Cucked by an Incel

[Johng1953]

Loving the story so far, gotta say I think the dialogue is easily one of the strongest parts, you do a fantastic job. It’s been mentioned twice but Ollie looping in his online friends with Morgan either via sending them photos or videos is definitely an angle that should be explored more. Very excited to see where the story goes next!

I really appreciate this comment. One of my largest motivators for writing this is that I adore stories that focus on dialogue and dirty talk. As a reader, I often find myself skipping over the physical descriptions of sex to get to what I consider "the good stuff."

That's exactly what I do too. You've nailed a perfect balance for me.

[concasy]

Seriously well written!

[jc6morw]

Great detailed story. I get very excited with the concept of an incel getting to enjoy the woman at my expense and humiliation.

[sc good cuck]

Bump...we'd like to hear more!

[scarfolamew]

Thanks folks. Making steady progress on Chapter 10, hope to have it out soon!

[fraktastic]

Looking forward to it!

[scarfolamew]

Chapter 10 - Our Little Secret is live! Hope you like it

[soupcan_99]

When I use the link it takes me to the early chapters but not #10… I must be missing something? Help please.

[scarfolamew]

Weird, it works for me when I checked it just now (although the paragraph spacing is messed up ). Might be some sort of caching issue.

If you email me at my username @ gmail, I'll send you a pdf

[soupcan_99]

I went to the prior link and it worked, probably my issue. Thanks great chapter…

[Johng1953]

A truly amazing chapter. I can't wait to see how all this develops further.