it hot, bust didn't say anything, for last of anything more to say. I should have. Let me give it another try:
A hot story! Please continue, if you are so inclined!
A hot story! Please continue, if you are so inclined!
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