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Unread post by Bethany » Thu Aug 08, 2024 7:20 am

Hello xll, Thanks for making your superb writings available. Always fascinating. Do you have any plans to publish the rest of the FWFFG stories, i.e. after Mike & Jen's reunion, suburbs, Joey, Jamal and descent into cuckolding? I would imagine it'll be a challenge to get some of it around censors. If you don't plan to publish it, would you consider putting those chapters back up on Literotica?

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Unread post by gyhuza » Fri Aug 09, 2024 8:42 am

xleglover wrote:
Mon Jul 29, 2024 9:37 am

Book 6 will begin having new stuff, going beyond what was originally published here.
Will you continue the theme of the last story about Greg joining them in their honeymoon and Zoey being more conservatively dressing for Hudson during these honeymoon to push his bottoms to agree for Greg to join them. After Greg joins them, Zoey starts dressing more revealing (thong bikini when before it was a modest bikini, using shorter skirts when before they were longer skirts, wearing thigh highs, etc.) and behaving as if she is in the honeymoon with Greg and Hudson is some common friend or someone that they met at the hotel. Also, Zoey letting Greg to do anal with her when before Hudson only wanted this to be exclusively for him would the remaining barrier for Zoey and Greg to consolidate their relationship while Hudson is feeling that he is losing Zoey even more. The angsts and arousal of Hudson would be through the roof with something like this. If you continue this theme, it would be quite hot! Waiting for book 6 to drop

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Unread post by Peacemiller » Tue Aug 20, 2024 10:27 pm

Bethany wrote:
Thu Aug 08, 2024 7:20 am
Hello xll, Thanks for making your superb writings available. Always fascinating. Do you have any plans to publish the rest of the FWFFG stories, i.e. after Mike & Jen's reunion, suburbs, Joey, Jamal and descent into cuckolding? I would imagine it'll be a challenge to get some of it around censors. If you don't plan to publish it, would you consider putting those chapters back up on Literotica?
I second this inquiry. I loved the adventure into the suburbs.

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Unread post by DarrenZ » Thu Aug 22, 2024 5:05 pm

Fairly certain he’s said it’s coming.

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Unread post by roaringknob » Wed Sep 04, 2024 3:43 am

I love x'swriting I wish he was quicker with his releases like butler or boswell

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Unread post by hairyhead » Thu Sep 05, 2024 9:35 pm

Bethany wrote:
Thu Aug 08, 2024 7:20 am
Hello xll, Thanks for making your superb writings available. Always fascinating. Do you have any plans to publish the rest of the FWFFG stories, i.e. after Mike & Jen's reunion, suburbs, Joey, Jamal and descent into cuckolding? I would imagine it'll be a challenge to get some of it around censors. If you don't plan to publish it, would you consider putting those chapters back up on Literotica?
Zero chance X will go anywhere near Literotica.

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Unread post by Dream Weaver » Mon Sep 16, 2024 9:50 pm

hairyhead wrote:
Thu Sep 05, 2024 9:35 pm
Bethany wrote:
Thu Aug 08, 2024 7:20 am
Hello xll, Thanks for making your superb writings available. Always fascinating. Do you have any plans to publish the rest of the FWFFG stories, i.e. after Mike & Jen's reunion, suburbs, Joey, Jamal and descent into cuckolding? I would imagine it'll be a challenge to get some of it around censors. If you don't plan to publish it, would you consider putting those chapters back up on Literotica?
Zero chance X will go anywhere near Literotica.
I'm pretty sure he admits in this thread that he has been testing out some stuff there under a different name. That being said, he needs the playground. He's at his best when he's just letting it flow and I think the for money stuff is a little constraining (and I'm guessing more drudge work as he gets it prepped). I love it though. Feedback on what to write can be death for an artist. Just release the hounds and whatever happens, happens.


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Unread post by Guhunkadorn » Fri Sep 27, 2024 2:26 pm

Xeg, I've polled Congress and there is bipartisan support for you to go ahead and release book 6 anytime now.

In fact, my gut tells me that if you release it prior to kickoff vs. Illinois tomorrow, Penn State will prevail in that contest.

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Unread post by xleglover » Sun Sep 29, 2024 10:01 am

Hi all,

Book 6 of the Be Careful What You Wish For series will be out on Kindle and Smashwords in a day or two (hopefully). If you read the series when it was published here on OHW, the last chapter ended with Greg calling someone for help with breaking up Mike and Jen (now their names are Hudson and Zoey, so people on Kindle, Smashwords, etc. don't get confused when they read the different series).

In this Book 6, we learn who Greg called. We also get some backstory on Greg, and find out why he has always been so obsessed with Hudson's girl, Zoey. So this Book 6 gets into the new material not published here on OHW (although the earlier books have been heavily edited and things added than what was published here).

Anyway, I wanted to let everyone know this, as I promised to tell you when the series got to new material. Below is the blurb on Kindle describing the book.


Bride With Rival On Honeymoon - Be Careful What You Wish For Book 6

I used to write as xleglover and Flash of Stocking.

Hudson and Zoey are on their honeymoon.

Now that they’re married, Hudson wants to become Zoey’s exclusive man again – the only man she loves, the only man she desires in bed. That’s his right as her husband, his right when she put his ring on her finger and vowed to be faithful to him. But will he be able to turn away from his cuckold desires?

And will Zoey be satisfied with going back to a plain vanilla sex life, especially since she’s developed an emotional connection with Greg? Since she’s learned Hudson is more metro than alpha. Since she’s learned Greg is the man – the real man – who she used to think Hudson was.

In this book, we learn why Greg has been so focused – obsessed – with Zoey since the day he met her. It’s not just her beauty. There’s something else in his past that has made him obsessed with Hudson’s girl.

And we see Greg asking for help from a mysterious person, to help him beat Hudson in the fight for Zoey’s affections. For years, Hudson treated Greg as a loser. Now the tables are turned, and it’s Greg who’s winning. He smirks triumphantly every time he penetrates Zoey with his manhood. Every time she screams when he makes her body explode with orgasmic pleasure. Greg hopes this person will help him drive a wedge between Hudson and Zoey’s new marriage.

Read about Hudson, Zoey and Greg in this 6th book of the Be Careful What You Wish For series.

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Unread post by xleglover » Mon Sep 30, 2024 3:41 am

Book 6 is now available on Smashwords. Not yet up on Kindle.

https://www.smashwords.com/books/view/1625608

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Unread post by xleglover » Mon Sep 30, 2024 6:32 pm

Hi - Book 6 is now on Kindle. Cheers!

https://www.amazon.com/dp/B0DHV3MLXV

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Unread post by Guhunkadorn » Thu Oct 03, 2024 11:16 am

Book 6 is magnificent!

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Unread post by SirWanksalot » Thu Oct 03, 2024 6:01 pm

xleglover wrote:
Mon Sep 30, 2024 6:32 pm
Hi - Book 6 is now on Kindle. Cheers!

https://www.amazon.com/dp/B0DHV3MLXV
Outstanding as always!

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Unread post by gyhuza » Sat Oct 05, 2024 8:16 am

xleglover wrote:
Mon Sep 30, 2024 6:32 pm
Hi - Book 6 is now on Kindle. Cheers!

https://www.amazon.com/dp/B0DHV3MLXV
It was hot!

For book 7, following the theme that you have now, it would be hotter in book 7 for Hudson to see Zoey and Greg acting as if they are the couple in the honey moon and Hudson is a random friend that they met who is accompanied by Kimmy. You could do something like the two couples moving to a different hotel where Zoey and Greg register as a recently married couple with Zoey calling herself Sophy and using Greg's surname. Hudson's angst could be through the roof. He watches in first person how Zoey, now Sophie, is wearing sexier and more revealing clothes that she would never or would rarely wear for him. For example, Greg now gives her a thong bikini that shows off most of her ass and makes for a great view of her legs all the way to her exposed ass, showing off her ballerina legs and ass to anyone at the pool and beach. During this time, she asks to Hudson to takes photos of her and Greg at the beach, at the club, while she behaves as Greg's new bride and everyone calls her as such in front of Hudson

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Unread post by Dream Weaver » Tue Oct 08, 2024 11:27 am

Book 6 - So worth the wait. Settled in about 11 pm to read it. Finished a bit later. What a great stroke-book. Thanks XLeg!

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Unread post by xleglover » Sat Oct 12, 2024 8:00 am

Hi all,

I have a new book out, Husband’s Fantasy Backfires. https://www.amazon.com/dp/B0DJWGDPD8?dp ... 989&nodl=1

I’ll be going back and forth between this series and Be Careful What You Wish For.

Cheers!

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Unread post by Dream Weaver » Sat Oct 12, 2024 11:08 pm

xleglover wrote:
Sat Oct 12, 2024 8:00 am
Hi all,

I have a new book out, Husband’s Fantasy Backfires. https://www.amazon.com/dp/B0DJWGDPD8?dp ... 989&nodl=1

I’ll be going back and forth between this series and Be Careful What You Wish For.

Cheers!
Great subject, I like the tone where this is going!

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Unread post by couple20uk » Sun Oct 13, 2024 4:41 am

As I found the UK Kindle version unusually hard to find on Amazon UK.
So, here is the link: https://www.amazon.co.uk/gp/product/B0D ... UTF8&psc=1

I remember this story as being your best work when you wrote under the pseudonym name, "Flash of Stocking."
Also hope that now you have gone commercial, it still follows a similar (interesting) path. :D
I am not saying any more as I don't want to spoil it for others.
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Unread post by Dream Weaver » Mon Oct 21, 2024 3:49 pm

Hey, I see another book is out, kind of a goofy title but I’ll get to reading it ha ha

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Unread post by xleglover » Tue Oct 22, 2024 10:46 am

Dream Weaver wrote:
Mon Oct 21, 2024 3:49 pm
Hey, I see another book is out, kind of a goofy title but I’ll get to reading it ha ha
Yes, my new book is at Kindle here https://www.amazon.com/dp/B0DKDH9FMS

And you can find the book other places here https://books2read.com/u/3JB9Me

As Dream Weaver noted, the book is a bit extreme (even for me). The title is Son's Fat Black Friend Stole My Wife & Other Stories of MILFs Getting Bred

I wanted to mention that this book has an updated interview of me by Darrenz, including some feedback from readers from the originally published email -- the email I got from Leah is probably more interesting than my short stories in the book!

Anyway, here's a summary of the book:

This is a collection of short stories about white MILFs being bad – cheating on their husbands, cucking their husbands, craving young men, and experimenting with black men and their big black cocks.

These MILFs though, pay the price – they foolishly have unprotected sex with virile, powerful men. These men want to breed these hot MILFs. That’s their thing. They get off on making sexy, tight, beautiful MILFs fat with their brat babies.

This book is not for those easily offended. Because you might find these stories: Offensive. Disturbing. Hateful. Exasperating. Vile.

But if you like reading about sexy MILFs being bad – and then paying the price – then this book is for you.
This collection has the following stories:

Son's Fat Black Friend Stole My Wife
MILF Spies On Naked High School Boys
The Girl Who Used To Babysit Me
Black Supremacy Cucks Husband Twice
Homeless Black Man Fucks Unprotected Wife In Alley

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Unread post by Dan_159 » Wed Oct 23, 2024 6:46 pm

I’m a big fan of your writing and buy everything that comes out. However this new book just was not for me too short and seem rushed with character development. I only got through less than half before I went back to read your older stuff. Just my thought from a long term fan.

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Unread post by couple20uk » Thu Oct 24, 2024 9:54 am

Dan_159 wrote:
Wed Oct 23, 2024 6:46 pm
I’m a big fan of your writing and buy everything that comes out. However this new book just was not for me too short and seem rushed with character development. I only got through less than half before I went back to read your older stuff. Just my thought from a long term fan.
I am like you Dan, I purchase all of Xleg works he publishes to support him, mainly because of the hours of entertainment he gave us here.

However, assuming you are talking about, "A Husband's Fantasy Backfires" then I have to agree with you. This story was one he wrote years ago when he was writing under the pseudonym: Flash of Stocking. I do believe he never finished it then.

Potentially, this story could have been a classic, but it needed a lot of rework and extra added. However, on first reading, it looks like very little has changed from the original other than the names.

With my writer's hat on, I was hoping for a little more, and 80 pages is certainly not a book. As a reader, you are just getting into it and it stops and you wait months. I have now stopped purchasing these short story "books" from all other authors except Xleg. If it is not 150 pages, plus, I do not purchase it.

My suggestion is to email Xleg, his email address is in the books. I have found that he does respond when he has time to do so.
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Unread post by xleglover » Fri Oct 25, 2024 8:28 am

couple20uk wrote:
Thu Oct 24, 2024 9:54 am
Dan_159 wrote:
Wed Oct 23, 2024 6:46 pm
I’m a big fan of your writing and buy everything that comes out. However this new book just was not for me too short and seem rushed with character development. I only got through less than half before I went back to read your older stuff. Just my thought from a long term fan.
I am like you Dan, I purchase all of Xleg works he publishes to support him, mainly because of the hours of entertainment he gave us here.

However, assuming you are talking about, "A Husband's Fantasy Backfires" then I have to agree with you. This story was one he wrote years ago when he was writing under the pseudonym: Flash of Stocking. I do believe he never finished it then.

Potentially, this story could have been a classic, but it needed a lot of rework and extra added. However, on first reading, it looks like very little has changed from the original other than the names.

With my writer's hat on, I was hoping for a little more, and 80 pages is certainly not a book. As a reader, you are just getting into it and it stops and you wait months. I have now stopped purchasing these short story "books" from all other authors except Xleg. If it is not 150 pages, plus, I do not purchase it.

My suggestion is to email Xleg, his email address is in the books. I have found that he does respond when he has time to do so.
All good points. I've gotten feedback from people that they sometimes prefer shorter books, so I made this one shorter and priced it lower at $2.99, rather than my regular prices of $3.99 for a longer book. By the way, that's why I'm trying to publish more short story collections.

On another topic, I wanted to let everyone know that I've reduced the price of Faithful Wife’s Fall From Grace: Book 1 to 99 cents, in case anyone wants to give this series a try. This price is only available on Kindle at the moment. https://www.amazon.com/dp/B0CK588T9Y

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Unread post by octohamilton » Wed Nov 06, 2024 7:10 pm

I just read the "My son's fat black friend stole my wife" story, and it reads a lot like an abridged/alternate version of Holly's Breeding by Engwwok on lit.
It's definitely not a one-to-one carbon copy of it, and I'm not here to accuse X of ripping off engywwok. The stories do rhyme in a good deal of places to me. Holly's Breeding is well worth checking out for those of you who haven't read it.

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