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Re: Cucked by an Incel
Posted: Thu Aug 22, 2024 6:47 am
by Johng1953
scarfolamew wrote: ↑Wed Aug 21, 2024 7:08 am
MrBoss62 wrote: ↑Tue Aug 20, 2024 6:25 am
Loving the story so far, gotta say I think the dialogue is easily one of the strongest parts, you do a fantastic job. It’s been mentioned twice but Ollie looping in his online friends with Morgan either via sending them photos or videos is definitely an angle that should be explored more. Very excited to see where the story goes next!
I really appreciate this comment. One of my largest motivators for writing this is that I adore stories that focus on dialogue and dirty talk. As a reader, I often find myself skipping over the physical descriptions of sex to get to what I consider "the good stuff."
That's exactly what I do too. You've nailed a perfect balance for me.
Re: Cucked by an Incel
Posted: Fri Aug 23, 2024 5:39 am
by concasy
Seriously well written!
Re: Cucked by an Incel
Posted: Sun Aug 25, 2024 1:46 pm
by jc6morw
Great detailed story. I get very excited with the concept of an incel getting to enjoy the woman at my expense and humiliation.
Re: Cucked by an Incel
Posted: Mon Sep 23, 2024 4:50 am
by sc good cuck
Bump...we'd like to hear more!
Re: Cucked by an Incel
Posted: Mon Sep 23, 2024 8:56 pm
by scarfolamew
Thanks folks. Making steady progress on Chapter 10, hope to have it out soon!
Re: Cucked by an Incel
Posted: Tue Oct 01, 2024 4:56 pm
by fraktastic
Looking forward to it!
Re: Cucked by an Incel
Posted: Thu Oct 03, 2024 6:29 am
by scarfolamew
Chapter 10 - Our Little Secret is live! Hope you like it
Re: Cucked by an Incel
Posted: Thu Oct 03, 2024 10:06 am
by soupcan_99
When I use the link it takes me to the early chapters but not #10… I must be missing something? Help please.
Re: Cucked by an Incel
Posted: Thu Oct 03, 2024 10:11 am
by scarfolamew
Weird, it works for me when I checked it just now (although the paragraph spacing is messed up
). Might be some sort of caching issue.
If you email me at my username @ gmail, I'll send you a pdf
Re: Cucked by an Incel
Posted: Thu Oct 03, 2024 8:06 pm
by soupcan_99
I went to the prior link and it worked, probably my issue. Thanks great chapter…
Re: Cucked by an Incel
Posted: Fri Oct 04, 2024 5:19 am
by Johng1953
A truly amazing chapter. I can't wait to see how all this develops further.