I know I am beating a dead horse with a stick on this, but I just have to get it out. I just read Chp 6 Be Careful What You Wish For and I still feel no connection for the characters, I mean the title of the story tells you the end of the story, I can see someone having a fetish and gets off seeing the spouse or significant other with someone else, but going from a confident adjusted person to being manipulated and demeaned I find this cliché tiresome and boring, its like watching the old GI Joe cartoons where the Joes are getting the ass handed to them all way to the end of the show then a Joe pulls out something stupid like a toothpick and destroys Cobra in one blow. I don't see someone like Hudson who would let ANY women get over on him no matter how hot she is or how small is dick is he was wining and dining and taking names before Zoey while with Zoey now he gives a fuck, I don't buy all that bullshit by his character he would just be whatever bitch and go have a three way with different girls while she acting like an idiot around Greg. I know people are going say that is his cuckold fetish and she is just giving him what he wants I still say bullshit, she didn't have the balls to call off the wedding because she didn't want to look like the ass and now she is trying to force Hudson into doing it so she can blame the whole situation on him which is his fault but still this last chapter established how she really sees and feels for Hudson she doesn't give two shits for him its all about Greg.
This is why Jen and Mike stories the real ones not that other universe one is the goat and always will be no matter how big, how hot, how much a better lover the guy was Jen put Mike first, yep she fucked up along the way MANY times but she would turn down a Greg everyday all day if she knew Mike was in bad hurt or was super angry. Just wish Xleg could put some of that magic in his other stories and stop with making the husband or boyfriends out to be such wimps give them some balls and tell the wife fuck no you cant do that and fuck no I wont do that, and if you choose to do it anyway then bye Felica.
Hope chapter 7 builds Hudson a backbone and puts her and Greg back in their places.
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Hi xian2014--I love the GI Joe reference! I agree with you. I've read all six chapters of "Be Careful what you wish for" but I've been imagining Hudson is Mike and Zoey is Jen. I just read somewhere that Pete (xleglover) said Hudson and Zoey were Mike and Jen, just with different names. But like you pointed out near the end of your post, Jen would never treat Mike like this. Never.
Also, I agree Mike and Jen are the goats, but the real Mike and Jen, not the alternate universe Mike and Jen.
I have to say, I'm very worried and nervous if Pete (leg) rewrites the "Mike and Jen Saga". I read that he's going to. I hope he uses the real Mike and Jen and not the ones from FWFFG. That Jen was cruel to Mike. I can't see how he'll do this, though. Will he just pick things up in the Canary Islands? I can't see how it would work but I'm certainly not a writer!
I'd love to know if Mike and Jen played their "game" again in the Canaries. I think there would have to be all new lovers for Jen. I don't see how Ricky, who I hate, could come back. Jen's chosen Mike over him twice now! How could he go back to Jen a third time?? I fear Frank, who I also despise could try to get with Jen again. He connected Mike and Jen with some doctors in the Canaries and Jen might have developed feelings for Frank again for helping her out. Even though she ended with Frank before she left for the Canaries, I think Jen is weak when it comes to Frank. The only bright spot that gives me some hope is that Allie is dating Lou who used to work for Frank. I'm hoping that Lou has told Allie of Frank's evil plan to have Mike picked up by CATF again and held for up to a year. I think if Allie knew what Frank planned, she would tell Jen since they're friends again. I don't think Jen would have anything to do with Frank if she knew that.
Also, I agree Mike and Jen are the goats, but the real Mike and Jen, not the alternate universe Mike and Jen.
I have to say, I'm very worried and nervous if Pete (leg) rewrites the "Mike and Jen Saga". I read that he's going to. I hope he uses the real Mike and Jen and not the ones from FWFFG. That Jen was cruel to Mike. I can't see how he'll do this, though. Will he just pick things up in the Canary Islands? I can't see how it would work but I'm certainly not a writer!
I'd love to know if Mike and Jen played their "game" again in the Canaries. I think there would have to be all new lovers for Jen. I don't see how Ricky, who I hate, could come back. Jen's chosen Mike over him twice now! How could he go back to Jen a third time?? I fear Frank, who I also despise could try to get with Jen again. He connected Mike and Jen with some doctors in the Canaries and Jen might have developed feelings for Frank again for helping her out. Even though she ended with Frank before she left for the Canaries, I think Jen is weak when it comes to Frank. The only bright spot that gives me some hope is that Allie is dating Lou who used to work for Frank. I'm hoping that Lou has told Allie of Frank's evil plan to have Mike picked up by CATF again and held for up to a year. I think if Allie knew what Frank planned, she would tell Jen since they're friends again. I don't think Jen would have anything to do with Frank if she knew that.
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My favorite book or story "Life after we". It has intense drama and love love love it. Agree with everyone. The OG Mike and Jen are amazing. Jen loves Mike, and I love their love. Especially the love he describes in Penn state and how it translates.
I am not a big fan of FWFFG but I loved the valentine's day caging and all. I really hope if Pete (Xleg) writes about OG Mike and Jen, he brings up more chastity and humiliation and less about pregnancy and all.
Love Xleg though. No author has entertained me more than him
I am not a big fan of FWFFG but I loved the valentine's day caging and all. I really hope if Pete (Xleg) writes about OG Mike and Jen, he brings up more chastity and humiliation and less about pregnancy and all.
Love Xleg though. No author has entertained me more than him
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Hi bufaker! I love "Life After We" too! For me this is my favorite xleglover story. Because it has a very clear happy ending. I love Mike and Jen and love that they ended up together at the end of this. I wish the story had stopped there, though. I liked "Cheating & Rivals" but I absolutely HATE Frank and Ricky!!!! It's hard for me to even go back and read it again because Frank & Ricky piss me off so much!
Also, I'm not sure if it's a happy ending or not. It seems like it is, but my problem with it is did Jen stay with Mike because she loves him more than Ricky? Or just because Mike's a good father to Anna and Jen didn't want to upset her. Mike feels like he's won Jen by default. I don't know. I go back and forth on that. If Jen doesn't love Ricky, why didn't she tell him that she didn't love him.
Near the end, whenever Ricky would say "I love you", Jen wouldn't respond but her eyes would get teary. That's why it's confusing to me. I know she told him that she loved him 'like a special friend' and not like she loves Mike, but she wanted Ricky in her life as a friend with benefits. That's what she told Mike when she found out that she was pregnant just before she told Mike the whole truth about what happened in California.
That changed everything but what did she think was going to happen if she hadn't told Mike about CA? How would that have worked? Would Ricky have come around every other day or something to have sex with Jen? Wouldn't that be a poly relationship, which Mike didn't want. I could see Jen eventually leaving Mike for Ricky in that scenario.
I remember Jen telling Mike that her feelings for Ricky were just chemicals or pheromones and that's not love. And comparing the way she felt about Ricky to how she felt about chocolate. So that gives me hope that it was a happy ending, but, I'm not sure. Does Jen really love Mike more than Ricky?? Does she love Ricky at all??
Also, I'm not sure if it's a happy ending or not. It seems like it is, but my problem with it is did Jen stay with Mike because she loves him more than Ricky? Or just because Mike's a good father to Anna and Jen didn't want to upset her. Mike feels like he's won Jen by default. I don't know. I go back and forth on that. If Jen doesn't love Ricky, why didn't she tell him that she didn't love him.
Near the end, whenever Ricky would say "I love you", Jen wouldn't respond but her eyes would get teary. That's why it's confusing to me. I know she told him that she loved him 'like a special friend' and not like she loves Mike, but she wanted Ricky in her life as a friend with benefits. That's what she told Mike when she found out that she was pregnant just before she told Mike the whole truth about what happened in California.
That changed everything but what did she think was going to happen if she hadn't told Mike about CA? How would that have worked? Would Ricky have come around every other day or something to have sex with Jen? Wouldn't that be a poly relationship, which Mike didn't want. I could see Jen eventually leaving Mike for Ricky in that scenario.
I remember Jen telling Mike that her feelings for Ricky were just chemicals or pheromones and that's not love. And comparing the way she felt about Ricky to how she felt about chocolate. So that gives me hope that it was a happy ending, but, I'm not sure. Does Jen really love Mike more than Ricky?? Does she love Ricky at all??
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Hello DaveMartens34, I think after the revelation of CA it changed Mike he feels like you said won Jen back by default, would Jen have come back if Ricky wasn't going to get deployed? that thought is now planted on Mike's brain plus Jen waited until after she was pregnant to tell Mike the CA story which more entranced the thought into Mike's brain, plus the constant hooking up with Ricky behind Mike's back did not help either. Jen moving to Canary Island that won't change her thoughts on Ricky especially since she is having Ricky's child, the whole pregnancy thing with these stories are a whole another dislike for me there are so many problems with this that I don't even want to go into. I do believe Mike is on different level now when it comes to this fantasy I think he has more control on what he will tolerate and how much, Mike has already established that he will dump her if he needs to also Jen knows she has got a lot of work to rebuild the trust between her and Mike but I think Mike will never really trust her and that he will remain some what defensive and protective of himself. Far as Frank is concerned I think that ship has sailed Jen lost the feelings for Frank when Ricky came into the picture and I don't Mike wants to play that game again, I believe Mike has become the game master again.
When it comes to FWFFG I to hated that whole series and the one that followed that Jen was never faithful so not sure how the title was Faithful Wife Fall From Grace that Jen was nothing more then a toxic piece of crap. No person other then fiction would have put up with her shit.
If Pete re boots Jen and Mike series HFMG all the way to Cheating and Rivals and goes the way of FWFFG for me it will just be an alternative universe and I will not read it. The Jen and Mike universe had gotten me mad and happy but like I said the connection for the characters never waned they were constant all the way through the stories even with the up and downs. I feel Mike and Jen talked through what they wanted and made rules sure Jen was breaking them or bending them but never without consulting Mike first like the wedding ring debacle, when Jen told Mike that she did not need to ask permission to be with whoever she wanted, they sat down like adults on the couch and hashed it out she did not get Mike in bed like Zoey or the other Jen and get him into a super arousal state then tell him what they want and what there going to do then throw it back in his face when they do it and say you agreed to it that is the same equivalency of getting someone high or drunk then convince them do something they know would not do if they were in a different state.
I wouldn't mind a continuing adventure starting from the Canary Island with this Mike and Jen but ONLY if he keeps the same formula of that Jen and Mike that he developed from the beginning. The only things that I have read from Pete since HFMG series that I liked and felt a connection for the characters has been Pandora's Box and Tiny Dancer.
When it comes to FWFFG I to hated that whole series and the one that followed that Jen was never faithful so not sure how the title was Faithful Wife Fall From Grace that Jen was nothing more then a toxic piece of crap. No person other then fiction would have put up with her shit.
If Pete re boots Jen and Mike series HFMG all the way to Cheating and Rivals and goes the way of FWFFG for me it will just be an alternative universe and I will not read it. The Jen and Mike universe had gotten me mad and happy but like I said the connection for the characters never waned they were constant all the way through the stories even with the up and downs. I feel Mike and Jen talked through what they wanted and made rules sure Jen was breaking them or bending them but never without consulting Mike first like the wedding ring debacle, when Jen told Mike that she did not need to ask permission to be with whoever she wanted, they sat down like adults on the couch and hashed it out she did not get Mike in bed like Zoey or the other Jen and get him into a super arousal state then tell him what they want and what there going to do then throw it back in his face when they do it and say you agreed to it that is the same equivalency of getting someone high or drunk then convince them do something they know would not do if they were in a different state.
I wouldn't mind a continuing adventure starting from the Canary Island with this Mike and Jen but ONLY if he keeps the same formula of that Jen and Mike that he developed from the beginning. The only things that I have read from Pete since HFMG series that I liked and felt a connection for the characters has been Pandora's Box and Tiny Dancer.
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Hello DaveMartens34, I think after the revelation of CA it changed Mike he feels like you said won Jen back by default, would Jen have come back if Ricky wasn't going to get deployed? that thought is now planted on Mike's brain plus Jen waited until after she was pregnant to tell Mike the CA story which more entranced the thought into Mike's brain, plus the constant hooking up with Ricky behind Mike's back did not help either. Jen moving to Canary Island that won't change her thoughts on Ricky especially since she is having Ricky's child, the whole pregnancy thing with these stories are a whole another dislike for me there are so many problems with this that I don't even want to go into. I do believe Mike is on different level now when it comes to this fantasy I think he has more control on what he will tolerate and how much, Mike has already established that he will dump her if he needs to also Jen knows she has got a lot of work to rebuild the trust between her and Mike but I think Mike will never really trust her and that he will remain some what defensive and protective of himself. Far as Frank is concerned I think that ship has sailed Jen lost the feelings for Frank when Ricky came into the picture and I don't Mike wants to play that game again, I believe Mike has become the game master again.
When it comes to FWFFG I to hated that whole series and the one that followed that Jen was never faithful so not sure how the title was Faithful Wife Fall From Grace that Jen was nothing more then a toxic piece of crap. No person other then fiction would have put up with her shit.
If Pete re boots Jen and Mike series HFMG all the way to Cheating and Rivals and goes the way of FWFFG for me it will just be an alternative universe and I will not read it. The Jen and Mike universe had gotten me mad and happy but like I said the connection for the characters never waned they were constant all the way through the stories even with the up and downs. I feel Mike and Jen talked through what they wanted and made rules sure Jen was breaking them or bending them but never without consulting Mike first like the wedding ring debacle, when Jen told Mike that she did not need to ask permission to be with whoever she wanted, they sat down like adults on the couch and hashed it out she did not get Mike in bed like Zoey or the other Jen and get him into a super arousal state then tell him what they want and what there going to do then throw it back in his face when they do it and say you agreed to it that is the same equivalency of getting someone high or drunk then convince them do something they know would not do if they were in a different state.
I wouldn't mind a continuing adventure starting from the Canary Island with this Mike and Jen but ONLY if he keeps the same formula of that Jen and Mike that he developed from the beginning. The only things that I have read from Pete since HFMG series that I liked and felt a connection for the characters has been Pandora's Box and Tiny Dancer.
When it comes to FWFFG I to hated that whole series and the one that followed that Jen was never faithful so not sure how the title was Faithful Wife Fall From Grace that Jen was nothing more then a toxic piece of crap. No person other then fiction would have put up with her shit.
If Pete re boots Jen and Mike series HFMG all the way to Cheating and Rivals and goes the way of FWFFG for me it will just be an alternative universe and I will not read it. The Jen and Mike universe had gotten me mad and happy but like I said the connection for the characters never waned they were constant all the way through the stories even with the up and downs. I feel Mike and Jen talked through what they wanted and made rules sure Jen was breaking them or bending them but never without consulting Mike first like the wedding ring debacle, when Jen told Mike that she did not need to ask permission to be with whoever she wanted, they sat down like adults on the couch and hashed it out she did not get Mike in bed like Zoey or the other Jen and get him into a super arousal state then tell him what they want and what there going to do then throw it back in his face when they do it and say you agreed to it that is the same equivalency of getting someone high or drunk then convince them do something they know would not do if they were in a different state.
I wouldn't mind a continuing adventure starting from the Canary Island with this Mike and Jen but ONLY if he keeps the same formula of that Jen and Mike that he developed from the beginning. The only things that I have read from Pete since HFMG series that I liked and felt a connection for the characters has been Pandora's Box and Tiny Dancer.
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We seem to think pretty similar about Mike & Jen. I don't like the pregnancy stuff, either. And I would love it if Pete (xleglover) would pick up the story in the Canary Islands and keep the same formula. Anything like an alternate universe Mike & Jen I wouldn't like, but I'd still read it.
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Writing this story by "direction" isn't conducive to an artist's creativity, will lead to his burnout, and won't be helpful to the quality of his work, in my humble opinion.
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Hi Dreamweaver! That's very interesting. Thanks for your opinion! I'm not an author so I am looking for any and all opinions on this. I'm severely addicted to the original Mike & Jen story starting with "HFMG" through "Cheating & Rivals". I realize that it's xleglovers older work and it's very hard to find people to talk about it with, but I can't get it out of my head. I know Mike & Jen are fictional characters but I am constantly finding myself thinking of them as real people.
I'd like to get your opinion (and anyone else's opinion) on something that has recently popped into my head: towards the end of "Cheating & Rivals" after Jen finally told Mike the whole truth about what happened in California, she takes Anna to a rally for Jasmine Kelly. She ends things with Frank at the rally. Afterwards, Frank finds Ricky and asks to talk with him and Ricky stands up to Frank (which I'm sure Frank wasn't used to) basically telling Frank to F-O. I'm wondering what Frank wanted to talk to Ricky about? Jen had already told him that it was over, so I'm not sure what Frank hoped to accomplish by talking to Ricky? I'm also worried that Jen won't be able to stay strong if Frank comes to the Canary Islands to visit her to check on Anna's recuperation. I'm afraid Jen will fall under Frank's spell again. (Again, I realize these are all fictional characters, but I can't get this story out of my head.)
Thanks for reading this!
I'd like to get your opinion (and anyone else's opinion) on something that has recently popped into my head: towards the end of "Cheating & Rivals" after Jen finally told Mike the whole truth about what happened in California, she takes Anna to a rally for Jasmine Kelly. She ends things with Frank at the rally. Afterwards, Frank finds Ricky and asks to talk with him and Ricky stands up to Frank (which I'm sure Frank wasn't used to) basically telling Frank to F-O. I'm wondering what Frank wanted to talk to Ricky about? Jen had already told him that it was over, so I'm not sure what Frank hoped to accomplish by talking to Ricky? I'm also worried that Jen won't be able to stay strong if Frank comes to the Canary Islands to visit her to check on Anna's recuperation. I'm afraid Jen will fall under Frank's spell again. (Again, I realize these are all fictional characters, but I can't get this story out of my head.)
Thanks for reading this!
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I know a lot of people have said this in various forms, but I'd love to see a release of "He Fucked My Girl" on Kindle. It was sad to see it go from literotica, and count me among the fans who are 100% ok with Pete/xleglover getting paid for the entertainment.
It could even be an overpriced edition for 6 months for the superfans, and then discounted later. But why not? It's an absolute classic of the genre and deserves to live on.
It could even be an overpriced edition for 6 months for the superfans, and then discounted later. But why not? It's an absolute classic of the genre and deserves to live on.
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I believe it was Raymond Chandler writing The Big Sleep (could be wrong), he's giving this interview after the book is released and one guy is like, "what was the deal with the man who was murdered in his car by the ocean" and Raymond pauses a moment and says something like "Oh yeah, I forgot about that". Turned out it didn't fit into anything at all but was left in the book.DaveMartens34 wrote: ↑Wed Dec 04, 2024 3:06 amHi Dreamweaver! That's very interesting. Thanks for your opinion! I'm not an author so I am looking for any and all opinions on this. I'm severely addicted to the original Mike & Jen story starting with "HFMG" through "Cheating & Rivals". I realize that it's xleglovers older work and it's very hard to find people to talk about it with, but I can't get it out of my head. I know Mike & Jen are fictional characters but I am constantly finding myself thinking of them as real people.
I'd like to get your opinion (and anyone else's opinion) on something that has recently popped into my head: towards the end of "Cheating & Rivals" after Jen finally told Mike the whole truth about what happened in California, she takes Anna to a rally for Jasmine Kelly. She ends things with Frank at the rally. Afterwards, Frank finds Ricky and asks to talk with him and Ricky stands up to Frank (which I'm sure Frank wasn't used to) basically telling Frank to F-O. I'm wondering what Frank wanted to talk to Ricky about? Jen had already told him that it was over, so I'm not sure what Frank hoped to accomplish by talking to Ricky? I'm also worried that Jen won't be able to stay strong if Frank comes to the Canary Islands to visit her to check on Anna's recuperation. I'm afraid Jen will fall under Frank's spell again. (Again, I realize these are all fictional characters, but I can't get this story out of my head.)
Thanks for reading this!
Anyway, you have a really good memory of his stuff, for sure!
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Where it all began. Just goes to show the power of of a great story even though little things violate "all the rules" like it goes from the 1st person in story 1 to the 3rd person in followups, etc.turbulentdreams wrote: ↑Wed Dec 04, 2024 1:23 pmI know a lot of people have said this in various forms, but I'd love to see a release of "He Fucked My Girl" on Kindle. It was sad to see it go from literotica, and count me among the fans who are 100% ok with Pete/xleglover getting paid for the entertainment.
It could even be an overpriced edition for 6 months for the superfans, and then discounted later. But why not? It's an absolute classic of the genre and deserves to live on.
"The Unaffordable Vacation" is another great one that the author basically submitted and admitted it needed some editing but he didn't care. So it gets a little confusing at points, but it's still very good, even raw.
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Thanks! I've been debating "Cheating & Rivals" in my head almost daily since I first read it on Literotica years ago. It's filled with so much angst that it's almost too much at times! I love the OG Mike & Jen and I love xleglover (Pete) so unless I ever get the opportunity to talk to Pete, I guess the debate will continue. Thanks!Dream Weaver wrote: ↑Wed Dec 04, 2024 3:15 pmI believe it was Raymond Chandler writing The Big Sleep (could be wrong), he's giving this interview after the book is released and one guy is like, "what was the deal with the man who was murdered in his car by the ocean" and Raymond pauses a moment and says something like "Oh yeah, I forgot about that". Turned out it didn't fit into anything at all but was left in the book.DaveMartens34 wrote: ↑Wed Dec 04, 2024 3:06 amHi Dreamweaver! That's very interesting. Thanks for your opinion! I'm not an author so I am looking for any and all opinions on this. I'm severely addicted to the original Mike & Jen story starting with "HFMG" through "Cheating & Rivals". I realize that it's xleglovers older work and it's very hard to find people to talk about it with, but I can't get it out of my head. I know Mike & Jen are fictional characters but I am constantly finding myself thinking of them as real people.
I'd like to get your opinion (and anyone else's opinion) on something that has recently popped into my head: towards the end of "Cheating & Rivals" after Jen finally told Mike the whole truth about what happened in California, she takes Anna to a rally for Jasmine Kelly. She ends things with Frank at the rally. Afterwards, Frank finds Ricky and asks to talk with him and Ricky stands up to Frank (which I'm sure Frank wasn't used to) basically telling Frank to F-O. I'm wondering what Frank wanted to talk to Ricky about? Jen had already told him that it was over, so I'm not sure what Frank hoped to accomplish by talking to Ricky? I'm also worried that Jen won't be able to stay strong if Frank comes to the Canary Islands to visit her to check on Anna's recuperation. I'm afraid Jen will fall under Frank's spell again. (Again, I realize these are all fictional characters, but I can't get this story out of my head.)
Thanks for reading this!
Anyway, you have a really good memory of his stuff, for sure!
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Hi Dreamweaver! Is "The Unaffordable Vacation" by xleglover (Pete Andrews)? I'd love to check it out even if I have to pay for it. I also have no problem with Pete (xleglover) getting paid for his work. I love his writing!Dream Weaver wrote: ↑Wed Dec 04, 2024 3:17 pmWhere it all began. Just goes to show the power of of a great story even though little things violate "all the rules" like it goes from the 1st person in story 1 to the 3rd person in followups, etc.turbulentdreams wrote: ↑Wed Dec 04, 2024 1:23 pmI know a lot of people have said this in various forms, but I'd love to see a release of "He Fucked My Girl" on Kindle. It was sad to see it go from literotica, and count me among the fans who are 100% ok with Pete/xleglover getting paid for the entertainment.
It could even be an overpriced edition for 6 months for the superfans, and then discounted later. But why not? It's an absolute classic of the genre and deserves to live on.
"The Unaffordable Vacation" is another great one that the author basically submitted and admitted it needed some editing but he didn't care. So it gets a little confusing at points, but it's still very good, even raw.
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Hi turbulentdreams! I love your idea! I remember HFMG because it was the first story by xleglover that I ever read. This is when I first fell in love with Mike and Jen. I remember it being very hard to read, at least it was for me. I love this genre but I had to keep walking away and coming back to my computer. So much delicious angst!! Wasn't Jen basically living with Ricky for a time in this one? She went to Cancun and came home to Mike and Mike threw her wedding rings out the window, I think. I consider myself a Mike & Jen superfan so I'd pay for it on Kindle.turbulentdreams wrote: ↑Wed Dec 04, 2024 1:23 pmI know a lot of people have said this in various forms, but I'd love to see a release of "He Fucked My Girl" on Kindle. It was sad to see it go from literotica, and count me among the fans who are 100% ok with Pete/xleglover getting paid for the entertainment.
It could even be an overpriced edition for 6 months for the superfans, and then discounted later. But why not? It's an absolute classic of the genre and deserves to live on.
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Just google The Unaffordable Vacation Literotica and it should pop up. Not xLeg's at all, but a genre classic.DaveMartens34 wrote: ↑Thu Dec 05, 2024 5:01 amHi Dreamweaver! Is "The Unaffordable Vacation" by xleglover (Pete Andrews)? I'd love to check it out even if I have to pay for it. I also have no problem with Pete (xleglover) getting paid for his work. I love his writing!Dream Weaver wrote: ↑Wed Dec 04, 2024 3:17 pmWhere it all began. Just goes to show the power of of a great story even though little things violate "all the rules" like it goes from the 1st person in story 1 to the 3rd person in followups, etc.turbulentdreams wrote: ↑Wed Dec 04, 2024 1:23 pmI know a lot of people have said this in various forms, but I'd love to see a release of "He Fucked My Girl" on Kindle. It was sad to see it go from literotica, and count me among the fans who are 100% ok with Pete/xleglover getting paid for the entertainment.
It could even be an overpriced edition for 6 months for the superfans, and then discounted later. But why not? It's an absolute classic of the genre and deserves to live on.
"The Unaffordable Vacation" is another great one that the author basically submitted and admitted it needed some editing but he didn't care. So it gets a little confusing at points, but it's still very good, even raw.
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https ://web.archive.org/web/20170228161 ... ed-my-girlturbulentdreams wrote: ↑Wed Dec 04, 2024 1:23 pmI know a lot of people have said this in various forms, but I'd love to see a release of "He Fucked My Girl" on Kindle. It was sad to see it go from literotica, and count me among the fans who are 100% ok with Pete/xleglover getting paid for the entertainment.
It could even be an overpriced edition for 6 months for the superfans, and then discounted later. But why not? It's an absolute classic of the genre and deserves to live on.