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Unread post by SamWarrens » Fri May 24, 2019 4:54 am

Further complications with my heart.
3 of the 4 metal wire holding my chest together have broken from coughing.
Pretty sure I have to go back under the knife to repair it.
Means a longer stay in hospital and a delay in getting back to the story.
I have a really sexy plot line for Bill to experience. Really want to get it down.
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Unread post by SamWarrens » Fri May 24, 2019 4:54 am

Further complications with my heart.
3 of the 4 metal wire holding my chest together have broken from coughing.
Pretty sure I have to go back under the knife to repair it.
Means a longer stay in hospital and a delay in getting back to the story.
I have a really sexy plot line for Bill to experience. Really want to get it down.
Great minds may think alike, but fools seldom differ.

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Re: Winners and Losers

Unread post by aguy4pleasure » Fri May 24, 2019 5:06 am

Sam, I'm a heart patient as well. I'm two years out from my triple bypass. I wish you well with your recovery.

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Re: Winners and Losers

Unread post by SamWarrens » Fri May 24, 2019 5:33 am

2 years post op!
I'm dreaming about those days to come!
Thanks for the words of encouragement.
We will hang in there.
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Unread post by subtoall » Fri May 24, 2019 10:25 am

All the best to you Sam for a speedy recovery.

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Unread post by wingman » Tue Jun 04, 2019 8:56 pm

Focus on what’s important! Get well, chill, and enjoy each day from here out!
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Unread post by SamWarrens » Wed Jun 12, 2019 3:01 pm

I'm in hospital again. Surgery scheduled for next week.
Won't text here until its over.
I will be back.
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Unread post by wingman » Wed Jun 12, 2019 7:00 pm

Good luck Sam!!!!!
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Unread post by goodjob » Fri Jun 14, 2019 3:11 pm

Hope you have a speedy recovery! Nothing worse than being laid up in a hospital.
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God speed Sammy

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Winners & Losers Chapter 11
By Sam Warrens
Copyright July 3, 2019

Bill

“Well how do you like that?” I said to no one in particular. “Rats and sinking ships come to mind”

“Duke, I don’t recommend we stay here while we wait to arrange transport and Visas etcetera for the girls. There might be more of the bandit gang to come looking for us.” I said.

“I agree. We should leave too” Duke replied.

We rounded up the three women, packed their few possessions and headed to the garage. Marcus had left us only one six seater jeep for the eight of us. It would be cozy but we could manage,

We decided to head for the capital, Havana, to get the papers we needed to exit Cuba and get into Canada. Duke’s contacts proved invaluable, but it still took three weeks of bureaucratic run around to get everything sorted out and obtain airline tickets – longest three weeks of my life.

Two days later we were on a jet bound for Toronto and my Annie

I could hardly wait.

As I settled into my seat I began to relax for the first time in weeks. No one was trying to kill me, the girls were safe, I closed my eyes for a second.

The next thing I knew I was home and seeing Anne at the gate. We went home and I couldn’t wait to get her in bed. It had been so long.

Her blonde locks were spread out on the bed, her legs were spread open in anticipation. I sank my hard throbbing cock into her and rejoiced at the sensation. Like fucking warm honey as I pumped in and out of her warm pussy.

Suddenly there was a lurch and I was no longer on top of my wife. As I came to I realized that I was no longer at home. I had been redressed and found myself tied to a chair. A straight backed chair with arms, built solidly. I couldn’t move.

Annie was laid on her back on a simple bed. There was some one with her. He was huge and he was black. It was Marcus Masters. He was naked as well.

He turned to look at me and without saying a word, just sneering at me, he plunged his cock into Annie’s wet quim. She gasped, and cried out “My gawd he’s so big! OOOHHH I’m cumming! ARRRGGGH. So full!!”

The reality was he was only half way in to her. His enormous cock left six inches outside of her pussy. He drew back and shoved forward to put another two inches inside her already stuffed pussy. “OOOHH my gawd! Big, big – he’s filling me up! Oh Bill it feels so good! So good. I’m cumming again. Ohhh Bill! You never fucked me like this!”

In spite of myself my cock was rock hard in my pants. I was leaking pre cum and barely holding back from ejaculating in my pants as he fucked my wife.

Another withdrawal and thrust and two more inches of that humongous cock slid into Annie “AAAGGGHH” she cried out “He’s so deep! So good, oh baby! Bill, oh Bill he’s so deep in my pussy. Cumming again and again and again! I can’t stop cumming!”

He withdrew one more time and rammed home the whole twelve inches of his cock “OOOHH my Lord! Deep, deep. So big, so big AAAHHH.” Her Back arched as her body was wracked with another massive orgasm.

Fully seated in her pussy, Marcus began to seriously fuck Annie. His phallus rubbed her G-spot on the way in and the way out, producing near continuous orgasms for her. She was moaning and wailing non stop as he fucked her over and over. Nearly 30 minutes he pumped her ravaged pussy before I saw him begin to tense up and start to cum. It was a sight to behold. He cam over and over, filling her vaginal cavity to the brim and then continuing for an additional half dozen spurts.

I could resist no longer, I came in my pants. I could feel the spurts in my jockey shorts, wet and thick and more than I had cum in a long time.

Marcus, did not stop there. Without removing his cock, he roller Annie over so that she was face down on the bed with her ass in the air and he began to fuck her again. “OOOHH my God!” Annie cried. “He’s even deeper than before, Bill . So thick, he’s splitting me pussy in two! OOHH Bil, he’s so wonderful, I never want him to stop! She came again and again on his thick monster cock.

For the next two and a half hours he pumped her pussy fill of his seed into her unprotected pussy, surely making her pregnant again. He came three more times, filling her vagina each time. I came in my pants twice.

Annie was calling out to me, “Bill, Bill Oh Bill, he’s so good Bill”

“Bill. Bill wake up. Bill, Bill!” I was shaken awake by Janeen. “We’ve landed. Its time to get off the plane.” She said gruffly.

I tossed off the blanket that had bee covering me and noticed that there was a big wet spot on the front of my pants. I had cum those three times for real. Nothing for it but to just walk off the plane and clean up in the terminal.

First the humiliation of going through Customs and the smirks of the Customs officer who wanted to know if I had anything to declare.. anything at all.

“Nothing in particular officer. “ I replied and was cleared.

Have you ever tried to a) remove dried cum from anything and b) remove your dick from a wad of dried cum. First, Its like dried crazy glue and second it hurts like hell because it is stuck so tight.

It took me about half an hour to mostly get it off. I threw the underwear in the garbage and went commando. There was still a stain on the front of my pants, but it was less noticeable now.

I wanted to see Annie right away, but it was getting late, visiting hours would be over shortly and I was still upset from my dream on the plane and I was tired. I decided to go home, clean up and get some rest. Annie could wait one more day.
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Glad ur back

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Unread post by wingman » Sat Jul 06, 2019 9:15 pm

Great chapter. How are you feeling?
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Unread post by SamWarrens » Sun Jul 07, 2019 9:37 am

Recovering slowly, but steadily.
Glad to be back.
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Unread post by curious9632 » Sun Jul 07, 2019 12:33 pm

was super happy to see your post, but also a new chapter was even sweeter.
glad to see your recovering and welcome back
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Unread post by Samanthasman » Sun Jul 07, 2019 4:02 pm

Have not read yet, but so glad to be looking forward to this!
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Unread post by SamWarrens » Tue Oct 22, 2019 5:41 am

Final chapter coming!
Sorry it is taking so long.
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Unread post by wyddfa » Wed Oct 23, 2019 10:47 am

Great story Sam. Amazed that you have been able to keep going through all your medical issues. Hope you are getting back to fitness. Really enjoying the story, and the clever format. Good writing for sure. Thanks for all your efforts, very much appreciated here 👍🏽

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Can't wiat for the final chapter

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Unread post by SamWarrens » Sat Oct 26, 2019 3:12 pm

Winners & Losers Chapter 12
By Sam Warrens
Copyright October 26, 2019


Bill


I wanted to see Annie right away, but it was getting late, visiting hours would be over shortly and I was still upset from my dream on the plane and I was tired. I decided to go home, clean up and get some rest. Annie could wait one more day.

I slept soundly that night secure in the knowledge that I would see my Annie the next day.

I took a few moments to look in in the three girls, Janeen, Marie and Angelica
.
Janeen was asleep in one of the beds, her lily white body in repose as she slept on her back, legs and arms akimbo. Her red hair was splayed out around her head.

The other two girls were cuddled in the other bed, like two puppies. Their brown bodies holding each other for solace and comfort.
I let them sleep. In two days they would all be working hard at the special finishing school I was sending them to for the next six months where they would learn the skills to become first class escorts for me and my new business venture.

I went down the hall to shower and then dressed before going down for breakfast. Coffee and catch up on my emails. I had been away a while and there were quite a number of them.

Business had been good while I was away. I spent an hour looking over my business emails and looking at the financial reports.

Things had never looked better, and I thought to myself that it seemed like a good time to be getting out of it all.

I was tired of it. All of it. I picked up my phone and made a call to the Russians.

“Duke?” I said into the phone. “How would you like to buy my businesses? Yeah, all of them.Yes the legitimate one too. It could be useful for laundering the money from the drug business, but if you don’t want it I can always sell it separately. Yeah, think about it and get back to me.”

It was certainly time to get out of the drug business before my luck ran out and the cops closed in.

With that load off my mind I set out to see Annie at the hospital.

***************

I arrived at the hospital about an hour later. Not knowing what room she was in I asked at the information desk. “What room is Annie Compton in?” I asked.

“One moment sir. “ the receptionist said.

“There is no listing under that name sir.”

“Not possible. Look again.” I said

“Sorry sir, no Annie Compton. The closest I have is an Annie Masters.”

“And she is restricted to family only visitors.”

“But that’s MY wife, not his! She’s not Marcus Masters’ wife!”

“Not according to our records, sir.” The receptionist said. “In any event it doesn’t matter because her husband signed her out this morning and took her home.”

“Bastard!” I muttered under my breath as I walked away from the reception desk.

Just then my cell phone rang. It was Duke.

“Duke” I answered. “What’s up?”

“OK, I’ll buy it. Everything, the import esport business, the drug business the whole ball of wax. Fifteen million,”

I didn’t even pause. “You know it’s worth twenty million at least you old scoundrel.”

Duke chuckled. “Well, I had to try. I never could get much past you when it came to money.” He said. “How about fifteen million now and the rest a million a year over five years?”
“You’re busting my balls Duke, but Okay. Send the money as follows” twelve million to an off shore account (I gave him the number of Marcus Masters secret account) and the balance to my off shore account in the Turks and Caicos.”

“Nice doing business with you Duke. We’ll have the paper work done in a couple of days.”

My next call was to Maecus Masters.
“Masters here.” He said as he answered his phone.

“I’ve just paid off my loan and the vig” I want my wife back.” I spat into the phone.

There was a pause on Masters end of the line, he clearly hadn’t expected this turn of events.

“All right, it will take a bit of time to verify the payment. If all is okay then how about I hand her back on Thursday after lunch?”
A day and a half and she would be mine again. “Fine.” I said and hung up.

She was coming home. I’d won! That black bastard never expected me to pay off his debt.

Annie

We kissed in the elevator ride up to his suite. Long deep kisses, our tongues entwined as we rode up.

Arriving at the suite we couldn’t wait to head to the bedroom. It had been so long since we had had any intimacy. We shed our clothes as fast as we could.

Just at that moment a call came in on Marcus’ cell phone.

Annoyed, he answered it. It was a short call. It ended with him agreeing to something on Thursday afternoon. He hung up and looked pensive.

“Everything alright?” I asked him.

“Yeah”, he said and kissed me again.

Kissing me he gently pushed me on to my back on the bed, lowering his kisses down my body to my breasts sucking my nipples one at a time into his mouth. He sucked on tem and made them as hard as diamonds.
He trailed down across may belly leaving kisses as he went until his sucking mouth reached my pussy.
He began to work on my pussy like a man possessed. Licking my clit, tonguing my pussy hole, eating my cunt like it was his last meal. Over and over bringing me to the edge of orgasm and then backing off. I was going insane with desire.
I could feel the build up of sensations in my lower belly, the increasing tension, the need to cum. At last he pushed me over the edge and I came in a torrent. Gushing my female ejaculate once twice, three times. He gulped it all down. His mouth stuck to my vagina like a lamprey as he swallowed my squirting pussy like a man dying of thirst.

“Oh God baby that was so good” I whispered to him. “Let me repay you.”

Leaning forward I grabbed his huge black dick in my left hand and pulled him over to me. I opened my mouth and sucked half of it into my mouth. I moved back releasing it to the head and then went back down the rest of the way to his pubic hairs. The gorgeous long dick deep in my throat. Marcus threw his head back in utter joy at my deep throat action. I drew off his cock to the head again and then went back down all the way again and again, fucking his beautiful cock with my throat. Fucking him like that for twenty minutes. Finally holding in place as he came in my throat, one two three spurts down my throat. I withdrew leaving the head inside my mouth as he spurted three more times and filled my mouth.

Suddenly he commanded me “Don’t swallow. Keep it in your mouth.”

I looked at him, perplexed.

“Kiss me.” He said.

Marcus

A mischevious glint in her eye, she leaned forward and gave me a deep luxurious kiss. Our mouths opened and the cum swirled between us as our tongues danced amid the salty, nutty tasting cum from her mouth.

I was so hard I thought my cock would burst it’s seams. I could hardly wait as I pushed my onyx cock into to her. She was so wet I slid all the way in without stopping .

I was in heaven. I was in my Annie, pumping over and over in her wet, slippery vagina. Her unprotected and ovulating vagina. We both knew what the outcome would be. She was going to get pregnant again and have my child. My black child.

That thought pushed me over the edge and I came inside her spurt after spurt after spurt deep inside her next to her cervix.

I didn’t pull out. I stayed in her rocking gently until my dick was hard again and I fucked her again, dropping a second load into her already filled pussy after about 30 minutes of fucking her. We did that four more times that day until we both fell asleep from exhaustion. I fell asleep with my cock still embedded in side her so that none of my cum would leak out.

Annie

“Kiss me.” He said. My mouth full of his cum. I kissed him and opened my mouth to share the wondrous load with him. Our tongues thrashed and wrestled, mixing the cum in our mouths as we shared the wonderful naughtiness of it. I came once just from the thought of our lust.
I felt his huge black cock enter me, sliding inch after glorious inch deep inside me. I felt him nudge my cervix, once twice three times and then move past the opening to nestle against my womb.
He felt so wonderful, filling me so completely, making me a whole woman, fucking me with that delicious black cock of his.
He was pumping me for all he was worth and I started to cum. Again and again and again, it was unending .
“AAAARRRGGGHH. DON’T STOP MARCUS, DON’T STOP, EVER! FFFUUUCCCKKK MEEEEEE!”
I was lost in the exquisite excstacy of multiple orgasms and I lost all sense of who and where I was. Lost in the feeling of orgasm after orgasm.
I only knew that Marcus was impregnating me with his child again and I wanted that more than anything in the world.
After untold hours of making love (not just fucking) we fell asleep, Marcus’ hard cock still buried in my pussy.

**********
I awoke early the next morning around seven.

Marcus was already up and was serving me a much needed cup of coffee.
“I have some bad news baby. “ he spoke softly “Bill has paid off his debt and I have to hand you back to him at one o’clock today.”

“How?” How could he possibly do that?” I asked in a stunned voice.

“I don’t know how, but he did and I have to give you back.” Marcus’ voice was filled with regret.

“Well we still have several hours, lets make good use of them.”

I leaned forward on the bed and kissed him. “Order some breakfast and while we wait we can get started.”

*********

Marcus thrust into me once more and as I exploded into another massive orgasm, he ejaculated into me again and again and again. He filled me once more with his black seed.

He paused and stayed inside me, as hard as when he started. He kept his virile seed trapped in my unprotected pussy.

We lay together recovering from our love making exertions.

After about 10 minutes he said, “You better go now, he’ll be waiting.”

“I know,” I replied reluctance in my voice. I knew I should go, but my heart wasn’t in it.

I rose from the king sized bed with the red satin sheets, leaned over and gave Marcus a deep, tongue filled kiss and went into the bathroom. I needed a quick shower to clean off my sweat and cum soaked body and to remove any cum that had gotten in my hair in the last two hours with Marcus.

My husband surely knew what I had been doing with Marcus for the past 4 months, but I didn’t want to rub his face in it, although I should have. It was his fault he had gotten us…me, into this position.

I put on my lacy black bra and a pair of black, boy shorts panties. I put on a black wrap around silk dress that buttoned diagonally from my waist to my left shoulder with the lower half of the dress wrapped around my legs but allowing freedom of movement. I wore black strapped 3 inch heeled shoes.

I dried and brushed out my almost white blonde hair and put on some bright red lipstick. The lipstick really popped visually with the back dress and my near alabaster white skin.

I left the suite without speaking to Marcus, and strode down the hall to the elevator, got in when it arrived, and rode the 20 floors to the lobby of the club.

The doors opened and there was my husband Bill, sitting on one of the sofas next to the potted plants in the lobby tapping away on his smart phone.

“Business or gambling?” I thought to my self. It really didn’t matter – neither of those things were about me. Me, his wife, who had been away from him for over four months as collateral for his business and gambling debts. The person who had been forced to pay the 'interest' on these debts to Marcus.

He looked up at me as I stepped off the elevator, and almost as if I was an annoying distraction he said “ Hi Annie, time to go home.” And he was back tapping on his phone.

Just at that very moment my pussy spasmed and a large dollop of Marcus’ cum oozed out of my pussy and literally filled the gusset of my panties soaking them through and began to run down my thighs.

I looked at him like I was seeing him for the first time. “I don’t think so.” I said.

“We need to talk, here and now.” I said in a serious voice.

“Where do I begin? I questioned. “I suppose at the end will do for a start. I have fallen in love with Marcus Masters. There I;ve said it, it’s in the open now.”

“It’s not that I don’t love you Bill, because I do, But I love Marcus masters just as deeply. No… that’s not true … I love him more deeply. He can give me something you can’t. Children, Bill. Beautiful little children. Beautiful little black babies.”

“I want to have his babies Bill” I explained. “I’m probably pregnant right now with his child, at least I hope so. If not I am going to go back to his bed and try to get pregnant.”

Bill sat there with a stunned look on his face. “What are you saying? After all the things I did for you, to get you out of Cuba? It was me and my team thqat found you, that raided that house, that killed those men.”

“I was worried sick about you for the whole time you were gone.” He whined.

Bill


I sat there in shock hearing this from Annie.

I had risked so much and done so much to win her release from that asshole Masters and here she was telling me that she loved him, wanted his children and was going to go back to him to get pregnant!

Stunned wasn’t the word for what I was feeling.

Just at that moment Marcuas Masters stepped out of the elevator just to our left.

Annie rose and went to greet him.

“I’ve told him.” she said. “I’m coming back to you, to have your children.”

Masters smiled, and kissed her deeply. “I love you.” He said. “I just got a call from a guy that will mean you and I can go away and never have to look back. I’m going to meet him now and I’ll be back in a couple of hours. We can start our life together then. He looked at me and I could see the look of triumph on his face.

He kissed Annie again and left to go to his car that was waiting at the curb.

I grabbed Annie and pushed her tightly against a pillar with her back to the front of the building. “What the hell are you doing? I yelled at her.
Marcus got in his car and it started to pull away from the building when it ceased to exist.

The fireball was immense. The force of the blast blew out the front of the casino building for three floors. Shards of glass from the front of the building blew past the pillar that I had pressed Annie into, protecting her from the razor sharp shards of glass thet flew past us.

There was no way anyone in the car could have possibly survived.

Marcus Masters was dead,

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Epilogue

Bill

They never found out who planted the bomb that killed Marcus and his driver. Their bodies were shredded by the blast and what was left was bured too badly to even get DNA results,

Annie was pregnant. She had twins, a by and a girl.

We stayed married for the sake of the children – they were blameless in all this.

It was a pretty loveless marriage. We were pretty much just room mates with occasional benefits. We drifted apart and divorced when the children were 16.
I’d had a very good relationship with all my escorts so I wasn’t starved for sex by any means.

I had a special relationship with Janeen, the red haired beauty who served as my “madam” and I eventually married her.

It seems that her son inherited something from his father – an immense dick.

At 17 his sister was pregnant by her brother and Annie was not far behind her. They both had incestuous baby boys .
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Hope you all enjoyed!
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SamWarrens wrote:
Sat Oct 26, 2019 3:19 pm
Hope you all enjoyed!
I'm glad you're writing again! :up: :up: :up:

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Unread post by aguy4pleasure » Sun Oct 27, 2019 3:28 am

Sam,

I want to add my thanks that you are writing again and for "Winners and Losers." I was sad to see Bill and Annie come to such a sad ending. However, their are some pains and some affections even heroics can't overcome.

I hope you are healing well and will find yourself in better health in the future. I'm also selfish enough to hope for other fine stories.

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Unread post by Samanthasman » Sun Oct 27, 2019 5:55 am

Wow!! Loved it!!!

I feel like I waited forever, but it was worth it!
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Unread post by SamWarrens » Thu Nov 07, 2019 3:38 pm

Love to hear feedback pro or con.
Constructive criticism helps make the writing better
Good feed back makes me feel good about the story.
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