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Poem: A husband's Gaze

Posted: Mon Mar 17, 2025 8:16 am
by Bogdan
Not sure if this is the right place but a while ago I wrote this little poem

A fire burns, a carnal plea,
A hidden thirst, wild, and free.
To see her bare, her body claimed,
Another's touch ignites the flame

Her breath, a gasp, a sultry moan,
Her whispered words, "I'm not alone."
His voice, a growl, low and deep,
"Your body’s mine to taste and keep"

Her laughter spills, a wicked tease,
"Take me," she dares, "do as you please."
Their rhythm builds, their bodies press,
In waves of raw and sweet excess

I watch, enthralled, my senses reel,
Her cries, his groans, so sharp, so real.
Her gaze finds mine, a daring flame,
"My love," she purrs, "this is no shame"

In passion's height, we find release,
Our bodies trembling, love’s surcease.
His hands caress, her lips upturned,
A sacred act, where desires burned

Together spent, our tides collide,
Adorning her in love and pride.
She laughs, she glows, she wears our fire,
A goddess crowned in raw desire

This hunger shared, no bounds, no shame,
An untamed love, a wicked game.
For in this space, no rules confine,
Her pleasure is His — and yet, she’s mine

Re: Poem: A husband's Gaze

Posted: Mon Mar 17, 2025 10:27 am
by jrobb
Very nicely done!!!

Re: Poem: A husband's Gaze

Posted: Wed Apr 09, 2025 10:24 am
by weluvtoodoit
That is so well stated of everyone's thoughts. Thanks

Re: Poem: A husband's Gaze

Posted: Thu Apr 10, 2025 8:08 am
by Bogdan
weluvtoodoit wrote:
Wed Apr 09, 2025 10:24 am
That is so well stated of everyone's thoughts. Thanks
Thanks, glad you liked it

Re: Poem: A husband's Gaze

Posted: Sat Nov 01, 2025 5:03 am
by Synergy1995
Well done, I wish there was more poetry dedicated to sharing one’s wife.