Ogling at a throbbing Abyss

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Ogling at a throbbing Abyss

Unread post by thesvs_09 » Thu May 29, 2025 11:36 pm

Writer's Notes: 1. I am Suvil, an engineer from India (cliche') and my wife is Divya. Past few months I was dictating our past (mild) adventures. However, due to safety and personal reasons, some sensitive and aspects of the story could not be told (Divya's orders). I wanted full details to write for nostalgia, and therapeutic reasons. As a compromise, I am closing that one (On Misc forum) and starting a fictionalized story here.

2. This story takes inspiration from some of Divya's local language favorite love-drama stories, and she says she will be creative co-author (She does not read or write English) on that parts. Of course, I will add my elements to it, which are:

i). My fantasies - As a wannabe, I hope that during creative discussions, Divya will open up more. And I can test her reactions in the disguise of some character/writer.
ii). Untold past - I do plan to tell/write about our own troubled times. Our fights with demons. Our bad motivations. But I will not answer what is real, what is inspired and what is just imaginary. I like the site's rules. Reader is free to judge on reality of the story, but cannot tell.
iii). My 'dark' imaginations

SET INTRODUCTION
The Location is Varanasi and Prayagraj, India. Two of the oldest continuously inhabited cities in the world.

Our first person narrator is Manav Shukla, lovingly called Manu. He is a bank clerk at a national bank, doing typical 9-5 job. Married to Smriti Shukla, nickname Simi. You can say they have contrasting personalities, but opposites attract each other. Manu is reserved, calm, calculating, and goal-oriented, yet not ambitious. Simi is carefree, family and friends oriented, impressionable and ambitious, yet not hard-working.

Our other narrator is yours truly, who will hop on from to time.


CHAPTER 1.1: Clarke's first law

There she was. In a beautiful saree, gifted by me. Sitting beside a man, holding his hands and both staring into the holy Ganga ('Ganges') river. Kissing in public in India is frowned upon, otherwise I would have been ogling at a passionate kiss. I was some 100 metres away, inside a small abandoned Gumti (a tin shed very small shop), alone with a throbbing dick. I felt more adventurous than them, and cautiously unzipped my fly seeing here and there. There were no people around me, but it is a public river bank after all. I was jerking at full flow seeing her smile, and their talks. What are they talking about ? After a few minutes, they stood up, and he meekly gave a peck at her cheek. I orgasmed seeing that. First, a sense of surroundings hit and I saw the time 5:35 PM, date 30 September, 2021. Second, a slap of clarity thrashed me. What was I doing ? I saw my limp veinous dick. At least it was satisfied. Things I do for this one. Risky things. I put it back inside jeans, as I need to move my blood back to brains. They were going towards his motor bike. While he was unparking his bike, she took out her phone. In a minute, my mobile started vibrating.
Me (Manu): Hello!
Simi: Have you reached Prayagraj ? Was the train late ?
Me: Yes, just reached at the station. On time. Coming to your flat soon.
Simi: Ok. Nice. Waiting for you, love.
Me: Ok.

She sat on the bike and rode away. Probably to her flat. To wait for me. Huh!

I distinctly remember a conversation with my mother (Kamala) a year ago (in July, 2020 specifically, when the lockdown lifted). I had made her aware of my decision to send Simi back to Prayagraj for her Bank exams coaching. She was (and is) preparing for Bank Probationary Officer exams, and is mostly residing in Prayagraj (a city 120km away from our home town, Varanasi) since early 2019. My mother was concerned about her Simi's where abouts and her dedication to cracking the exam. Mother has seen Simi's Facebook/Insta updates. Roaming around in the city. Evening travels. Less marks. And mother's keen experienced eyes quickly saw the 'depth' of a situation arising - Simi's friendship with Lokesh Dravid (LD), a fellow Bank aspirant.
Kamala - Son, I do support our daughter-in-law. But I must say she is not focusing on her studies. I am not saying she is mindlessly spending money, but her influences seem erratic and bad.
Me: She is focused on next exam. And after lockdown, she needs a breath of fresh air for solid studies. She will be there for 06 months only.
Kamala: Are her all friends returning ?
Me: Mostly yes.
Kamala: But she wanders with one or two persons mostly. I may be wrong, but her friendship with that boy seems too much.
Me: Hmm... Mom, he is her roommate's boyfriend. Whenever Rita (Simi's roommate) goes, he goes. Gives a sense of security.
Kamala: Rita needs to put a leash on him then. He looks too much of a wild ox.
Me: (Huh! My mother can sense he could be a potential 'Bull') They will marry probably within 2-3 years. I don't know there is a bigger leash than marriage that she can put on.
Kamala: Hmm... I am just concerned about Simi's studies. Too much time to one person can disturb your focus, could cause a heartbreak or other problems. Just saying.
Me: Mom, Simi is not going to break anyone's heart. She knows what she is doing. Let her enjoy.
Kamala: I am just forewarning you that a close friendship can suddenly turn into something more. It is very much possible, even if Simi knows she is married and resists it. If it happens, you will never enjoy that.
Me: Hmm...

Clarke's first law: When a distinguished but elderly scientist states that something is possible, he is almost certainly right. When he states that something is impossible, he is very probably wrong.
Can you point to where the big bang happened ? Yes. Everywhere.
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Re: Ogling at a throbbing Abyss

Unread post by thesvs_09 » Sat May 31, 2025 9:41 am

CHAPTER 1.2: Clarke's second law

Within an hour I reached Simi's flat. Rita was still sharing a room, they are not on talking terms now. Rita has broke up with Lokesh (LD). That is another story to tell. After getting comfortable, unpacking my bag and showered, Simi served me food.
Me: Smells amazing. Did you cooked all that much ? (Of course you didn't. You were in your lover's arms whole day)
Simi: No. Actually, I was cooking, then I got spices in few curries wrong. My mood got disturbed, I put that in garbage, and ordered food online. I hope what I ordered is tasty at least.
Me: It is. No problems. (Nice elaborate story by the way, darling!)
Then, we talked about life. Our financials, her studies, upcoming exams etc. Mostly she was talking, I was somewhere in the past.

Simi loves sex. If not sex per se, then surely the attention a man gives to her during the action. At least, I put her pleasure over mine most times. During one such night in lockdown of March, 2020, while I was pleasuring her, I finally managed to say to her that she can go back to Prayagraj again after lockdown gets over. She was there for last 1 year from Feb 2019. She went there with her friend Rita. Over time, Rita's boyfriend Lokesh became a good friend of Simi too. Then, he started flirting, Simi responded neutrally. He got somewhat emboldened, got a little too touchy, and it got a little too much for Simi, no, not Simi. It was a little too much for a possessive girl like Rita. Rita's relationship with Simi got cold. Not strained, not yet, but not warm either. Lokesh and Simi decided to back off. Then, covid came. And with distance, things cooled down between LD and Simi, and Simi's relationship with Rita picked up again.
I was very much aware of the situation unfolding, as Simi used to tell me everything during our telephone conversations and during her rants on monthly visits. Simi blamed Rita for misunderstanding and being too possessive of Lokesh. Lokesh was (was ? or is ?) a typical playboy. I backed Simi, advised her to understand Rita's perspective and talk to Lokesh. She did. Lokesh also knew that he needs to make up with Rita soon. Covid helped all the relationships, I guess. Except mine and Simi's. Simi was not enjoying the lockdown. Not in the joint family home. She wanted wings of freedom. But was scared to go to Prayagraj again thinking her relationship with Rita will get problematic once more, when Lokesh comes around their flat and flirt with her. I managed to make her understand to do what she wants, and what is good for her career. And that day, while I was licking her, I told her to go back to Prayagraj for studies of course.
Simi: Yes, coaching is absolutely necessary, otherwise I won't clear exams. I will try to get a new flat if a problem starts again. Away from everybody.
Me: Okay. Or you can talk to Lokesh to not be a playboy.
Simi: That's his only quality. He is like that, but he means no harm. He loves Rita. Rita is just too old fashioned to be a little playful.
Me: I was saying ask Lokesh to not be playful with you in front of Rita.
I paused my tongue flicking over her pussy. She moaned, her fingers tangling in my hair, then clenching it and she moved me up towards her breasts. My hands left her ass, and explored her back. As I licked her hardened nipples, she trembled with pleasure. She motioned for me to slide up more, I did and my lips reached her lips. After a passionate kiss, she began pushing my head slightly downwards. When I was sliding back to her breasts, she stopped and pointed towards her armpits "Here!". Her armpit was smooth, warm and sweaty. Smell of some lavender perfume was noticeable. But aromatic smell of sweaty musk was more pronounced. "Slow. Rest your full tongue on it. Wash it with your love thoroughly" she said while engulfing my head with her arms. I inhaled deeply, her scent was intoxicating. She was slowly pressing my dick with her knees. "So, you don't want me to cut off ties with Lokesh" she asked. I pushed my two fingers inside her pussy and thumb around her clit. She was wet. Dripping even.
Me: I don't think you should. As you said earlier, he is not harmful. A little playfulness is okay while we are young.
Simi: Hmm.. since we cannot do it in front of Rita, I should ask him to be only playful when I am alone with him.
Me: Kind of like that.
Simi: But I meet him usually when he is with Rita, or when he comes at the flat. But Rita is always inside the flat. She is a bookworm. Leaves flat only once in a while.
Me: I am sure you can arrange something outside then.
Simi: Oh. Interesting. But if we get caught, Rita would be furious.
Me: Then, be cautious.
Simi: I don't know what I will chat with him alone. Or what he will do ? Will you not be jealous that your wife is having alone time with some hot dude ?
Me: You know me! I would be liking it.
Simi: He may see this as a next step and try something more. Something that delves into sinful category.
Me: Then, take a dip in Ganges river in Prayagraj, and all your sins will be washed.
Simi: Haha... May be I need a holy dip now. But still there has to be some limit. No ?
Me: Darling, we will set the limits once the time arrives.

I kept fingering her, inhaling and licking her, and she was kind of jerking me slowly with her knees against my lower belly. She spasmed and orgasmed, and released the pressure of her knee from my dick. Her body was shaking, her grip tight around my head. Before suffocating on her armpit (not that I did not want that), I bit her pits with teeth and she released me. Hoof!
Simi: Hey! Where are you ? You are so absent minded since you arrived today. Is everything alright ?
Me: Yes. (Oh...When did we started having sex ? Is it sex though ? I was eating ordered food few minutes ago. I need to focus. Come on Manu, back to present!)
Simi: You want water ? You are still hard. You did not cum with me baby.
Me: Oh... :|
Simi: No worries. You can jerk off. I like making you jerk off. Hands or feet ?
Me: Anything... (Focus!)
Simi: Feet it is. :)
She sat down, take rest against bed and I set myself up towards her feet. First, she used both her feet to grab my dick, slowly jerking me off.... Then, when I was close, she removed her one foot. She pressed my dick forcefully against my belly (kind of prone position) with her heel and toes, and just before I was about to cum she removed all the pressure...Fuck. A ruined orgasm. Fuck.
Me: You are a bad girl. What was that for ?
Simi: To keep you interested. I have to tell you something, kind of ask you.
Me: Okay.
Simi: You know that I have not met Lokesh since he stopped coming to flat after his break up with Rita. He is kind of bugging me to set up a meeting again. What do you say ?
Me: (I say that baby, you spent practically whole day with him today.) Huh ? I don't know. Are you sure you can handle more drama ?
Simi: I think I can. Can you ?
Me: (Has the time arrived ? Should I set the limits ? Confront ?) I don't know! We can decide later.
Simi: Of course, but tell me about your decision before going back home. He is impatient. He has rented a room near by. Wants me to see his flat.
Me: Are you impatient too ?
Simi: Ha.. No. I can manage.
Me: Hmm... (Liar! You have probably already seen his flat. I need to find out.)

Or should I confront and ask truth directly. But where is the fun in that ? Do I need more fun though ? This is going towards dangerous category. A hard limit is needed. But... But Oh Manu. You need to think with brains. I touched my dick. It has not gotten a good orgasm. I need to think of it too. What more is possible ?
Clarke's second law: The only way of discovering the limits of the possible is to venture a little way past them into the impossible.

Me: I think you can go.
Simi: Huh ?
Me: You should go to his flat.
Simi: Oh.. That was some fast decision.
Me: Hmm... And for this speedy decision, I require a proper blowjob!
Simi: Of course. A quick mind needs a quick release. On it baby. :twisted:
Can you point to where the big bang happened ? Yes. Everywhere.
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Re: Ogling at a throbbing Abyss

Unread post by Tire_Kicker » Sun Jun 01, 2025 7:47 am

This has a lot of potential.

Please continue.

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Re: Ogling at a throbbing Abyss

Unread post by subtoall » Sun Jun 01, 2025 11:55 am

Very nice start. Sexy!

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