The Landlord
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Thank you again. I'm just a bit sad now it's all over!
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As has been said, a true Masterpiece. A journey to relish. If I have read better erotica, I really can't remember when.
You should consider monetizing your writing, Frenchie. This is very classy work indeed.
You should consider monetizing your writing, Frenchie. This is very classy work indeed.
Me: You’re probably a better fuck than his wife.
Her: I’m probably a better fuck than most people’s wives.
Our crazy journey: viewtopic.php?f=5&t=65359
Her: I’m probably a better fuck than most people’s wives.
Our crazy journey: viewtopic.php?f=5&t=65359
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It was great while it lasted but you have had the grace and sense to make it have an ending. Some threads go on unmercifully. Thank you once again.
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Masterpiece my friend. You kept us riveted. Thank you.
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Thanks for sharing this story.
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Great story. Thank you
Our story: Kendall Swan opens up her marriage (& her legs) viewtopic.php?f=9&t=64321
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Hello,
As I haven't always taken the time to do so, I'd like once again to thank all those who have encouraged me throughout the publication of this long story.
These encouragements have been a source of great joy and satisfaction.
I know that the story hasn't always gone the way some people expected, but I want you to know that for me too, it has deviated from what I originally intended.
Initially, I wanted to tell the story of a young couple who fell into the hands of a perverted landlord who used his power and money to compromise young Jennifer and abuse her beautiful body.
But, as is often the case, the characters seem to emancipate themselves from the author and, almost unbeknownst to me, this story became the one you read.
I'm quite pleased with it, though.
And to answer the question:
No, it's not my story, it's definitely 100% fiction.
No, this story is not inspired by my life either.
However, the time will come when I'll tell you my real story, because you might like it, because, indeed, I've had a taste of cukolding IRL...
More to come...
As I haven't always taken the time to do so, I'd like once again to thank all those who have encouraged me throughout the publication of this long story.
These encouragements have been a source of great joy and satisfaction.
I know that the story hasn't always gone the way some people expected, but I want you to know that for me too, it has deviated from what I originally intended.
Initially, I wanted to tell the story of a young couple who fell into the hands of a perverted landlord who used his power and money to compromise young Jennifer and abuse her beautiful body.
But, as is often the case, the characters seem to emancipate themselves from the author and, almost unbeknownst to me, this story became the one you read.
I'm quite pleased with it, though.
And to answer the question:
No, it's not my story, it's definitely 100% fiction.
No, this story is not inspired by my life either.
However, the time will come when I'll tell you my real story, because you might like it, because, indeed, I've had a taste of cukolding IRL...
More to come...
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Frenchie - I find it fascinating that your story went in a different direction than you originally planned. I think this is a somewhat common occurrence with the act of creation of art, be it literature, music, sculpture, or whatever. The work sometimes seems to take on a life and a direction of its own. It is as if the creator doesn’t so much “make” art but rather ”reveals” art.
I must confess that part way in I began to wonder if the main thrust of the story would be David becoming obsessed about the paternity issue, then doing a test, and the downfall that occurred when results were revealed and Delange become aware that the terms of their agreement were violated. Honestly, I was very glad it did not go that way. The way the story took was, for me, more unexpected, surprising and delightful.
John Jasson’s comment above is spot on - your work was really first rate. I was eagerly checking for updates WAY too often! I do hope to read about your real life experiences some time soon!
I must confess that part way in I began to wonder if the main thrust of the story would be David becoming obsessed about the paternity issue, then doing a test, and the downfall that occurred when results were revealed and Delange become aware that the terms of their agreement were violated. Honestly, I was very glad it did not go that way. The way the story took was, for me, more unexpected, surprising and delightful.
John Jasson’s comment above is spot on - your work was really first rate. I was eagerly checking for updates WAY too often! I do hope to read about your real life experiences some time soon!
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I loved the story. You are an excellent writer. Thank you for the time that you put into writing your story and sharing it with us. I really appreciate you!!!
Mr. Swan
Mr. Swan
Our story: Kendall Swan opens up her marriage (& her legs) viewtopic.php?f=9&t=64321
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I loved the story from start to finish. Well done!
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please do tell your story! soon!However, the time will come when I'll tell you my real story, because you might like it, because, indeed, I've had a taste of cukolding IRL...
More to come...
In my Universe, any question may be asked.... But, answers are always optional.
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It's in progress...
Thanks again to all of you !
Thanks again to all of you !
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Super work. Bravo! I look forward to the more autobiographical account.
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It would be hot to read the same story again but this time from Jennifer’s point of view. Hell I’d also like to read it from DeLanges point of view, the way he felt when he first saw her, and how he plotted and planned to get between her legs and get her hooked.