The Landlord

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Re: The Landlord

Unread post by Johng1953 » Wed May 29, 2024 6:44 am

Thank you again. I'm just a bit sad now it's all over!

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Re: The Landlord

Unread post by john jasson » Wed May 29, 2024 10:22 am

As has been said, a true Masterpiece. A journey to relish. If I have read better erotica, I really can't remember when.

You should consider monetizing your writing, Frenchie. This is very classy work indeed.
Me: You’re probably a better fuck than his wife.
Her: I’m probably a better fuck than most people’s wives.
Our crazy journey: viewtopic.php?f=5&t=65359

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Re: The Landlord

Unread post by Gulfcpl » Wed May 29, 2024 6:02 pm

It was great while it lasted but you have had the grace and sense to make it have an ending. Some threads go on unmercifully. Thank you once again.

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Re: The Landlord

Unread post by antidote2909 » Wed May 29, 2024 8:01 pm

Masterpiece my friend. You kept us riveted. Thank you.

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Re: The Landlord

Unread post by Cornudo1960 » Thu May 30, 2024 2:14 am

Thanks for sharing this story.

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Re: The Landlord

Unread post by Shauncuckold » Thu May 30, 2024 6:52 am

Great story. Thank you
Our story: Kendall Swan opens up her marriage (& her legs) viewtopic.php?f=9&t=64321

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Re: The Landlord

Unread post by Frenchie » Fri May 31, 2024 6:06 am

Hello,
As I haven't always taken the time to do so, I'd like once again to thank all those who have encouraged me throughout the publication of this long story.
These encouragements have been a source of great joy and satisfaction.


I know that the story hasn't always gone the way some people expected, but I want you to know that for me too, it has deviated from what I originally intended.


Initially, I wanted to tell the story of a young couple who fell into the hands of a perverted landlord who used his power and money to compromise young Jennifer and abuse her beautiful body.
But, as is often the case, the characters seem to emancipate themselves from the author and, almost unbeknownst to me, this story became the one you read.

I'm quite pleased with it, though.


And to answer the question:
No, it's not my story, it's definitely 100% fiction.
No, this story is not inspired by my life either.

However, the time will come when I'll tell you my real story, because you might like it, because, indeed, I've had a taste of cukolding IRL...

More to come... ;)

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Re: The Landlord

Unread post by thinman » Fri May 31, 2024 6:33 am

Frenchie - I find it fascinating that your story went in a different direction than you originally planned. I think this is a somewhat common occurrence with the act of creation of art, be it literature, music, sculpture, or whatever. The work sometimes seems to take on a life and a direction of its own. It is as if the creator doesn’t so much “make” art but rather ”reveals” art.

I must confess that part way in I began to wonder if the main thrust of the story would be David becoming obsessed about the paternity issue, then doing a test, and the downfall that occurred when results were revealed and Delange become aware that the terms of their agreement were violated. Honestly, I was very glad it did not go that way. The way the story took was, for me, more unexpected, surprising and delightful.

John Jasson’s comment above is spot on - your work was really first rate. I was eagerly checking for updates WAY too often! I do hope to read about your real life experiences some time soon!

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Re: The Landlord

Unread post by Shauncuckold » Fri May 31, 2024 9:43 am

I loved the story. You are an excellent writer. Thank you for the time that you put into writing your story and sharing it with us. I really appreciate you!!!

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Re: The Landlord

Unread post by Oneillfranko » Mon Jun 03, 2024 1:36 pm

I loved the story from start to finish. Well done!

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Re: The Landlord

Unread post by antidote2909 » Tue Jun 04, 2024 9:14 am

Beautiful

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Re: The Landlord

Unread post by sdbuffalo » Tue Jun 04, 2024 9:38 am

However, the time will come when I'll tell you my real story, because you might like it, because, indeed, I've had a taste of cukolding IRL...

More to come... ;)
please do tell your story! soon!
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Re: The Landlord

Unread post by Frenchie » Wed Jun 12, 2024 6:00 am

It's in progress... ;)


Thanks again to all of you !

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Re: The Landlord

Unread post by Johng1953 » Wed Jun 12, 2024 1:55 pm

Frenchie wrote:
Wed Jun 12, 2024 6:00 am
It's in progress... ;)


Thanks again to all of you !
No, thank you!

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Re: The Landlord

Unread post by whosbeensleeping » Mon Jun 17, 2024 8:39 pm

Super work. Bravo! I look forward to the more autobiographical account.

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Re: The Landlord

Unread post by brett917 » Fri Oct 25, 2024 10:41 am

It would be hot to read the same story again but this time from Jennifer’s point of view. Hell I’d also like to read it from DeLanges point of view, the way he felt when he first saw her, and how he plotted and planned to get between her legs and get her hooked.

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