Pivotal Point

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stevep220
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Pivotal Point

Unread post by stevep220 » Mon Mar 14, 2016 6:03 am

As a bull who has been in a few cuckold relationships I was excited to read the latest installment. It is a good turning point for Jen and mike and for Frank. What many people do not seem to understand is that despite Jen's apparent lack of caring for mike, she does in fact love him very much. And in turn mike loves Jen very much. What their relationship involves is a cuckold dynamic where each of them has sexual desires and ambitions outside the "vanilla envelope". mike indeed craves both his humiliation at he hands of the dominant male and is now coming to understand that he needs a certain level of sexual humiliation from his beautiful and intelligent wife. Hence, the discussion between Jen and mike about his submission and bottoming to Frank. Also, Jen is coming to terms as well with her need to submit, to be owned by a powerful, dominant, alpha male and at the same with the sexual arousal that come for her through mikes submission to her and bottoming to Frank. She is aroused not just through sexual contact with Frank, but also by the mental stimulation of having her husband, ask her alpha lover for permission that she may cum with him. We have seen glimmers of wonderful cuckold rituals beginning to blossom with mike and Jen. We have seen mike kneel and worship Malcolm with Jen and the excitement she felt when Mal cummed on mike, or how hot Jen got as mike kissed and worshiped Jen's bottom while Frank was buried inside of her.

I expect that mike's coming to terms with this aspect of his cuckolding will become more paramount for mike and Jen as a couple. For many cuckold couples the ritual of the wife being seated as the husband kneels and feeds from her vagina immediately following intercourse with her boyfriend is a symbol of the cuckold triad. I for one enjoy that very much, watching the husband feed on her she has been filled is a show of power for me and the wife and a symbol of submission for the husband.

Likewise, it is exciting that Jenny has begun to understand and to become to terms with the fact that Frank is breeding her. Again, a significant aspect of a cuckold dynamic is not the simple as of cheating or sex, it is based on the dynamic of a power exchange. The husband who should be the wife's alpha lover has ceded that power to another more powerful, masculine male. The male, as in all areas of "nature" becomes the one to not simply pleasure the female, but in fact to mount and breed her. As in a "wolf pack", Frank is the alpha male and mike a simple beta. For a masculine male like Frank, or myself, pushing off another male - exerting dominance not just over the female, but over the other males in the pack is exhilarating. So in turn, pushing mike back, and having him figurative and literally watch as Jen is mounted and bred is insanely exciting. And in the case of mike - he wants and needs this!

Some areas I would love to see explored - 1) how the game is pretty much always a part of the Andrew's lives now. The game is not a game anymore, but rather the way that both Jen and mike go through life; 2) some work which shows how mike and Jen do really love each other. Most cuckold couples have a very close bond which thrives on their sexual proclivities and incredible openness; 3) Movement in the story which shows how mike is learning to expose his innermost desires, submitting to Jen and in turn agreeing to let go to a degree where he meets her need for him to bottom to Frank; 4) some work which shows that indeed mike is not a simple sub - some chapters that include portions that show mike as a the complicated character he is: Mike is smart! Mike is not a total sub except in the sexual setting with Jen. He has a dominant side in the work area and I think for peeps who have not played in this scene it is important for them to see and feel if possible the contradiction in mike; and 5) please "X", a beautiful, long scene filled with imagery depicting mike's acceptance of Frank as Jen's primary lover, culminating with him finally kneeling before Jen immediately after she has been bred by Frank. Mike cleaning and worshiping her vagina and ass as Frank watches and as Frank provides encouragement for the couple.

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Re: Pivotal Point

Unread post by pumachug » Tue Mar 15, 2016 7:41 am

stevep220 wrote:4) some work which shows that indeed mike is not a simple sub - some chapters that include portions that show mike as a the complicated character he is: Mike is smart! Mike is not a total sub except in the sexual setting with Jen. He has a dominant side in the work area and I think for peeps who have not played in this scene it is important for them to see and feel if possible the contradiction in mike
You mean like mike becoming the dominant leader on the computer project--a roll he was made to fill? I think for me that would begin to balance the scales a bit so that he looks a little less pitiful.

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