Thoughts on Her Surrender

[subtoall]

Beautiful writing.

[Don Jetman]

Beautiful writing.

Thanks very much. Part 2 is coming...

Don

[SutterKane]

I'm glad to hear that it's in the works!

[Don Jetman]

I'm glad to hear that it's in the works!

Not in the works, actually - it was written a while ago. i'm just trying not to hog the Library with my posts.

Don

[SamWarrens]

Don't worry about hogging the library. We, the readers can take it. Just keep posting regularly.

[john jasson]

Spectacular, sumptuous writing. Not read any of your work before, but this certainly won't be the last.

[SutterKane]

Damn it Don! Hog away! BTW, my wife says you get here wet!

[loshum]

Longtime lurker, first time commenter.

This was very exciting — I liked the psychological development.

[Don Jetman]

Longtime lurker, first time commenter.

This was very exciting — I liked the psychological development.

Thanks for de-lurking and replying, loshum. To me, the psychology's always what makes watching L hot, then writing about it afterwards.

Don

[54321]

Wow, Don!

At least fifteen out of ten!
Great story, beautiful description, lovely writing style and, best of all,
I love its trance like quality where the images unfold rhythmically and hypnotically, maintaining an emotional level of arousal.

Few writers have that. One who comes to mind is the late Barbara Cartland. Although much maligned due to her remarkably prolific output and huge popularity, she was absolutely brilliant. She avoided sexual detail, believing that it was the emotions around it that engage us.
In a way, you do the same. It's how you and the other characters feel about what is happening that makes it all so intense.

I'm a fan!

54321

[Don Jetman]

Thanks very much. Like it or not, most of my stuff is all about the "emotional level of arousal" I experienced back then and I'm reliving when I write it. The mental images of L taking cock all run together after a while, but the emotions are always special and distinct, and rarely fade. Writing helps keep them alive.

Don

[OZCPL]

Wow, Don!

At least fifteen out of ten!
Great story, beautiful description, lovely writing style and, best of all,
I love its trance like quality where the images unfold rhythmically and hypnotically, maintaining an emotional level of arousal.

Few writers have that. One who comes to mind is the late Barbara Cartland. Although much maligned due to her remarkably prolific output and huge popularity, she was absolutely brilliant. She avoided sexual detail, believing that it was the emotions around it that engage us.
In a way, you do the same. It's how you and the other characters feel about what is happening that makes it all so intense.

I'm a fan!

54321

[SutterKane]

Don, you write more, I'll read more! I'm just glad you take the time and effort to put these stories down for us.

[Don Jetman]

Thanks, SK. Another is on the way.

Don

[atlsub292]

beautiful writing, very erotic. I could see your beautiful wife in your words. such angst to know she is satisfied by so many alpha men in so many different ways.

[BigJim]

Don you are one of the best

[roaringknob]

Very well written. looking forward to part 2

[SutterKane]

Read ALL of Don Jetman's stuff here on OHW! He is a master writer and story teller!

[rypmar7]

I can't believe I had never read this before. Great story! Great writing! Very, very hot!

[Don Jetman]

Thanks everyone - sorry I missed all the replies. They're very much appreciated!

Don

[afagehi7]

Thanks everyone - sorry I missed all the replies. They're very much appreciated!

Don

Don, your stories are fabulous. I have a small request: at the beginning could you post a TLDR? This way we know if it's the kind of story we are interested in before committing the time. For example, I spent a heap of time on a story that wasn't my cup of tea and nearly missed one that was certainly a good cup of tea.

We thank you for your time and contribution to the forum.

[OOAA]

FANTASTIC story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

So hot everytime I read "Be careful what you wish" in a story

Congratulations!!!

[dana007]

Don
I hope you and L have a very merry xmas and a happy new year.
keep us posted on any new stories.

[eater]

great story. thanks

[Johng1953]

This has to be the best cuckold/hotwife story I have ever read. Not just on this site, but ever anywhere!
I'm now going to try and find everything else you've written and posted here.
Have you been published? Or still have stories elsewhere? I'd love to read everything.