Candy too (part 2 of Candy)

[goyse]

Candy too Chapter 41.

“He should have been home by now. He always comes home on time.”

“Settle down, Candy. It’s not something that you should panic about. He and Jill may have met some friends and decided to have a party. It could be anything.”

“You don’t understand, Michael doesn’t go to parties and things like that and if he does do anything out of character he always calls me.”

“You’re right I don’t understand. You are here with me and we have had incredible sex together and we could be having sex again but instead, you are sitting on the side of the bed acting irrationally because the husband you are cheating on decides to stay out a couple of hours longer than normal with your female lover.”

“I need to go out and find him. He always answers his phone and I’ve called him four times and nothing. He hasn’t answered. Something could have happened to him.”

“Candy, you can’t go running around town in the middle of the night looking for a lost husband that you have been cheating on.”

“Please don’t keep saying that. I have never cheated on Michael, not ever!”

Jeff shook his head. When he didn’t respond she looked up at him and asked, “What?”

“You really believe that, don’t you? You cannot see what is glaringly obvious to everybody around you.”

“What does that mean?”

“Candy, I don’t want to have an argument with you or upset you in any way but you can’t actually believe that you have fooled me. I was there. I saw it all. I took the movies and I edited them. I saw Tod play them back to you. Almost everything that happened, almost everything he said to you and you said to him was recorded. I cut out the parts that I believed you would not want people to know about and that includes your husband. I thought I was fixing it for you but this denial, it’s not logical.”

“So now you’re using what you learnt against me, is that it?”

“No, I’m not but your husband has the right to come home a few hours late if he chooses to. He has the right to stay out all night if he wishes and so does your friend Jill. You don’t own them. You can’t control them and you shouldn’t be trying to.”

“He should have called me,” she told him like a spoiled child that had just lost her teddy bear.

“Yes, he should but then so should you have called him when you decided to not fly out to Europe as he expected. Perhaps he may think that given that you didn’t notify him he may not be obligated to notify you. You didn’t even tell Jill. They had to find out by themselves.”

“Okay, so you’re now Michael’s protector, are you?”

“I’m nobody’s protector. I’m simply highlighting what you expect of Michael you don’t do for him. That is totally unreasonable of you.”

“I guess but I can’t change it now, can I?”

“You could start being honest with him. That might help.”

“That would just start trouble that is unnecessary.”

“Or it could be a matter of telling him the truth about things he suspects already. Maybe you could sit with him and ask him what he wants to know as a starting point.”

“Why would he suspect anything?”

“Why would he not suspect is more to the point.”

“You think he might know?”

“I don’t know for sure but when I think it through he has to have some concerns so the fact that he has not confronted you about the things that don’t add up makes me think that he knows you have been conning him and he is sitting back to give you and possibly me enough rope to hang ourselves.”

“The ticket would have put him off. The ticket changes a lot.”

“No, it doesn’t. The ticket is the last piece in the puzzle that would confirm his suspicions. Tod is going to Europe to sell the videos. Michael’s mate is a police officer, a sergeant, in fact. He would have access to information that tells them that Tod does his trips to Europe selling his latest porn videos. That is exactly why he never takes the women in his videos with him. The women would know immediately what he is up to if he did that. It is the exact reason why he didn’t buy you your ticket.”

“So you think that the ticket makes me look guilty.”

“Let’s not beat around the bush, Candy. You are guilty and the ticket is the proof of it.”

“What can I do?”

“There is a saying that honesty is the best policy. The moment you started hiding things and pretending you were oblivious to what Tod was up to, you were heading for trouble. If it was me, I’d sit with him and tell him the truth.”

“But he’s not here.”

“Yes, he’s not and as you say he always calls so that should tell you heaps.”

“I guess.” She sat back and looked up at the roof, studying the slight imperfection where the roof joined the wall thinking about it all and what she had done. Jeff sat quietly waiting, knowing she would have been thinking it through, “Yes,” she told him eventually, “I’ve been a fool and an arsehole. I need to confront what I have done and try to explain it to Michael then let him decide what he should do to me because of my foolishness.”

“What do you mean by do to you?”

“I deserve to be punished in some way, don’t I? He has every right to punish me.”

Jeff looked at her wondering how irrational her comment sounded. “What drugs are you on, Candy,” he asked her?

“What do you mean. I don’t use drugs and I wouldn’t. Why would you ask such a thing?”

“This business about being punished is irrational. It doesn’t make sense. Michael won’t punish you,” he thought for a moment then asked, “would he?”

“Years ago before I met Michael I had sex with a boyfriend’s mate and he punished me.”

“Really, what did he do to you?”

“He played football so he invited all of the football team to have sex with me.”

Jeff laughed, “Knowing you, Candy that would have been reward, not punishment.”

She giggled. “I did enjoy it but I was really sore after it and he never dated me again. That hurt. I really liked him.”

“So you were all alone without a boyfriend, poor Candy,” he teased her.

“No, his mate dated me for a few months after that then I met Michael again.”

“What do you mean by again?”

“I grew up with Michael. Our parents were good friends and used to go out together so Michael and I would spend the night with the same childminder. I loved him long before I understood love and sex and all that stuff.”

“And after all that you treat him like a mushroom, you keep him in the dark and feed him shit.”

“I guess. I don’t deserve him, do I?”

“I’ll leave that up to you to decide. Meanwhile, I have something for you here. Let’s get back to the bedroom.”

“I thought we were going to read some cuckold stories.”

“The cuckold stories will still be there, after.”

“The story about the football team turned you on, didn’t it?”

“A little, yes.”

“Okay, well let’s go to the computer room. I’ll put a towel on the chair then I’ll sit on your lap while we read a few stories together.”

“Okay, lets.”

…..

Chick kissed the naked Jill several times before picking her up and laying her down on the bed with her legs over the side of the bed. He lifted her feet up to place them on the edge of the bed in a position that left her legs spread open.

“My God, Jill, your pussy looks so small and tight.”

Jill saw out of the corner of her eye Mary enter the room with Michael behind her. They stopped near the entrance of the half darkened room. “Michael tells me the same thing every time we make love.”

“You love Michael, don’t you?”

“Oh, yes. We love each other very much. I knew him back in the days when Candy and he were dating. I think I loved him even then. It probably explained why I could never find a man of my own. Candy knew too so when we caught up again after a few years she asked me did I still feel the same. I told her I did……. Oh, Chick, that’s so nice. I love being licked.” She hesitated and moaned a few times as Chick worked on her clit then continued. “Candy told me that Michael had admitted to her that he often dreamed of me so she asked me to live with them as Michael’s lover because she couldn’t satisfy him like she used to.”

“Are you ready for me Jill,” Chick asked her?

“Yes, I need to feel you inside me. I don’t want to cum before you enter me otherwise I might not enjoy it as much.”

Chick dropped his pants and aligned himself with her tight wet pussy. Jill raised her head to look at him and told him, “Go careful, please. I don’t want you to hurt me. You’re thicker than Michael is.”

The thought of being thicker than Michael turned Chick on and his cock gave an involuntary jump as precum issued from the slit at its head. He held it above her clit and the clear jelly-like fluid flowed down across her clit and down along her slit which was just slightly open at its base. She felt it and lifted her hips so the droplet of slippery fluid entered through the slightly open slit.

To Chick, this was as arousing as it gets and once more his cock gave a jump upwards pushing more precum from his cock. This time he placed the head just below her clit that showed just a little bit as if peeping out from behind its curtains. He slid his head down along her slit and her pussy opened up to allow his entry as he pushed forward.

With a sharply indrawn breath, Jill moaned, “Oh God.” Chick pushed forward and an inch disappeared inside her, “Oh, Chick,” she murmured, “I could cum so easy. You’re opening me so wide and your cock is pushing my clit inside me. It’s hard up against your shaft.”

“Good,” Chick answered feeling his manhood restored after months of disappointment from failing his wife. “I’m going to fuck you as you’ve never been fucked before.”

“Don’t talk about it, Chick. Just do it!” Jill told him knowing that her husband would love what Chick was saying to her.

Chick pulled back and then thrust forward as Jill put her arms around his neck and held on for dear life as Chick thrust into her wildly.

In the shadows, Mary had removed her panties and bent forward. Michael needed no invitation. He took his slimmer but longer cock, rubbed it up and down Mary’s soaking wet pussy and slipped deep inside her. Mary was so turned on by watching her husband thrusting into and out of the younger girl with the almost perfect body that her orgasm was rushing through her body before Michael was fully inside her. That orgasm lasted until Michael filled her with his sperm as Chick yelled, “I’m going to cum. Jill. Where do you want it?”

“Don’t you dare pull out,” Jill told him.

“Aaahh, aaahh, aaahh, aaahh, aaaaaahhhhhhh………” Chick yelled at the top of his voice as Jill called, “Oh yes, yes, yyeess, yyyyyyeeeeeessss………, ” in reply.

All went still on the bed with the only noise being the heavy breathing of two people who had experienced some of the best sex of their lives. Michael however didn’t stop. After filling Mary with his thimble full of sperm he didn’t lose his hardness and continued to work in and out of Mary’s by this time sloppy wet pussy.

Mary’s orgasmic pleasure continued. She had gone without sex for a matter of months and no man was going to satisfy her in less than a few hours. She closed her eyes and little quiet whimpers issued from her as her legs started to give way under her. Michael was experienced so he held her in position while pulling all the way back then slamming as deep inside her as was humanly possible.

Chick lay down beside Jill listening to the just audible whimpers coming from what he knew to be his wife. The thought of her enjoyment made his cock stir back into life. He rose up over Jill and he kissed her. Jill was shocked initially because sex was one thing but kissing meant more to her than she had planned on but Chick knew how to kiss so she soon gave in and returned his kisses. As they kissed he very gently moved over on top of her and slipped into her pussy for round two.

“Fuck me gentle this time,” Jill whispered to him. ”Make it last and I’ll cum a couple of times.”

“Is that how Michael fucks you?” he asked.

“Yes,” she told him. “He often stays hard for many hours cumming about once an hour. He’s a good lover.”

“That’s good. I want Mary to enjoy it. I’ve been no use to her for a long time now.”

“Tonight, you and I are going to fix that. Did you hear her moaning as Michael made love to her?”

“Yes.”

“And you loved it didn’t you? It turned you on.”

“Yes.”

“I could tell. Every time you heard her moan and groan you got harder and harder until you sprayed my uterus with your sperm.”

“Yes.”

“What if I was ovulating now? You know that I don’t take the pill, don’t you.”

“Oh God, Jill. I’m cumming.”

“Yes, Chick, fill my pussy with that baby-making batter. Yes, fill me up. That’s the way. Give it all to my fertile little pussy.”

Michael in the dark once more quietly deposited his sperm deeply inside Chick’s wife as he chuckled having heard Jill tell Chick that she doesn’t take the pill. Mary also heard it and for some sick reason, she didn’t understand why her orgasm intensified at the thought.

Chick rolled away from Jill absolutely spent. Jill giggled. Chick although only having sleep on his mind raised up on his elbows and asked her, “What’s so funny?”

“You,” she told him, “I felt you get harder when I told you I wasn’t on the pill just like Michael did the night he impregnated me.”

Chick laughed, “You certainly have a way to turn a guy on, Jill. I just about turned myself inside out trying to get more cum inside you than I was capable of when you told me that.”

“I want you to do something for me, Chick.”

“Anything, honey after what you have done for me.”

“I want you to get up to go to rescue your wife from Michael and send him to me. It’s time for you to tell your wife how much you love her because I want to tell my husband how much I love him.”

She saw him smile down at her in the little light that was offered in the darkroom. “I want to kiss you first.”

“I’d be disappointed if you didn’t.”

“Good,” he said as he leaned down and they kissed.

[Chrislydi]

Thank you Goyse for such wonderful writing.

Don't take it to heart Goyse if this is a little critical of our heroine

Jeff certainly came out well in that chapter, seems to have all the intelligence that Candy lacks. Poor Candy once again fared less well. She really does have list of faults a mile long, so selfish, an habitual liar who sees it as part of her job description rather than any fault of her own, she's only out for herself. I know Michael loves her but was love ever so blind?

Candy's only redeeming feature is to call Michael 'unreliable' for not getting home for his bedtime, I fear she's a lost soul. However love conquers everything and no doubt Michael will forgive her after Jeff's talk, lets wait for her tearful 'forced' show of hugely belated honesty.and buckets of humility - the crocodile tears might come in handy too. Michael is such a saint he won't turn his back on her.

She really is something, very bad indeed

[Asterix42]

Another great chapter, thanks Goyse.

Candy certainly does come across as a prime ditz. But what can you expect from a woman who respects a man just because he has a big cock. A woman who falls in love with a complete stranger after a couple of days of sex, to the point that she’s talking about potentially ending her marriage to have a long term relationship. "We must make sure he is happy about it for now. What follows will then be up to us."

Jeff’s previously told Candy he doesn’t like the way she deceives her husband. “What worries me most is that you say you love him and yet you deceived him. We shouldn’t do that to the ones we care about.” And “if he somehow found out that I had purchased that ticket for you to hide the truth from him he would be devastated. Who would blame him and what would he think of me.” Now after less than a day of living with Candy, it appears he is less enamored with her than she may think. For a start he sees her as a cheater rather than a hotwife. Then in very short order he refers to her as being not logical, controlling, unreasonable, dishonest, conning, and irrational. With all those negative attributes, it’s hard to imagine Jeff is with Candy for anything but the sex.

Noting the bad impression Jeff had of Michael before meeting him, “I thought he must have been some sort of weirdo,” wonder what Candy’s said about Michael that Jeff edited out of the videos? Wonder if Michael will ever find out what Candy says about him behind his back?

Bottom line: Why is Candy with Michael when she disrespects him and treats him like shit?

We know it’s not for his money - “You know that we are not well off. You work very hard, but we still struggle what with the mortgage and all.”

We know it’s not for his company. Not when she spent almost every waking minute with Greg for the first three months she was his girlfriend, then needed an intervention to get her to spend just a couple of nights a week with Michael for the next six months. Not when she’s spent a lot more time with Tod than with her husband over the last year, seeing Tod every day and having a life with him that she’s never told Michael about.

We know it’s not to have a child or family. Not when she’s regularly talked about wanting children with Tod, but never mentioned wanting a child with Michael beyond a general statement “We’ve wanted children.” Not when she’s pushed Jill to give Michael the child she won’t “and isn’t it about time you gave him a kid?”

So if it’s not respect, company, money, children or a family Candy wants from Michael, then what is it?

An observation: In Ch 38 Jeff arrived home from work. What work? He just ran off with his boss’s girlfriend and disrupted his boss’s plans for the next series of porn videos that are the core of his income. If Jeff is still working for Tod, suspect it won’t be for long.

[OZCPL]

goyse If people dont like Candy then you have achieved something. You have managed to raise the emotions of your readers. What's that old expression: Make them laugh, make them cry.

Its about a little sex kitten called Candy and does she ever give her poor husband a hard time in all ways.

You expertly weave the personalities of your story into a complex matrix that makes us pay attention, to keep up with what is really going on, Thank you.

[OOAA]

GREAT chapter master Goyse!!!

Amazing these two sentences..., first one really funny, second one pretty hot, you know:

“What drugs are you on, Candy,”

"You’re thicker than Michael is."

And of course, the icing on the cake:

“What if I was ovulating now? You know that I don’t take the pill, don’t you.”

[Chrislydi]

GREAT chapter master Goyse!!!

Amazing these two sentences..., first one really funny, second one pretty hot, you know:

“What drugs are you on, Candy,”

"You’re thicker than Michael is."

And of course, the icing on the cake:

“What if I was ovulating now? You know that I don’t take the pill, don’t you.”

OOAA did you even think the one were Candy is comparing their thickness (of cocks)

"You’re thicker than Michael is."

Could even mean thick as in stupid too, because surely Michael must be fairly stupid to continue to have anything to do with Candy.

Candy could then be saying I know Michael is a lovesick idiot but you're even thicker for carrying on with me knowing all you do about my character



I really like Candy, but then I love thoroughly bad people in storylines.

[Chrislydi]

goyse If people dont like Candy then you have achieved something. You have managed to raise the emotions of your readers. What's that old expression: Make them laugh, make them cry.

Its about a little sex kitten called Candy and does she ever give her poor husband a hard time in all ways.

You expertly weave the personalities of your story into a complex matrix that makes us pay attention, to keep up with what is really going on, Thank you.

Candy is brilliant, I want her thoroughly bad, as bad as can be, really evil characters make it all worthwhile reading.

Watch her cuck Michael into the ground next, may as well leave him permanently and cuck him by text - Michael may even welcome that - just have the far nicer Jill all to himself.

[goyse]

GREAT chapter master Goyse!!!

Amazing these two sentences..., first one really funny, second one pretty hot, you know:

“What drugs are you on, Candy,”

"You’re thicker than Michael is."

And of course, the icing on the cake:

“What if I was ovulating now? You know that I don’t take the pill, don’t you.”

OOAA did you even think the one were Candy is comparing their thickness (of cocks)

"You’re thicker than Michael is."

Could even mean thick as in stupid too, because surely Michael must be fairly stupid to continue to have anything to do with Candy.

Candy could then be saying I know Michael is a lovesick idiot but you're even thicker for carrying on with me knowing all you do about my character



I really like Candy, but then I love thoroughly bad people in storylines.

There is a third possibility that you may or may not have thought of.

Little white lies or manipulations can often stimulate a lover, especially a first time lover or a man who is having a few sexual problems. I had hoped that some may have picked up on that possibility.

Then there is the other little white lie used to cause a little angst to her permanent cuckold although I feel that Michael is well past that but would Jill know?

[OOAA]

GREAT chapter master Goyse!!!

Amazing these two sentences..., first one really funny, second one pretty hot, you know:

“What drugs are you on, Candy,”

"You’re thicker than Michael is."

And of course, the icing on the cake:

“What if I was ovulating now? You know that I don’t take the pill, don’t you.”

OOAA did you even think the one were Candy is comparing their thickness (of cocks)

"You’re thicker than Michael is."

Could even mean thick as in stupid too, because surely Michael must be fairly stupid to continue to have anything to do with Candy.

Candy could then be saying I know Michael is a lovesick idiot but you're even thicker for carrying on with me knowing all you do about my character



I really like Candy, but then I love thoroughly bad people in storylines.

Yes I love the comparisons.... even more when husband is beaten by lover

[Chrislydi]

There is a third possibility that you may or may not have thought of.

Little white lies or manipulations can often stimulate a lover, especially a first time lover or a man who is having a few sexual problems. I had hoped that some may have picked up on that possibility.

Then there is the other little white lie used to cause a little angst to her permanent cuckold although I feel that Michael is well past that but would Jill know?

Yeah I actually got the obvious ones, just prefer to paint her as black as possible

[Asterix42]

Yeah I actually got the obvious ones, just prefer to paint her as black as possible

And the way she's written she makes it so easy to do that

[goyse]

Candy too Chapter 42

“Look at these files here in the XXX folder. They are all stories. Some in .PDF form, some in .Doc word files and others are web links.”

“Click on that one there,” Candy told him. The heading or the file was ‘Wife impregnated in Jamaica.’

The story started, ‘Several years ago after my wife and I had been trying to have a child for three years we decided it may never happen so we gave up. The stress of it all saw us often snapping at each other so I decided that what we needed was a holiday. One of our close friends had recently returned from Jamaica and he recommended that getting away to sunshine and beaches could very well repair our relationship. So it was that I purchased two tickets to take Sally on an adventure to Jamaica. Little did I even suspect how it would change our lives?’

“So this is the type of story that Michael reads late at night?” Candy stated.

“Look here,” Jeff told her pointing further down the story. Candy read, ‘A tall well-built man who we later found out was called Marcus picked up our bags as if they were feathers and carried them out of the terminal. We followed closely behind not wishing to lose our bags. He placed them into the boot of a car then opened the passenger side door for Sally. She didn’t hesitate and climbed in smiling up at him as she did so. Her skirt fell away from her legs and I saw the big man look down to catch a glimpse of the crotch of her panties with her camel toe very obvious to us both. Just the thought of it had me hard in an instant. The man then walked around to climb behind the steering wheel. I had no option but to climb into the back.’

“You know where this is going don’t you,” Jeff asked Candy?

“I can imagine,” she replied looking back at him to smile. “You’re already getting hard. I can feel you.”

“Good then let’s move on.”

Candy lifted up, directed his stiffening phallus to her pussy then sat down again. Jeff issued a moan then kept reading.

‘As they drove I watched what was happening in the front as best I could but the seats were high set and blocked out my vision. The only thing I could see was through a gap between the seats. As we travelled along I noticed Marcus drop his hand down on the edge of Sally’s seat after changing gears. It was then that I noticed Sally turn in her seat towards him as they talked so that her leg rested on the top of his hand. For some unknown reason, I was not at all concerned when he changed gear and rested his big hand on her leg. After adjusting my erection in my shorts I leaned forward to look across at Sally and saw that her legs were opened wide and her skirt had ridden up so high that Marcus could see her panties again. It was then we arrived at the hotel.’
“Do you like this,” Jeff asked Candy.

“Yes, keep reading.”

“Look here Marcus gave Sally’s husband his card and told him to call him if he needed anything.”

“So, Marcus has shown Sally that he is interested. By Sally opening her legs and not objecting she has shown Marcus and her husband that she is interested then Marcus handed the decision to Sally’s husband to either stop at that or go further. My Golly, Michael would have loved the thought of reading that.”

“Forget Michael, I love the thought of that.”

“So, you like the thought of the position the story puts Sally’s husband in?”

Jeff chuckled, “No way, that’s just not me. If I was the husband it would never have gotten into this situation. I would have taken the front seat but I do like the idea of Marcus handing his card to the husband.”

“Let’s read more.”

“This is turning you on, isn’t it?”

“A little, yes.”

“You’re playing the role of Sally in your mind and Michael is the husband, am I right?”

“Maybe but my bet is that you’re thinking that Marcus could be you. I felt you jump inside me when it said that Marcus put his hand on Sally’s leg.”

“Look here. The husband takes Sally to the bar and then after ordering her a drink he slips away to find Marcus who hangs out near the bar. He invites Marcus to join them for a drink.”

“Yep and Marcus lays it right on him. He asks the husband does he understand where that would lead to. The husband says he thinks so but tells him he must use a condom if Sally lets him. Of course, Marcus tells him he doesn’t use condoms but he says he will pull out if the wife asks him to. The husband then leads Marcus back to the bar.”

“Let’s move on and bypass all the talking.”

“Yes, like Michael would have done when he read it. So the big question is does Marcus pull out?”

“I’ll bet you he doesn’t.”

“I think he will initially because if he doesn’t the couple may cut him out but he will find a way to impregnate her maybe without them even knowing. Come on let's read some more.”

“So Marcus joins them for dinner and then she invites him back for a drink. Marcus asks the husband is he agreeable and he is too excited to talk but nods his okay.”

“The husband is going to give his wife to Marcus. They get back to the unit and he asks Marcus if he would like a drink. He gets Marcus a beer but then when he asks his wife she asks for a gin and tonic but there is no tonic so he tells her he will go out to buy some. He leaves them alone and Marcus makes his move.”

“The husband returns but watches them from the window. You were right. She tells him he must pull out. He pretends he won’t but then he does as she asks and pulls out. The husband comes as they do.”

“You almost cum then didn’t you. I felt you throbbing inside me.”

“Yes, I think I might have cum a little.”

“It felt nice. Remember, if you’re playing the part of Marcus you must pull out.”

Jeff laughed, “I think I might be a little late for that don’t you think?”

“You can blame your boss for that, can’t you?”

“Tod is not my boss and never has been. I worked for Helen. The only reason that I ever served him was that Helen expected it of me.”

“I see. You don’t like him.”

“I despise him with every fibre of my body. What he has done to innocent women is despicable.”

“I see.”

“Do you really, Candy? Do you even comprehend the hurt and suffering he has caused many married couples over the years?”

“I was one of them or don’t you remember that?”

“You were not one of them. What he did with you, you wanted and you deserved.”

“What do you mean deserved. I’m pregnant.”

“Yes, you are and whose fault is that? You can’t really blame Tod for that. You took the risk and you got caught because you chose that risk and I think you got a kick out of it.”

“Explain yourself!”

“To you, it was a cheap thrill. I watched you, remember. I saw every move you made and I heard every word you spoke and if I didn’t understand it I could rewind and play it again while watching your expression for different directions. You gave no thought at all to Michael who would end up having to raise someone else’s child. You took the risk and you got caught. It was only about your cheap thrill.”

“Are we going to read the rest of this story or do you want to play make Candy suffer for the rest of the night?”

“I’m sorry if you think I am out to make you suffer but all I’m doing is pointing out to you that I know the truth so, please don’t try blaming someone else for your mistakes. But for the other women, it was different. They really believed he was not going to sell the videos.”

“And you think I knew?”

“I don’t think it, no. I know it.”

Candy knew she was beaten. She looked at him and if looks could kill he would have died at that very moment but there was also something else in her expression. It was respect. He was the only one who had ever told her the truth about herself. It angered her but it also inspired a new feeling that she had never felt before. She didn’t know what it was but it made her feel he was better than all the other men who had used her and who she had used during her life. This new feeling she initially thought was some sort of domination but it wasn’t that at all. It was something most of us experience at some time in our lifetime. We all call it respect but she thought it was the start of pure love and it made her feel subservient to Jeff.

She turned her head and told him, “Kiss me and fuck me. Forget the story. I want you to fuck me!”

Jeff did not disappoint.

….

Michael held her tightly in his arms. Oh, how he loved this woman. It had taken a while but she had finally worked him out. Her seduction of Chick had told him that. He often wished he was different, that he could hold onto a woman he loved just for himself but that was in the past. He knew that it was never going to happen for him. He was a slave to his perverted desires and he had worked out that he would never change. He didn’t know why he was the way he was. His desire to watch the women he loved taken and used by other men had driven Candy away from him. Now, Jill, his new love had finally seconded to his needs and he didn’t even have to tell her. Had he become so decadent that a woman could work him out without him even telling her?

Jill felt secure in Michael’s arms. It was not easy for her to give in to Chick but Candy had told her and shown her that to really love Michael she had to be willing to satisfy his kink. Unless his kink was satisfied, Candy had told her he would show interest in others. She could never handle that and Candy knew it. What Candy told her was untrue of course because Michael had never shown interest in other women unless it was absolutely necessary to satisfy the one thing that he desired, to watch the woman he loved seduce other men.

“Let’s go home,” he whispered to her.

“Yes, let's,” she answered but made no attempt at all to get up. “Did you enjoy what I did,” she asked him.

“Oh, yes,” he answered but she saw him blush as he said it and she wondered why.

“Are you embarrassed,” she asked?

“Yes, I am a little.”

“Why?”

“I just enjoyed watching the woman I love being seduced by another man. It’s a little embarrassing to admit that to you.”

“You need not feel that way. I did it for you. Initially, I had doubts but now I know that it was the right thing for me to do.”

“Why did you do it? I didn’t ask you or expect you to do it.”

“I’ve watched you when Candy takes a lover and I could see that it excites you. I wanted to keep you happy too, just like Candy does.”

“Jill, I need to say something to you. I’m very happy you did this for me but you don’t have to. I’ll love you just as much if you don’t want to do it.”

“I know that but a wife should give her husband what he wants even if he won’t ask her for it.”

“Did you enjoy it,” he asked her?

“Yes, I did actually enjoy it although I thought that I might not. Chick is a good lover. He was gentle and caring not like some that I’ve had the displeasure of knowing.”

“Did Mary explain why she wanted you to do it?”

“She told me that she wanted to be with you.”

“No, that’s not the reason.”

“Okay, so why did she tell me what she did?”

“Chick has lost interest in making love to her since she was with Tod. She needed him to regain his confidence once more so she could win him back.”

Jill chuckled, “Michael you shouldn’t believe everything a woman who comes on to you tells you. I’ve heard some good stories before but that one takes the prize.” She looked at him and grinned at the surprised look on his face. “She likes to watch Chick with other women especially if she is being serviced at the same time.”

“So Mary is the female version of a cuckold?”

“Yes, exactly.”

“How do you know that?”

“She told me that she wanted to watch Chick seduce me. I thought it was quite a compliment and I also knew that you would enjoy it so I agreed.”

“I think we should go home.”

“Yes, let’s go. I expect we will catch Candy and Jeff at it.”

“Yes, hopefully so.”

They both laughed, looked across at Chick and Mary who were slowly making love so they quietly slipped away.

[Asterix42]

Another great chapter thanks Goyse.

Interesting to see Candy go even further down the rabbit hole. She appears to have well and truly passed the point of no return with regard to her relationship with Michael being dead and meaningless. Those observations from Jeff confirm she is every bit the lying deceitful slut readers have accused her of being. Stupid too. Falling in love with Jeff after just a few days when he's such a low life shit, no better than his pseudo boss Tod.

After all, regardless of who his boss is, Jeff' edited and produced porn movies for Tod knowing that the starring women were being exploited and marriages ruined. Jeff could have walked away, told his boss Lisa, or informed the police, but instead he took his wages, watched the porn, and did nothing to stop it. If Tod's a bastard for doing it, Jeff's his accomplice and right hand man and just as guilty as Tod for all the harm done. Whatever way you look at it Jeff's as much of a devious shithead as Tod is.

And that's actually great, because Candy and him are clearly made for each other. They're a couple of devious, lying, self serving shits, who care for nothing and no one beyond getting what they want. Looking forward to the two of them running off or being kicked to the curb together.

As for Michael and Jill. They seem happy and with the lack of documented interaction they have with her, Candy increasingly seems to be of little more more relevance than a flatmate to them. A flatmate who pays no rent and contributes nothing. Wonder if there will be a big reveal at some point where Michael tosses Candy out? Hope so, but not holding my breath.

Also hoping Candy doesn't redeem herself, as the whole Bitch Queen thing she has going really makes the story.

Looking forward to the next chapter and hopefully some fireworks!

[Chrislydi]

Thank you Goyse for all your hard work and effort, that was great resding, I enjoyed it so another great chapter.

I love the character of Candy she's pure evil personified, never make her a good girl after all. Just keep her rationalising all her behaviour away on Michaels kink and her so called 'love' for him, that's a laugh. Poor Candy some time in the dim and distant past it did start out that way, but she's so corrupted and self serving she's even making pure evil look good by comparison.

I love her to bits

(I know she has a few redeeming features, but they're getting a little hard to find at this point, please don't reveal her to be a good girl after all, keep her bad, keep her very, very bad indeed)

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Who's a glutton for punishment then?

I dare any reader to click on the link below and read my story, it's turned into a mixture of Charles Dicken's Christmas Carol - those ghosts from the past and one of Edgar Allan Poe's classics with the horror unleashed - maybe not The Fall of the House of Usher but something equally scary

It has a character a little like Candy and crikey I may even be married to her - Don't press the link whatever you do. If you want to keep your sanity that is!

[OOAA]

HOT chapter!!!!!! Nice connection with Jeff

[goyse]

Candy too Chapter 43

A little over a week later Michael noticed that clothes were missing from Candy’s wardrobe. He guessed that she was preparing to move in with Jeff and by the look of it he must have got an apartment or a house. He decided that he would say nothing but wait for Jeff or Candy to tell him what may be happening. He went to his office to sit alone to think about it even though he had already guessed well before what may be ahead of him his heart hurt at the thought of losing her to Jeff. As he went to sit down he noticed white stains on his chair. Initially he thought that at some time he must have spilled something on the chair but then he realised the stains looked very much like dried sperm.

He wet his finger and yes, the slipperiness told him it was most likely exactly what he guessed. He raised the finger to his mouth and the taste confirmed it. He knew it could not be him because on the very few occasions that he masturbated in his office he went to great pains to make sure he didn’t mess up anything. The thought of how it got there immediately had him aroused but he also wondered why Jeff and Candy would be having sex in his office.

When he started up his computer the list of recently opened documents told him immediately that they had been reading stories from his library. All the ones they had opened were cuckold stories even though there were others amongst those in his online library. Could it be that Jeff had cuckold tendencies or was it Candy who was getting excitement from his stories? Once more he found his erection was rising just by the thought of it.

That night he spent some time organizing a video system to record events in his office. He connected a large hard disk to the computer, added a password, ‘I love Jill’ then set up two high 1080 pixel cameras which overviewed his chair to record back to the hard disk. He downloaded software he had heard of that would start recording the moment the start button was pressed on the computer backed up by a high fidelity sound recording system. It cost him a few quid but the money was worth it in Michael’s mind if he could find out what Jeff and Candy were up to. Besides, it might make a good video for him and Jill to watch sometime.

As he tested it out a voice asked, “What are you doing, sweetheart?”

It was Jill. “Oh, it’s nothing. I’m just testing out the security system on my computer.”

“You have a security system on your computer?”

“Yes, I’m in the installation stage so to test it I’m recording in the office. I’ll move it after I’ve proven it works okay.”

“Okay, I see. I bet Jeff and Candy don’t know that. I caught them in here having sex a couple of days ago.”

“Did you? Just as well I didn’t have it operating then isn’t it?”

Jill giggled, “I wish you did have it working. We would have a blue movie to watch tonight then.”

Michael looked up at her and smiled. “Would you like that?”

“Of course, I would.”

“Okay, well if you don’t tell them I’ll leave it set up in the office so if they do it here again we’ll have us a real live blue movie to watch. Why are they using my office? Do you know?”

“Yes, they told me that they had located the file with your sex stories in it.”

“I see.”

She smiled at him. “Some of them are pretty good stories too.”

“You’ve been reading my stories?”

“Yes, when they told me I slipped in here and took a look myself. You’ve got some pretty good ones. That one about Jen and Mike where Greg takes Jen and turns her into his that the author X something is writing is a good one." She added, "Poor Mike.”

“Yes, Xleglover is a very gifted author.”

“Could we perhaps read one together?”

“Yes, we can but Candy and Jeff will be home shortly so we need to delay it until we have some privacy.”

Jill giggled, “You’re shy, aren’t you. You don’t want Jeff to catch you.”

“Something like that, yes.”

“Why?”

“You can’t guess?”

She giggled out loudly and told him, “Maybe it’s because you’re a lot smaller than him. Am I right?”

Michael shook his head and said, “Come with me up to my bedroom, young lady. It’s time you learned a lesson.”

“And what exactly are you going to teach me?”

“I’m going to teach you to keep your mouth shut or somebody will put his cock in it.”

“Oh, that sounds exciting," she said with a laugh, "I should talk more often if that is where it leads.”

….


Candy entered the house quietly. She turned towards Jeff and told him, “They are in the bedroom so we won’t see them until dinner time. Let’s keep reading that story.”

“Alright, as long as we don’t get caught.”

“I know Michael, he will not come down until dinner time and even if he does come down he is unlikely to go into his office until after dinner.”

“Okay, take your panties off and sit on my lap and I’ll get this computer rolling. Now, are you sure that Michael won’t come down?” Jeff reached forward and turned Michael’s computer on.

“Well, he never has when he has taken me up to the bedroom after work and if I know Jilly she won’t let him leave until she has to. In fact, if I know Jilly she won’t even let him come down for dinner.”

“I don’t understand, if you had sex sessions like that with your husband why do you need me?”

“Well, it’s a long story but I guess the quick version that explains it is size. He’s a little over six inches and you’re more like ten and he is about half your thickness. He drops in but you squeeze in. He cums about a thimble full. You cum about half a cup full. He reaches orgasm in about three minutes you take ten to fifteen minutes. That is quite a big difference for someone like me.”

“So it’s all about size and speed?”

“Look, let me be honest with you. I love the man to death and back but after sex, I need more. I can’t go through life fingering myself in the toilet every night. The way we have been organizing our life is that we make love. He knows that I’m not satisfied so he encourages me to have sex with other well-endowed men, like yourself. That has kept me satisfied and our relationship survives. A while back we talked about it and decided that it wasn’t fair to keep using men and then abandoning them. That was the point at which I met Tod. Together we decided that I should spend more time with him than I usually would and see what developed.”

“So that is how you ended up at the studio?”

“Exactly, but I found out he was making videos and I suspected he might be selling them. Then I met you and you confirmed it. I didn’t know what to do or how to handle it but what I did know is that I had this feeling this uncontrollable desire to be with you and here we are.”

“I felt it too. It was like I’d been waiting around for a purpose and that purpose was to meet you. I hope you don’t mind but I talked to Helen, my boss about it. I needed someone to talk to. She said if it feels good and if we both feel the same way then we should go for it.”

“That’s good but you do understand that I need to talk to Michael about it and you also need to understand, upfront that I love him like nothing else on this earth. I won’t leave him. What I’m hoping for is that he will accept you into our family like two married couples with links to each other through our feelings and emotions.”

“You got me to get my own unit close handy. I thought you and I would become a couple. I thought you would leave him and come live with me.”

“Shit! I didn’t realise that you wanted to take me away from Michael. Jeff, you and I care about each other a lot. I think it is love but as yet you haven’t told me how you feel but that love, if you multiply it by a number, three maybe four even ten, that is how Michael feels about me and how I feel about Michael. It is just that the sexual thing doesn’t work for me and Michael. It will never work for us and both of us know it but,” she looked into his eyes, “but,” she said again, “everything else does work for us, everything. Our love is real, Jeff and I cannot give it up. All I can offer you is to share in it. I can love more than one man. That’s what I’m like and I’ve always been that way.”

“So you expect me to play second fiddle to Michael. Is that what you’re saying?”

“No, I don’t expect you to play second fiddle to anyone. I don’t think that Michael would expect it either. If you decide on being my lover then I will negotiate with Michael to bring you back into this house as an equal to anyone else in the house. But then what you desire in relation to our love you must be willing to concede to the others in the house. It is like a democracy here. We are all equal and that must never change.”

“And if Michael says no, what then?”

“Michael will not say no if he understands. I just need to spend the time and the effort to allow him to understand. It may take a little time but you also need to understand that he has to be willing to not only share me sexually as he does now but emotionally as well. That is a big step for any man or woman to take. I know because I had to take exactly the same step with Jill and to be honest with you, I still feel jealous of her at times.”

“But you expect me to take that step as well.”

“Yes, I do and if you feel the same way that I do you will take that step willingly but there is no hurry. You have your unit now and I will spend some of my time with you and some with Michael until you and he are prepared to consider taking the next step if that time ever comes.”

“So now you have put your proposal to me can we finish reading that story we started yesterday.”

Candy smiled. She knew that because he wanted to make love to her after he heard her out that it would be no time until he agreed to her proposal. The hard part lay ahead of her. She had to seek Michael’s agreement. That was an important step for her. She needed some stability in her life and jumping from sexual lover to sexual lover was not her idea of a stable life. This could be the only time she had an opportunity for some permanency. Besides, despite it only being a couple of weeks with Jeff, she really cared for him. She definitely didn’t want to lose him.

As he opened up the story they had been reading she wrapped her arms around him and kissed him. She felt him growing under her as they kissed so the moment they broke from their kiss she lifted up to guide him into her pussy then sat down on him.

[Chrislydi]

Brilliant Goyse, really enjoyed reading that.

Candy's not such a bad girl after all, nice explanation to Jeff on what she needs and her love for Michael. I must admit if Michael really is based on yourself then you're a thoroughly good natured, tolerant and extremely decent bloke. There's not some hidden bias making him out to be such a star is there? Seriously Jeff and Candy look well matched as do Michael and Jill, the perfect arrangement.

Without Candy, now she's not so completely bad, and Tod out of the picture, who's left that I can pick on to be the out and out baddy?

Loved the references to Xleg, I'm now starting to read Ky_Da's stuff - you no doubt have read it already, he's another very talented writer.

[Asterix42]

So Candy wants to stay with Michael and loves him “to death”, but she also wants to live as a married couple with Jeff in the same house as Michael. Candy told Jeff they have to respect Michael and his position as her husband, but she's also said she doesn’t respect Michael and has been treating him with unceasing disrespect and feeding him a continuous diet of lies and deceit. Candy says she wants links to Michael through feelings and emotions and wants to spend time with him daily, but the story line provides no evidence of that happening over the two weeks since she came home from her trip.

Bottom line: what is actually left of the their marriage other than sleeping in separate rooms under the same roof. Answer. We don’t know.

Candy said she loves Michael because he looks after her, gives her everything she wants and needs (other than sex), protects her and is always there for her. But she doesn't particularly want kids or a family with him, nor does she seem to want to spend much time one-on-one with him. So other than being a provider/ protector, what does she actually love him for? Answer. We don’t know.

There’s a lot we don’t know because all we hear is pillow talk between Candy and Jeff, and the odd thought from Michael about how he doesn’t know what's going on. Since she departed for her “European trip” back in Chapter 21, the only one-on-one communications between Michael and Candy shared with readers have been; a couple of brief phone calls where Candy was abusive; one longer call where Michael told her about the videos; a brief conversation when she came home and asked Michael if Jeff could move in.

Outside of those conversations, all we have learned about their relationship in the last 23 chapters comes from what they say to others. From what is written, there is no interaction and no connection between Candy and Michael beyond the few conversations mentioned above and the fact they maybe they have dinner together with Jill and Jeff from time to time.

Whilst still finding the story a great read, I feel it would be better if there was more dialogue between the two main characters and some description of interactions they have shared over the last two weeks of story timeline.

[OOAA]

Really good chapter!!! What a clear open talking Candy we have!!!

CONGRATS Goyse!!!

[Asterix42]

Can't wait to find out what Michael discovers from the video cameras he's installed in the office!

[goyse]

Candy too Chapter 44

When Michael arrived home from work the next afternoon Jill was waiting for him in the office.

“Hello, honey,” Michael greeted her with. “You’re home early from work today. I usually get an hour or so to myself before you or Candy arrive home.”

“Hi, sweetheart, yes, I was owed some hours so I organized to get away early to be here to look at your video testing. Candy told me that they did a little more reading yesterday while you and I were otherwise engaged.”

“Okay, well I’ll play it back. Hold on while I get us both a drink.”

“Let me get the drink and you set up the video.” Jill got up and walked in to the kitchen. She opened a G and T for herself then a Jim Beam and coke for Michael. By the time she returned the video was playing. What she heard stopped her dead in her tracks. She pulled up a chair beside him and handed him his drink but said nothing.

They sat to listen until they reached the part where Candy stood and guided Jeff into her pussy. Michael hit the stop button then turned to look at Jill. They sat looking at each other for quite a while before Jill asked, “What are you going to do? Are you going to welcome Jeff into our home?”

Michael tilted his head to the side, “You heard her. This house operates as a Democracy. She told him we are all equal here so consensus determines what we do.”

“Yes, I know that but there are three votes. Candy is the proposer so if one of us wants Jeff to move in then it happens. That is why I asked you what you wanted. If you want it as well then my vote doesn’t count.”

“You miss one point there. If I choose not to vote then the decision rests with you.”

“Why would you not vote?”

“Think about it. If I vote against it then Candy will most likely leave even if it isn’t straight away. If I vote for it and you don’t want it then I could lose you. There is a good chance that I can’t win here unless you and I can agree to what Candy is asking.”

“You won’t lose me, Michael. Surely you know by now that what we have I want to keep long term and I hope you do too.”

“That’s good because so do I.”

“So why do you hesitate?”

“At least I think we should wait to see what Candy’s proposal is and also how she goes about it. We can each have a view but sometimes waiting could change things so I propose that we wait until we have to make a decision. After all, something could happen before then that makes casting a vote unnecessary.”

Jill chuckled but said nothing but Michael just stared at her. Eventually, his grin with no words got the best of her. “You don’t want to tell me which way you’ll vote. That’s it isn’t it?”

“Maybe, maybe not, time will tell. But remember, you didn’t reveal your vote to me either.”

She smiled and simply said, “Touché,” but in her mind, she wondered if Michael had decided to throw Candy overboard. She would not blame him after the way Candy had appeared to mislead them. She believed that Candy had been a disappointment to both of them so if Michael did decide to ditch her, although she cared a lot for Candy she would not object.

….

Jeff moved aside to allow Candy to walk through ahead of him. As she did so he looked down and admired her buttock much as Michael had done many times before him.

The unit was small but had everything one would expect in a home. Candy walked into the kitchen as Jeff stood back watching her. Candy liked it when men eyed her off. With her looks and body it was something that happened regularly but the ones she liked looking more than any were those she had feelings for. It made her think of Michael but she quickly wiped that thought from her mind. She could not afford to spend much time thinking of her husband while with a lover.

She looked around the lounge area and hit the back of the leather-bound seat with her hand. She liked leather so she smiled then walked down the short hallway to the bedroom. Jeff walked well behind her and she felt more than saw his eyes following her so she exaggerated the swing of her but for his pleasure hoping it would be enough to inspire him to seduce her.

She was not disappointed. Jeff’s erection had been growing since he first let her through the door. She sat on the edge of the bed that he had gone to a lot of trouble to make neat and tidy just for her benefit.

Candy looked up at him as he moved over to her. She reached out and undid his belt, slipped his fly zipper down to allow his trousers to drop to the floor. Jeff stood stock still until she pulled his ever-growing phallus from his underpants then took it while opening her mouth as wide as she was capable to place her mouth over its head. She twirled her tongue around it then pushed hard with the tip of her tongue against its hole. Jeff groaned as she knew he would but she was shocked when Jeff put his hands on the back of her head and pulled her forcefully towards him.

Shock passed into panic when his penis hit the back of her throat and he kept pulling her head forcing about an inch down her throat. When she struggled he eased off the pressure and he pulled back to allow her to take in a lung full of air but he then repeated the process. Once more she struggled and once more he pulled back but this time she knew that he was not going to suffocate her so she lifted off the bed to align her throat with the angle of his thrust. When he pulled her head towards him this time although her throat had to expand to take his thickness she allowed him to slip another inch further down her throat.

The process continued and inch by inch she took him further down towards her stomach on each thrust forward he made. He made damned sure that he withdrew each time adequately to let her get a lung full of air. Jeff knew that he must not frighten her so he ensured that she was okay but at the same time he was not going to stop until he had to. She didn’t fight him after that second thrust. She could feel his adequate precum and she knew this was helping him slip further into her throat. Sometimes the desire to throw up almost overcome her but she dearly wanted to please this big but gentle man.

As time passed she could feel his erection getting harder and harder so she knew he was not far from cumming. This had her very worried but she didn’t want to disappoint by pushing him away. If he came inside her throat she believed some of it could end up in her lungs. Suddenly her worries disappeared as he pulled out of her mouth and roaring like a Brahman bull he shot sperm up into the air to land on her hair and her face. Over and over again the white viscous fluid of life shot into the air as she watched the huge what looked like a vein on the underside of his cock expand then contract.

She counted one, two, three, four, five, six, seven, eight then two little ones that dropped off the end onto her clothes. She leaned forwards and licked the head of it clean for him but then it throbbed again and a little bit more issued from the big hole. She placed her mouth on it as if kissing it and sucked to take what was left in that big tube into her mouth then swallowed it. She looked up at him as she did it and he smiled down at her.

“I love you,” he told her. “I want you as mine and mine only. I don’t want to share you anymore.”

She was shocked. This was not what she had expected. “I care a lot for you too, Jeff but you know what you just asked is not possible, definitely not so at this point in time.”

“I don’t see why not if you care as much as you say you do.”

“I do mean it but I am married to a good man, someone that I care just as much about someone who allowed me the freedom to be with you. How could I look at myself in the mirror again if I now deceived him? How could you ever trust me if I walked away from a man who gave me absolute freedom to be with you? He even encouraged me to be with you. It is not right for you to now suggest that I should desert him. Can’t you see? It’s just not right.”

“Yes, I guess so.”

“Good. I’m glad you can see how terrible that would be for me to do him over after he gave us so much support.”

“He must know there is risk in what he is doing,” Jeff said as if asking her.

“Yes, he knows there is a risk but that is the very reason why I can’t walk away from him. He trusts me to protect his interests much more so than the average man trusts his wife to never cheat on him. Besides, I love him. I would feel as if part of my heart had been ripped from my body if I lost Michael.”

“So there is no hope for us then?”

“We talked about this. I thought you understood. I will sit with Michael and ask him to accept you into our home as part of our family, as my lover. I thought we had agreed on that.”

“Yes, we had but it’s not the same as having you to myself.”

“No, maybe not but we will have our privacy much of the time.”

“I am driving hours to work and then back again every day. It is wasted time and effort. It’s wearing me out. I discussed it with Helen and she suggested that……… “

Candy cut him off. “So that is why you keep bringing this up. We reach an agreement and then you challenge it because your boss thinks you should do something different. Please, Jeff, make your mind up one way or the other. Don’t let your boss run your life for you.”

“Helen is not running my life for me. She just suggested that if it was just me and you then I could move down to live on the compound as most of the people working for Helen do.”

“I can’t live on the compound at the movie studio after what happened. You should know that. Everybody there knows how we met and what if Tod comes back? What then?”

“Tod is not coming back. This class action thing will destroy him financially if he comes back. Helen is buying out his share in the studio and is putting it aside in case so that it keeps her interests separate from his. She told me that was the deal that she organized with your husband.”

“She organized a deal with Michael?”

“That’s what she told me. He is also trying to sell off other assets quietly before it gets before the courts in case they put a stop on sales of his property.”

“I need to talk to Michael. Do you want to come with me?”

“I need to get some sleep.”

“Yea, right, I’ll see you tomorrow evening then.” Candy picked up her bag and walked out the door leaving Jeff standing there with his mouth open.

[Chrislydi]

Great writing Goyse, another thoroughly entertaining episode.

I'm only playing devil's advocate here, I can read and interpret the way it's going, and the motivation and kinks which make the two couples living together inevitable.

Just thought I'd get in before Asterix42 on the more interesting view.

Jill has it about right....

"She believed that Candy had been a disappointment to both of them"

Candy incredibly tells Jeff, note the qualification does that sound like commitment?

"what you just asked is not possible, definitely not so at this point in time.”

Candy obviously had some latent obligation to Michael but only for now, it's increasingly clear Michael would be far better off ditching her if only he still didn't harbour feelings for her.

She's not very nice at all

(Don't worry Goyse I can see what you hope we (the readers) understand too) - it's good writing!!!

The obvious interpretation,

Michael and Candy love each other, Michael recognises she needs bigger and it really turns him on too, Jeff fits the bill

Michael, Jill and Candy allow Jeff to move in and be Candy's lover, everyone lives happily ever after

[Asterix42]

Thanks for the latest chapter Goyse. Talk about keeping us all on a cliff edge!

Two interesting conversations that both leave the reader with more questions than answers. TBH I found Michael and Jill’s discussion about the on camera revelations quite feeble. All they talked about was “the vote” as to whether or not Jeff would join them and given Jill had asked about that when she came home from making movies, that was the least of their discoveries. Sure Candy plotting behind his back to get what she wants is scarcely anything new, but Michael had previously told Candy that Jeff can’t live with them long term.

I would have thought a few other revelations would have really stood out. For instance, when Candy said “I found out he was making videos and I suspected he might be selling them. Then I met you and you confirmed it.” Previously she’s said she didn’t know she was making porn movies until she found out from Jeff. This statement is the first clear evidence for Michael and Jill that Candy knew about the movies all along and was willingly making porn – Yet it passes unmentioned.

Second is Candy’s revelation that she’s hoping Michael “will accept you (Jeff) into our family like two married couples with links to each other through our feelings and emotions.” Really? Candy wants to live as a married couple with Jeff and there is no comment on that from Michael and Jill. What about Candy and Michael being a married couple? What about Jill and their thruple? They’ve just heard Candy effectively say she wants to end those relationships and they have nothing to say?

Then Jeff says “You got me to get my own unit close handy. I thought you and I would become a couple.” As of the previous evening, Michael knew nothing about this. He had suspicions because of the clothes missing from Candy’s wardrobe, but she’s never told Michael about the apartment, or that she’s planning to live there with Jeff, even if only part time. Plus the way Jeff adds “I thought you would leave him and come live with me,” indicates that they’ve been planning behind Michael’s back in a serious enough manner that Jeff thinks she’s leaving Michael for him. Yet it passes completely without comment.

“Our love is real, Jeff” says Candy, “and I cannot give it up.” Really, she can’t give up Jeff and it goes uncommented on?

Then a real biggie, “I will negotiate with Michael to bring you back into this house as an equal to anyone else in the house. But then what you desire in relation to our love you must be willing to concede to the others in the house. It is like a democracy here. We are all equal and that must never change.” Right, so our two intrepid spies note this and discuss how they will vote. But what about the bigger issue of Candy wanting to establish Jeff with equal decision rights in their lives as Michael? What about how setting up a new democracy with two couples and four votes completely changes everything? Do they want to allow Jeff to have a say in their lives?

Next the real killer. Candy announces that Michael “has to be willing to not only share me sexually as he does now but emotionally as well.” This is a new dynamic and a complete game changer. Coming on top of hearing how Candy wants to live as a married couple with Jeff and wants him to have an equal say in their lives, this spells the death of everything they have. But once again it is not commented on.

Michael and Jill now have their first hard proof that Candy has lied, deceived and gone behind their backs to betray their trust, yet all they talk about is how they will vote? There’s no shock, no indignation, no anger, no reaction of any kind that you’d expect in the circumstances. It’s all somewhat disappointing.

As mentioned before, it would be good to hear some conversation between Candy and Michael. Since she got home we’ve heard just 15 lines of dialogue between them and we really have no idea of the state of their relationship. We are even left guessing as to whether they spend any one-on-one time together at all any. Ditto re Michael's relationship with Jeff. It would have been good to hear some of their interaction to get an idea of how duplicitous Jeff has been while living under Michael's roof.

Finally, it’s interesting that on the video Candy says “You have your unit now and I will spend some of my time with you and some with Michael,” but the next day she says to Jeff “we will have our privacy much of the time.” Sound like she’s not planning on spending much, if any time in the future with Michael. Mind you she’s pissed off enough to walk out on Jeff for 24 hours, so maybe there’s hope yet for Michael. That is if he still wants Candy in his life now that he's seen the proof that he can't trust her to be honest with him and that she is planning to live as a married couple with someone else.

Roll on the next chapter and hopefully some decent interaction and emotion between the key players.

[Chrislydi]

Asterix42 raises some very valid points. We know love is blind, and let's face it Michael would still love Candy even if she chopped his head off, cooked his body on a spit roast over the fire and unbeknownst to Jill, fed it to her married partner for dinner.

She is pure evil and Michael knows it and loves her anyway.

We were watching a program over the weekend 'The Ken and Barbie killers' , about a couple in Canada. ..... It was an inside look at Paul Bernardo and Karla Homolka's relationship, what led the image-obsessed couple to commit cruel and disturbing crimes, and the result of a controversial and transformative trial.

I know Karla, the Barbie lookalike killed her younger sister and helped murder two other captive sex slaves they captured and imprisoned in their home, but she somehow reminded me of what I imagined a blonde Candy might look like, and envisaged Candy possibly evil enough to do likewise too.

- maybe I'm being a little unfair on Candy, but it's arguable I'm not.

In the interests of being entirely fair I'll have to admit I absolutely love Candy as a character, and want her to carry on being very bad indeed, even worse if possible. So might be a little biased in painting her character a little blacker than it really is.

[Asterix42]

In the interests of being entirely fair I'll have to admit I absolutely love Candy as a character, and want her to carry on being very bad indeed, even worse if possible. So might be a little biased in painting her character a little blacker than it really is.

Totally agree. Absolutely hate Candy as a person. Absolutely love her as a character. Would hate it if she ends up all redeemed, thinking and actually caring about what Michael and Jill want in life. Jeff too for that matter, because he too seems to be just a means to an end, someone to be used to get what she wants. She really doesn’t seem to give a shit for anyones feelings and is happy to lie, deceive, mislead and say anything to anyone to get the sexual thrills she thinks she’s entitled to.

Like I said. Love her character