Candy too (part 2 of Candy)

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Re: Candy too (part 2 of Candy)

Unread post by goyse » Thu Apr 28, 2022 7:03 pm

I have resisted posting this but unfortunately, someone has to stand up for Candy here. Her reputation as a mother is being torn to threads. Definitely, Candy did go away with Tod and some would assume that she must have ignored her child to do so but I raise a couple of points that need to be considered. I wrote this a couple of chapters ago but will post it with little change from when I wrote it because Candy still seems to be taking a hammering.
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First off let me say that this series is much longer than I had expected but the end is nigh as they used to say in the olden day writings. Before posting Chapter (update) 51 I'd like to take a moment to address a couple of comments. Not that it is overly important but someone has to speak up occasionally for our heroine, Candy. Remember that although the story is predominately written from Michael's perspective it is about the sexual habits and loves of Candy or at least it is supposed to be.

There you go, see, some thought I would say our hero, Michael and yes, you are correct. Michael is a good guy. He respects women and has a very calm temperament although a little screwed up when it comes to his sexual persuasion, sometimes preferring (often, in fact) to watch than to participate but some on here may understand that much better than I would. Mind, not all or even many as I have been there in person but that is a different story entirely.

Back to the subject, Candy. How do I communicate this.........? Let me put it this way. If I was writing a series about preschool or the naturing of children it is highly unlikely that I would be referring to the sexual habits of Michael and Candy. Do you agree that is a correct statement? if I did that then I'm sure that I would get attacked from all directions and I would expect to be attacked. So it follows .........

This environment is about the sexual habits of couples where the husband is or becomes a cuckold and the girlfriend or wife fits the description of a hotwife. So the question that all by now would understand is 'should we be talking about the nurturing abilities of hotwives?' Obviously, some think it should be part of the story but I prefer to avoid it as it adds a lot of unnecessary information and distracts from the story. If however, I was writing a book then it may be different as to do such would need to set up and follow through with the family scene in the background.

I hope you all see that although even Michael makes comment on the subject in one chapter in his reference to Candy bonding once more with Teddy, the family around Teddy has been most likely very supportive as has Jill who has a very close relationship with the lad.

I appreciate feedback on the story and much of it has helped me as the writer but somehow comments about the failure of the person that the story is about and her motherly instincts seem to me to distract from the subject matter.

Poor Candy! Why does everybody pick on her? Is it so terrible to have an overactive sexual appetite and a loving husband who encourages her in her activities?

Besides, we all know she is going to have to face a distressing separation from someone she loves don't we? Or is that not going to happen?

Has Jeff given up trying to make her leave Michael?

Can Michael live with the thought of him raising someone else's child again or is he going to put his foot down and say, "No, not again!"

If Jeff displaces Michael in Candy's life can he be content to raise another man's child?

And what about the saying "once you go black you always come back"?

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Re: Candy too (part 2 of Candy)

Unread post by goyse » Thu Apr 28, 2022 7:21 pm

Chrislydi wrote:
Thu Apr 28, 2022 6:41 am
Thanks Goyse,

Always appreciate your efforts and reading your continuing inventive twists in the tale. I was eagerly scanning the latest for mentions of Brisbane, Red Hill or Chermside, but obviously all the details of Candy's future Australian itinerary aren't quite worked out yet.

A lot of problems getting new passports here in the UK so maybe problems in other countries too, hope she still gets to come to Europe some day, a lot of men will be disappointed if it's a no show.
.....

Those places were reserved for the third series if in fact there is a third series. I'm tempted though because I have this picture in my mind of our Candy swinging her hips as she walks through the Chermside shopping centre and men knocking over stands as their eyes follow her. Now that is based on one of my memories and it makes me feel a little jealous just thinking about it. Age does that to some of us. It takes the form of, "If only I had........ etc, etc, etc..... "

Perhaps the payout may fund Candy to pursue some adventures somewhere like the UK or Spain or even Queensland but how could she achieve that with two children? Perhaps Michael might get a better paying job that can allow a nany to be employed for a time?

But then Marcus awaits...... in Manly, Sydney and his story still awaits completion...... no... no.... surely not..... are you thinking what I am......... ????

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Re: Candy too (part 2 of Candy)

Unread post by Chrislydi » Thu Apr 28, 2022 9:05 pm

goyse wrote:
Thu Apr 28, 2022 7:21 pm
Chrislydi wrote:
Thu Apr 28, 2022 6:41 am
Thanks Goyse,

Always appreciate your efforts and reading your continuing inventive twists in the tale. I was eagerly scanning the latest for mentions of Brisbane, Red Hill or Chermside, but obviously all the details of Candy's future Australian itinerary aren't quite worked out yet.

A lot of problems getting new passports here in the UK so maybe problems in other countries too, hope she still gets to come to Europe some day, a lot of men will be disappointed if it's a no show.
.....

Those places were reserved for the third series if in fact there is a third series. I'm tempted though because I have this picture in my mind of our Candy swinging her hips as she walks through the Chermside shopping centre and men knocking over stands as their eyes follow her. Now that is based on one of my memories and it makes me feel a little jealous just thinking about it. Age does that to some of us. It takes the form of, "If only I had........ etc, etc, etc..... "

Perhaps the payout may fund Candy to pursue some adventures somewhere like the UK or Spain or even Queensland but how could she achieve that with two children? Perhaps Michael might get a better paying job that can allow a nany to be employed for a time?

But then Marcus awaits...... in Manly, Sydney and his story still awaits completion...... no... no.... surely not..... are you thinking what I am......... ????
How about Oscar offering him a job when he visits Barcelona? Michael's saintly reputation as a kind, tolerant but shrewd operator has spread everywhere by now and even if Oscar's no longer head honcho, a word in the right ear might carry some influence - may get him a position in charge of export sales back home.

Thanks as ever for your timely interventions, always great when the author gets those mischievous posters back in line. I'm disappointed in myself that I could ever have thought Candy anything less than a paragon of motherhood. 😀
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Re: Candy too (part 2 of Candy)

Unread post by Asterix42 » Thu Apr 28, 2022 10:18 pm

Chrislydi wrote:
Thu Apr 28, 2022 9:05 pm
Thanks as ever for your timely interventions, always great when the author gets those mischievous posters back in line. I'm disappointed in myself that I could ever have thought Candy anything less than a paragon of motherhood. 😀
Ditto. A good reminder to stick to comments about Candy’s attributes as a loving, attentive and trustworthy wife! 😉

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Re: Candy too (part 2 of Candy)

Unread post by Chrislydi » Thu Apr 28, 2022 10:56 pm

Asterix42 wrote:
Thu Apr 28, 2022 10:18 pm
Chrislydi wrote:
Thu Apr 28, 2022 9:05 pm
Thanks as ever for your timely interventions, always great when the author gets those mischievous posters back in line. I'm disappointed in myself that I could ever have thought Candy anything less than a paragon of motherhood. 😀
Ditto. A good reminder to stick to comments about Candy’s attributes as a loving, attentive and trustworthy wife! 😉
Tbh it's all for the best, I would be bored rigid if Goyse chose to write on all those mother and baby competitions Candy has walked away with. She's an example to all young girls aspiring to be the best they can at everything in life.
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Re: Candy too (part 2 of Candy)

Unread post by Chrislydi » Thu Apr 28, 2022 11:48 pm

goyse wrote:
Thu Apr 28, 2022 7:21 pm
Chrislydi wrote:
Thu Apr 28, 2022 6:41 am
Thanks Goyse,

Always appreciate your efforts and reading your continuing inventive twists in the tale. I was eagerly scanning the latest for mentions of Brisbane, Red Hill or Chermside, but obviously all the details of Candy's future Australian itinerary aren't quite worked out yet.

A lot of problems getting new passports here in the UK so maybe problems in other countries too, hope she still gets to come to Europe some day, a lot of men will be disappointed if it's a no show.
.....

Those places were reserved for the third series if in fact there is a third series. I'm tempted though because I have this picture in my mind of our Candy swinging her hips as she walks through the Chermside shopping centre and men knocking over stands as their eyes follow her. Now that is based on one of my memories and it makes me feel a little jealous just thinking about it. Age does that to some of us. It takes the form of, "If only I had........ etc, etc, etc..... "

Perhaps the payout may fund Candy to pursue some adventures somewhere like the UK or Spain or even Queensland but how could she achieve that with two children? Perhaps Michael might get a better paying job that can allow a nany to be employed for a time?

But then Marcus awaits...... in Manly, Sydney and his story still awaits completion...... no... no.... surely not..... are you thinking what I am......... ????
Seriously though Goyse, ribbing aside, I'm really enjoying this tale and do appreciate it has to stick to what the readers most want, if it didn't then it probably shouldn't be posted on this site anyway. You have a great mastery of detail and do tie up loose ends with marvelous dexterity. We're all wondering what's going to happen next as you always manage to throw in a twist or two to keep us guessing.

Don't be put off by idiotic comments, I'll cut them out completely if you want, just be assured your efforts are massively appreciated and I do really get the limits of subjects explored on this site. You are one of the best writers on it.
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Re: Candy too (part 2 of Candy)

Unread post by goyse » Fri Apr 29, 2022 2:45 am

Chrislydi wrote:
Thu Apr 28, 2022 11:48 pm
goyse wrote:
Thu Apr 28, 2022 7:21 pm
Chrislydi wrote:
Thu Apr 28, 2022 6:41 am
Thanks Goyse,

Always appreciate your efforts and reading your continuing inventive twists in the tale. I was eagerly scanning the latest for mentions of Brisbane, Red Hill or Chermside, but obviously all the details of Candy's future Australian itinerary aren't quite worked out yet.

A lot of problems getting new passports here in the UK so maybe problems in other countries too, hope she still gets to come to Europe some day, a lot of men will be disappointed if it's a no show.
.....

Those places were reserved for the third series if in fact there is a third series. I'm tempted though because I have this picture in my mind of our Candy swinging her hips as she walks through the Chermside shopping centre and men knocking over stands as their eyes follow her. Now that is based on one of my memories and it makes me feel a little jealous just thinking about it. Age does that to some of us. It takes the form of, "If only I had........ etc, etc, etc..... "

Perhaps the payout may fund Candy to pursue some adventures somewhere like the UK or Spain or even Queensland but how could she achieve that with two children? Perhaps Michael might get a better paying job that can allow a nany to be employed for a time?

But then Marcus awaits...... in Manly, Sydney and his story still awaits completion...... no... no.... surely not..... are you thinking what I am......... ????
Seriously though Goyse, ribbing aside, I'm really enjoying this tale and do appreciate it has to stick to what the readers most want, if it didn't then it probably shouldn't be posted on this site anyway. You have a great mastery of detail and do tie up loose ends with marvelous dexterity. We're all wondering what's going to happen next as you always manage to throw in a twist or two to keep us guessing.

Don't be put off by idiotic comments, I'll cut them out completely if you want, just be assured your efforts are massively appreciated and I do really get the limits of subjects explored on this site. You are one of the best writers on it.
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I appreciate your compliment but know I am not in the category of some and I put Xleg up as an example. Somehow he (she, although I don't think so?) can punctuate every chapter with a sexual excitement of some kind even if it is what one of his is thinking about. That is creative! Man, that is great!

Please don't misunderstand me or my intent. I do appreciate comments and feedback. I just didn't, as you suggested, want to get encouraged into writing about long walks with the baby or baby showers, baby shows, dressing the kids for preschool and the like. Besides, although in my mind I don't believe Candy to be the perfect example of a mother, she really has taken a massive thrashing to her maternal instincts.


The other side of my comments is I like to interact with people who read my stories. Comments tell me what they think and even extend out the story so why shouldn't I respond and hopefully encourage more.

So thanks all for the feedback and keep it coming! ..... but poor Candy!

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Re: Candy too (part 2 of Candy)

Unread post by OZCPL » Fri Apr 29, 2022 5:09 pm

goyse wrote:
Thu Apr 28, 2022 7:21 pm
Chrislydi wrote:
Thu Apr 28, 2022 6:41 am
Thanks Goyse,

Always appreciate your efforts and reading your continuing inventive twists in the tale. I was eagerly scanning the latest for mentions of Brisbane, Red Hill or Chermside, but obviously all the details of Candy's future Australian itinerary aren't quite worked out yet.

A lot of problems getting new passports here in the UK so maybe problems in other countries too, hope she still gets to come to Europe some day, a lot of men will be disappointed if it's a no show.
.....

Those places were reserved for the third series if in fact there is a third series. I'm tempted though because I have this picture in my mind of our Candy swinging her hips as she walks through the Chermside shopping centre and men knocking over stands as their eyes follow her. Now that is based on one of my memories and it makes me feel a little jealous just thinking about it. Age does that to some of us. It takes the form of, "If only I had........ etc, etc, etc..... "

Perhaps the payout may fund Candy to pursue some adventures somewhere like the UK or Spain or even Queensland but how could she achieve that with two children? Perhaps Michael might get a better paying job that can allow a nany to be employed for a time?

But then Marcus awaits...... in Manly, Sydney and his story still awaits completion...... no... no.... surely not..... are you thinking what I am......... ????
WOW thanks Goyse for the preview I am now even more keen to see what turns up for Michael and Candy. Nice though, to completely understand that Candy is a good mother.

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Re: Candy too (part 2 of Candy)

Unread post by goyse » Sat Apr 30, 2022 10:15 pm

Candy too Chapter 51

Michael moved the table in the motel unit so that there was more room for him to sit on one side and for Leslie to sit on the other. He moved around from his side of the table to Leslie’s side and checked that the seat was positioned so she could look out across the marina. Someone had told him that Leslie loved boating which was the incentive for him to move the seating. “Perfect,” he mumbled.

He looked up and there was Leslie just inside the door watching him. On their last meeting, Leslie had just recovered from major surgery to remove her tumours so she looked white with a hint of yellow on her face but the Leslie that he looked at now was not only a healthy tanned woman but an absolutely gorgeous one as well. It was obvious to him that she had lost all signs of the yellowish tint he identified as typical of people who were seriously ill from cancer and the hair with its scattering of grey was now jet black. He knew it was probably dyed but it had changed to the extent that he wondered if, in fact, she wore a wig.

“Hi Leslie,” he said. “Come sit here. I was just reorganizing the table to give us a bit more room.”

Leslie smiled and moved across as she did so. “How are you, Michael,” she asked.

“I’m fine. I heard you like boats so I thought this location might be a great place to meet.”

“Yes, I love boats and the water. There is a type of unpredictability about the ocean,” she told him as she looked out across the marina, “that draws me to it. The ocean without boats is like a car without a steering wheel, it limits you to what you can see right there.”

“Do you own a boat?”

“Oh, yes, I have a good-sized boat. The funny thing is that I don’t get to use it much but it is still an important part of my life. Tod never liked boating much unless we had a few extra women on board with us. I should have read the signs, shouldn’t I?” She grinned. Michael read the grin as a means to hide her embarrassment.

“Do you miss him,” he asked? But then realized she might not like him to ask about her break up so added, “I’m sorry. I shouldn’t have asked that. I didn’t mean to pry.”

“No, it’s okay. If anybody else asked, I might not like it but somehow it seems natural for you to ask given your involvement. Yes, I do miss him. The house is so large and I was trapped in it for so long, seldom even having him around and now it is just me.” She smiled again then shook her head before continuing, “But don’t read that as if he’s coming back any time soon. Our relationship is history.”

Michael didn’t know how to reply so he just said, “I see. It must be difficult.”

“How about you, tell me about the relationship you have with Candy. How is it that you can sit at home by yourself while she….. you know….. has it off with other men?”

“It’s difficult for me to explain. I guess the only way I can explain it is that she needs things that I can’t deliver so I have to make choices to let her find what she needs elsewhere.”

“That tells me nothing so let me ask, is it about cock size?”

Michael was surprised that she spoke so openly. “I guess that is a big part of it but there is more to it than just size.”

Leslie chuckled, “I love your choice of words.”

Michael didn’t catch on immediately so he asked, “sorry?”

She laughed out loud at that, “You know you said, big part followed by cock size.”

“Oh, yes,” he chuckled, “I guess I didn’t think much about what I was saying.”

“Can I assume that you are small, Michael?”

Michael blushed but replied. “I think of myself as normal-sized.”

“I like normal-sized men. I have never understood why women go for men like Tod. I think some of them are lacking in some way so try to make up for it by chasing big thinking it will be better.”

“Are you saying my wife is in some way lacking? Besides, you ended up married to him.”

“No, no, don’t misunderstand me. I was talking in general terms. I don’t know your wife so I can’t say if the profile fits or not and there are many more reasons to marry a man than the size of his treasure.”

Michael failed to respond but instead moved around the table and took his seat then looked up at her. Leslie’s smile had evaporated. She placed her briefcase on the table and then told him, “I’m sorry, Michael if I have upset you. I should not have said that. Please forgive me. I somehow feel as if I have known you all my life and so I have trouble not speaking openly to you.”

Michael looked back at her, “Leslie you haven’t upset me. You have raised a question that I have always pushed to the back of my mind and kept neatly hidden away. It’s something that I have never wanted to face openly, I guess.”

“A question about your wife, I assume?”

“No, the question is not entirely about Candy. The question is more about me.”

“Now you have me stumped.”

“Well, I don’t know how to put the question into words because I don’t think the English language has the words to present my feelings and desires but if I can trust you to never speak of it outside this room I’ll try.”

“I promise. No one will ever hear what you tell me.”

“Okay, let me ask you what you think of when you make love to your husband?”

“My ex-husband.”

“Okay, point taken but you do know what I’m asking.”

“Let me see. It has changed with time but when we first got married I felt this unbelievable attraction to him as a person that made my heart beat faster which intensified the feelings and that made me feel as if we were part of each other. That melding of our desires led to me losing control of my mind such that I no longer felt my body just my feelings. The result was my orgasm.”

“Wow, that is really something!”

“Yes, it was. It controlled me not only during sex but almost everything I did was associated with that desire and the feelings.”

“You said it changed.”

“Yes, it did. I found one of my friends was screwing him and I forgave him but the feelings were less intense after that. Then there was Sue and then Jane and then Nicole and the list went on and on, each one stealing a little of that feeling from me until I told him if you do it again we’re finished.”

“And he did it again with Candy?”

“No, Candy came late on the list. Our fate was sealed long before Candy came along.”

“Thank God for that. So how did it change? I mean when you had sex with him the last time how did it feel for you?”

“I thought we were going to talk about you and Candy.”

“Yes, we will if you want but first I’d like to hear the conclusion to your experience. Life is like a journey and to hear the start without the destination makes it more or less meaningless, I think.”

“Okay, well, let me think,” she looked out over the ocean. Her face looked vacant as if she was resting or something similar then she spoke quietly, “today I have a six-inch dildo that I use for sexual satisfaction. Tod and I have not had sex for well over twelve months but I’m in love with my six-incher as I call it such that I have more positive feelings for my six-incher than I have had for Tod for well over two years. I can’t even get angry with him these days. The man is a bloodsucking insect and it is very difficult to feel attracted to an oversized mosquito or a blood-sucking blowfly. You just want to swat it to get rid of it.”

“Yet, you are here dealing with this business for him.”

She looked at Michael as if he had insulted her. “I’m not here for him. I’m here for the women he used and threw away like they were a used tissue. I’m here for the husbands who suffered because he seduced their wives. I’m here for the kids who have to listen to the parents trying to recover their relationships after what he and the wives have done. I’m here for my businesses and my business reputation that suffered because of it all. I’m also here for you, Michael and that policeman mate of yours because although you don’t seem to have realized it yet, one day you will have to look at your wife and ask the question, ‘whose baby is she carrying,’ in the same way that your mate had to.”

“I see but you might not understand as well as you think you do.”

“Well, I’m listening.”

Michael didn’t hesitate he simply told her, “I’m a cuckold.”

“Yes, Tod cuckolded you with your wife.”

Michael smiled. “No, I was a cuckold well before Tod met my wife. I have a desire to have my wife make love to well-endowed men. The ultimate in sexual satisfaction for me comes about when I can watch another big man make love to my wife and then have her come back to me.”

Leslie looked shocked. “Oh, I see. But Tod took her away so you couldn’t watch and most certainly couldn’t have sex with her after he had finished with her.”

“Yes, that was a damn shame. But you still don’t seem to understand.”

“What don’t I understand?”

“I didn’t say ‘have sex with her’ I said ‘make love to her’.”

“I see, so you enjoy watching the seduction.”

“Now you’re getting it. Candy and I do not have the big issues that some other couples might have with what happened but Tod deceived Candy. He treated her like a piece of shit that he could use then cast her away at a moment’s notice. For that, he much suffer. If he had respected her and dealt with the ending of their relationship the right way then I would not be here now.”

“That is Tod described to a T. He uses and then he walks away. I don’t understand your relationship with your wife but I respect your right to do what you are doing.”

“Thanks, Leslie.”

“Can I be honest with you Michael about you and me?”

“I think I know what you’re about to say. I think I feel it too as you described it, you know that feeling of security with each other as if we have known each other for all our lives so I have to tell you something first." He hesitated for a while before he told her, "I won’t cheat on Candy.”

Leslie smiled across the table at him and said, “Well, you can’t blame a deserted wife for trying.”

“I think you are a very attractive woman, Leslie and I’m sure there are many men who would walk over hot coals to have an opportunity to spend time with you but I’m not the one and it’s not because I don’t find you attractive. If the day ever comes when I wish to cheat on my wife, you will be top of my list but I should add that I don’t think that day will ever come.”

“Okay, well, let’s deal with Tod’s business then I’ll take you for lunch before outlining my job offer to you.”

“Okay, let’s see his statement of admission first, shall we.”

“Okay, I had to get him to redo it several times because it read more like an excuse for what he did but finally it became an admission of fact.”

Leslie handed him a ten-page document and then told him, “I have made a copy for you to read out to the others. I’d like you to destroy the copy before we lock the original up in the local bank. Only you and he will have access to that.”

“I had thought that Chick might represent the women.”

“No, Tod was insistent that you represent the women. For some unknown reason, he thinks you’re the only one he can trust. Candy must have somehow convinced him of your honesty and I don’t think she and he are wrong.”

“Okay, thanks for the compliment,” As he spoke Michael was scanning the pages of Tod’s confession. “I can see by the first page that it is likely to be suitable.”

“This document," she held up a document, "the original will need witnessing signatures from all the ladies to it in the position specified and then I’ll need bank details for each so the money can be deposited. I’ll organize my office where the ladies can come to sign it in my presence. Here is my number for them to call when they are ready.”

“Is there anything else?”

“Not really. The signatures do away with any future action against him as long as the money is deposited to each account in the time specified. That is in the document they will sign.”

“Okay let’s have lunch and then I have booked us a boat trip to the Island and back.”

“You’re taking me out to the island and back?”

“Yes, as long as you promise not to seduce me.”

“Now, I’m not sure about that. A lady has needs, you know.” They both chuckled at her joke although she felt there may be some truth to it.

“I thought you had a six-incher for that? And might I add that I wouldn’t like to make it jealous. ”

“Yes, that’s true and it just might get jealous. I love him but often the conversation lacks something.”

Michael laughed, “You miss all the Oohhhs and the aaaahhhhs do you?”

“Very much indeed.”

“Well, let’s see who is on the boat, will we. Of course, it will need to be someone with a very loud voice to make up for all the ohing and ahing you have missed out on over the last two years.”

“Let’s do that,” she said with a laugh then took his arm much the same way as young lovers might when going on their first date. She surprised him so he looked down at her and their eyes met and she fluttered her eyes. He smiled as he felt his erection rising. The desire to kiss her was almost over-welling but he succeeded in fighting it.

‘No, none of that he thought to himself,’ but even though he knew she would respect his wishes the thought of her paying him attention made him experience a very warm feeling inside. ‘I could really like this woman,’ he thought to himself. ‘Yes, working for her will be great. We understand each other and she respects people.’

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Re: Candy too (part 2 of Candy)

Unread post by OOAA » Sat Apr 30, 2022 10:23 pm

GREAT chapter!!!

Amazing sentence:

He hesitated for a while before he told her, "I won’t cheat on Candy.” 😍😍

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Re: Candy too (part 2 of Candy)

Unread post by Chrislydi » Sun May 01, 2022 12:01 am

Another wonderful installment,

Leslie seems to be not only an attractive woman but a really honest and good person too, and we know of Michael's qualities already, if only then, but perhaps only in another lifetime as Michael's loyalty won't permit him to stray. Didn't he sleep with Mary, Sergeant Chick's wife? - although admittedly Jill and Mary had set that one up, and Jill being his 'other' wife sort of makes it not cheating on Candy? and then wasn't there Sally, his neighbour's wife as well? Sometimes the blurring of the lines between being ok and cheating are hard to follow or recognise.

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Re: Candy too (part 2 of Candy)

Unread post by goyse » Sun May 01, 2022 6:52 am

Chrislydi wrote:
Sun May 01, 2022 12:01 am
Another wonderful installment,

Leslie seems to be not only an attractive woman but a really honest and good person too, and we know of Michael's qualities already, if only then, but perhaps only in another lifetime as Michael's loyalty won't permit him to stray. Didn't he sleep with Mary, Sergeant Chick's wife? - although admittedly Jill and Mary had set that one up, and Jill being his 'other' wife sort of makes it not cheating on Candy? and then wasn't there Sally, his neighbour's wife as well? Sometimes the blurring of the lines between being ok and cheating are hard to follow or recognise.

Chris.
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Good point indeed but sometimes I wonder just how many good, reliable people in this world always do exactly what they say especially so after the fact. By after the fact I mean, they do something and then say, "I won't do that again," often because it tears at their conscience.

An elderly gentleman that I once worked with as a much younger man told me that in this world there are good people and there are bad people but perfect people are just a fantasy. As I've grown older I can bear witness to that statement, especially where sexual opportunity and money are concerned.

Goyse.

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Re: Candy too (part 2 of Candy)

Unread post by Chrislydi » Sun May 01, 2022 8:01 am

goyse wrote:
Sun May 01, 2022 6:52 am


Good point indeed but sometimes I wonder just how many good, reliable people in this world always do exactly what they say especially so after the fact. By after the fact I mean, they do something and then say, "I won't do that again," often because it tears at their conscience.

An elderly gentleman that I once worked with as a much younger man told me that in this world there are good people and there are bad people but perfect people are just a fantasy. As I've grown older I can bear witness to that statement, especially where sexual opportunity and money are concerned.

Goyse.
Wise words from the elderly gentleman.

Yeah a lesson I've always borne in mind is you can't always correct past mistakes but you can always learn lessons and be a better person in the future. There's no point spending time or thought on something in the past that you can't change, so just concentrate on what you can control.

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Re: Candy too (part 2 of Candy)

Unread post by OOAA » Sun May 01, 2022 10:49 pm

goyse wrote:
Sun May 01, 2022 6:52 am
Chrislydi wrote:
Sun May 01, 2022 12:01 am
Another wonderful installment,

Leslie seems to be not only an attractive woman but a really honest and good person too, and we know of Michael's qualities already, if only then, but perhaps only in another lifetime as Michael's loyalty won't permit him to stray. Didn't he sleep with Mary, Sergeant Chick's wife? - although admittedly Jill and Mary had set that one up, and Jill being his 'other' wife sort of makes it not cheating on Candy? and then wasn't there Sally, his neighbour's wife as well? Sometimes the blurring of the lines between being ok and cheating are hard to follow or recognise.

Chris.
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Good point indeed but sometimes I wonder just how many good, reliable people in this world always do exactly what they say especially so after the fact. By after the fact I mean, they do something and then say, "I won't do that again," often because it tears at their conscience.

An elderly gentleman that I once worked with as a much younger man told me that in this world there are good people and there are bad people but perfect people are just a fantasy. As I've grown older I can bear witness to that statement, especially where sexual opportunity and money are concerned.

Goyse.
Sharing wisdom indeed!!! Thanks Goyse! 😉

goyse

Re: Candy too (part 2 of Candy)

Unread post by goyse » Mon May 02, 2022 5:16 am

Candy too Chapter 52.

Michael came down to breakfast late expecting that the house would be empty. Teddy was spending another night with his parents so it was a very big surprise when Candy was still sitting at the breakfast table drinking her coffee.

“Good morning, sweetheart. You’ll be late for work. It’s eight o’clock already.”

“I’m not going in today.”

“Are you not well?”

“I’m as fine as a five-month pregnant woman can ever be. I had my little chunder event when I cleaned my teeth and now I’m feeling fine.”

“I know you well enough to know that you don’t take a day off work without good reason. Do you have something on today?”

“Yes, I do. I was hoping to seduce my husband first off.”

“Hhmm, well, we could organize that without much trouble. Are you wearing your new boyfriend out already?”

“No, it’ll take a better woman than me to achieve that, I’m afraid.”

“Ah, well, I can think of someone who would be willing to help when the time is right if you need help with him.”

“Do you mean Jilly?”

“Yes, I do mean Jilly.” Michael smiled knowing how perceptive Candy could be. He had already guessed she had suspected Jill’s interest in Jeff. “I have to say that I am not overly excited about it but you saw how she looked when we caught lover boy painting my computer with his seed.”

Candy chuckled. “Yes, I did and I guessed that you and she would be talking about it. What have you come up with?”

“I’ve reluctantly agreed,” he hesitated before he continued, “If you agree, that is to allow her the opportunity to seduce him after our baby is born and she has recovered. How do you feel about it?”

“I feel your suggestion is appropriate but it should be a once-only thing and I’d like you to make love to her first.”

“I have also told her once or twice only. Why would you want me to go first?”

“She’s not like me. She will recover quickly after the birth so she will need lubrication. There is none better than male sperm. Besides, when you and I have sex before Jeff he goes wild even though he doesn’t know so I think he will enjoy it more if he is getting slippery seconds.”

“I could get the after ejaculation blues and want to thump him.”

“You’ll have me there with you and I’ll help you out.”

“Well, I guess it will be alright. I’m a cuckold so it is something that I have to put up with, bigger and better men seducing my lovers, I mean.”

“Hey! Bigger he may be but never better. I’ve been with a few bigger men than you Michael but there have never been any one of those who have been better, not now, not ever.”

“Thanks, honey, I needed that.”

“Well, we are wasting our day talking about something that will not happen until next year. Let’s go up to bed and make whoopee.”

“I need to clean my teeth first.”

“Yep, that’s a good idea. I’ll wait for you in your bed.”

Michael felt as if someone had driven a knife into his heart when she said, ‘your bed’ rather than our bed but he disguised it well and told her, “Well, let’s go then.”

….

Around a month later Candy told Michael at breakfast that two hundred and fifty thousand dollars had been deposited into her personal account and she had arranged to transfer one hundred thousand into his account. She then turned to Jill and told her that she had transferred seventy-five thousand into her account.

“Why so much into my account,” Michael asked.

“If it wasn’t for you no one would get anything and Tod would continue to deceive other women. When I went in to sign the paperwork I spoke to Leslie, your new boss and she told me how much she admires you for what you have done for everybody. I believe you have won yourself a fan who thinks the world of you.”

“I’m no hero. I just think Tod deceived us all including his wife so I set out to teach him a lesson in respect for others. He doesn’t know it but there was a point at which he could have walked away untouched.”

“But that was only because I wasn’t strong enough.”

“You were emotionally involved so you didn’t want to hurt a past lover. That’s fine. I understood.”

Candy shook her head. “I often wonder how you deal with things so cool. Most men would get angry at the thought of their wife having sex with another man but you deal with it quietly and logically. Why is it that you never get angry about anything?”

“Would it change anything if I got angry and ran around making threats? All that would do is frighten everybody away including you most likely.”

“I guess but it seems unusual. Michael and Jilly I would like to invest the next two hundred and fifty thousand dollars for the future of the kids if neither of you has any objection. How do you feel about that?”

Although Candy looked back and forth between them both, Michael knew she expected him to respond first. Jill expected the same.

“I think it’s a great idea. What do you think, Jill?”

“Yes, it will be good for Teddy and your new baby to have some money set aside for their education.”

Candy smiled, “We will have three children. Your baby is entitled as well.”

“Well thanks,” Jill told her, “but I hadn’t expected that.”

“We are a truple, Jilly. You are as much my partner as Michael is.”

Michael sat back and listened to the ladies. He had a question but he felt that could wait for now but then Jill asked her, “What about Jeff?”

“Jeff is my lover. He is not part of our truple. The core of our family is you, me and Michael and the kids. For now, that will not change. In fact, it may never change.”

Jill looked at her with her head turned away from the vertical. It was a questioning pose but Candy just smiled at her and didn’t speak. Eventually, Jill asked, “Why? What’s happening Candy?”

“I’m not ready to speak about it just yet so I’d appreciate it if you left it to me and didn’t ask too many questions.”

“You’re not jealous because he is showing me attention, are you?”

“No, that is not the issue. When the time is right I’ll talk to you and Michael and if everybody agrees, I’ll let him off the leash for you. The time is not right yet but it will happen in time. Remember it is for one unique experience, maybe even two but with both Michael and me present. Try leaving either of us out and all hell will break loose.”

“Does he know?”

“Yes, we have spoken about it. He knows and respects the restrictions and constraints.”

“Explain restrictions and constraints for me.”

“The same as we have discussed. Michael has to be present and has to agree and it will only be once or twice. I had told him once but Michael thought that maybe a second time might be acceptable. I’m not saying it is but only that a second time might be acceptable.”

“Okay, but what about this when the time is right thing?”

“That is to allow you to have yours and Michael’s baby first. There would need to be a recovery period of maybe three months after the birth then bingo!”

“You really know how to make a girl suffer, don’t you?”

“It’s not about making you suffer, Jilly. It’s about thinking of the baby first then there is Michael who has concerns about him hurting you. Besides you have heard the saying that absence makes the heart grow fonder.”

“It’s certainly working. I get wet every time he talks to me and I noticed him getting a hard-on when we sat together for a cup of coffee while you and Michael were out shopping.”

“Michael and I trust you to keep him under control until the time is right. Are you up to that?”

“Yes. I won’t go behind your back if that is what you’re asking?”

“Good. Now, what are we going to do with our newly acquired funds?”

There was quiet for a short time then Jill told them, “I need a better car. I would like a little Suzuki hatch.”

“Yes, they look good,” Michael told her, “and they are very reliable.”

“We will need some things for our babies,” Candy said.

“Yes,” Jill agreed. “Maybe we could go shopping this Saturday. Would you look after Teddy to allow us to go, Michael?”

“Yep, no problems but only on the condition that we take a holiday to the coast next weekend. I went with Leslie to the Island to check it out and it seems perfect for us to spend a weekend together for a break.”

Candy turned around to him and stated, “You didn’t tell me that you and Leslie went to the Island.”

“No, but I went there to check it out to see if it was suitable for us to go for a holiday.”

“Hhhhmmm, okay. You do know your new boss has a thing for you, don’t you?”

“No, she’s just a friendly person besides she knows I’m not available.”

“Yea, right, there are none as blind as he who will not see.”

“What is that supposed to mean?”

“It means that unless you choose to see that Leslie has a thing for you, you will never know.”

“Are you jealous, Candy?”

“No not jealous, just cautious. Remember I gave you Jilly.”

“Candy, I’m shocked. That is a terrible thing for you to say. You didn’t give Jill to me. You gave us both an opportunity. Jill and I took that opportunity and it has worked for all three of us. You can’t give people away to others.”

Candy giggled like a little girl. “Okay, whatever you say but you need to understand that Leslie is not on the menu.”

“Point taken.”

“Good, come on Jilly, let’s make a cup of tea and think about what we need for our babies. We’ll leave Michael to dream about what it would be like to have sex with Tod’s ex-wife to claim his revenge. It looks as if she is out to claim hers if only he’ll cooperate.”

Michael shook his head, sent her the bird and headed to his office. He wanted to check the cameras to see if Jeff and Candy had been reading his stories again. He was not disappointed. He smiled hoping that Jill would not spill the beans on him.

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Re: Candy too (part 2 of Candy)

Unread post by Chrislydi » Mon May 02, 2022 6:24 am

Another chapter and a wonderful bank holiday treat.

Jeff to make a quadruple (if that's the right word) or maybe largely paired off as two couples for sex (all connected in a four way marriage)? Love the way Jeff gets a go or two with Jill now, mind you Michael may find he loves it too.

On the next US$250,000 for education that was suggested for the three kids? Is this not including the US$250,000 just deposited? - if not they'll be saving pretty fast, maybe Michael's new job pays extremely well. I just looked up my old school's fees per year, and it's now the equivalent of US$50,000 year multiply that by three children and the money won't last two years.

Maybe invest it and keep for university fees later on in life?
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Re: Candy too (part 2 of Candy)

Unread post by goyse » Mon May 02, 2022 8:22 pm

Why not another bank holiday treat! I've finished the series so will post the remainder over the next week or two.

Candy too Chapter 53

Life went on for Candy, Michael and Jill. Probably the only difference in their life was that Jeff travelled to the movie-making facility more often to train the people who were hiring the facility. Working night shift for Jeff became more common than it had been which meant that Candy spent many more nights with Michael and Jill. Michael knew that Jeff was choosing to take the majority of the night shifts so he wondered what was affecting him. It was likely that Jill was thinking the same thing but neither asked Candy nor even raised the question of Jeff’s absence with her.

The three of them had their holiday on the Island but even though they enjoyed their couple of days away and all three found it very relaxing there was really nothing exceptional that happened there. It was not surprising because boat trips to Islands are never that exciting for women who are seven months pregnant but both girls knew that Michael wanted to take them on the trip so neither offered up one negative comment. Michael’s parents had loved the opportunity to have their grandson overnight and offered as they had many times before to babysit for them whenever they wished.

Michael regularly checked the cameras in his office but either Jeff or Candy had woken up to the cameras or else for some reason they had given up reading his stories. Michael suspected that Jill may have told Candy but when he asked her she denied it and he doubted that she had any reason to lie to him. He wondered why but then he realised that Jeff was spending more time away from the house so maybe they didn’t get adequate time together to indulge in such things.

The girls stopped working soon after the trip to the Island and spent their days at home together with Teddy. Michael was pleased as Candy was now spending a good deal of that time bonding with their son once more. By this stage, Jeff was only spending two nights a week at their house. No one said much about it but Michael and Jill realised that he was most likely having problems coming to terms with Candy’s pregnancy. Without talking to him, Michael knew it was impossible to tell exactly why but the most likely reason was that the child was not his. He knew he could not interfere without Candy’s permission or it might cause a split between Candy and Jeff or worse still between Candy and Michael so he just let it all happen and watched from a distance.

Eight months of pregnancy came and went for Candy and Jill then one day Candy asked Jill to call Michael and tell him to come home from work.

“He won’t be happy coming home if I don’t give him a good reason,” she replied.

“Just tell him I’m about to go into Labour and he’ll come,” she told her.

“Really?”

“Yes, Really, I wouldn’t joke about such a thing.”

“But you’re so calm!”

“I bloody won’t be if you don’t call my husband and get him here as quick as you can, bitch.” Jill laughed and made the call.

Ten minutes later Michael came through the door. “Where is she,” he asked.

“Right in front of you on the lounge room chair,” Jill told him as Candy’s head appeared above the back of the chair.

“We’d better get you to the maternity ward then,” Michael told her. She nodded and smiled then grimaced in pain as a contraction hit.

….

Candy’s baby was born around two hours later. After the staff had cleaned the little girl and her mum had held her they took the babe across to Michael and Jill both of whom were waiting patiently.

“Do you want to hold her,” the nurse asked Michael?

He was too overcome to answer but just nodded. The nurse explained how to support the baby’s neck and Michael held her for a time. He then asked Jill to hold her. Jill tried to decline but Michael insisted. Before she took the baby she took a photo with her camera.

After Jill had held the baby the nurse took her away after telling Candy she had fifteen minutes before Michael and Jill had to leave. Michael sat on the bed beside Candy and told her, “I’m so proud of you, honey.”

“Thanks, sweetheart but I’m also proud of you. Now I know who her father is.”

“You know no matter what I would always be there supporting you and the kid.”

“No, I mean your child. She’s yours. Look at her features. She’s a spitting image of you. Tod has a long jawline. You don’t. That nose, it’s yours, just a junior copy. When you get home take a good look at the photo that Jilly took and then look in the mirror. That’s why I couldn’t understand how Tod could have got me pregnant. I was already pregnant. I didn’t ovulate late. I ovulated early on that last night when we made love before I left or maybe even the night before.”

“I love you, Candy. I have loved you since our first date. Our relationship is safe no matter what from my perspective.”

Jill cut in, “Michael, do you mind if I interrupt your conversation?”

“Sure, of course, I don’t mind.”

“I believe she is right. Come with me.” Jill approached the nurse who just returned to the room. “Nurse, the dad wants to hold his baby once more, do you mind?”

“Sure. Follow me but you must leave after and let bubs and mum get some rest. They have had a couple of difficult hours and they need sleep to recover.”

The nurse led them to the nursery where another nurse was sitting with Candy’s baby. Jill picked up the child and passed her to Michael. Michael looked closely before handing the child back to the nurse who took her back to Candy. Michael led the way out of the hospital. He unlocked the car and Jill got in the passenger seat. They drove home in silence.

When they got home Michael turned to Jill and asked, “A cup of coffee?”

“Yes, thanks, Michael.”

They sat in silence and drank their brew after which Michael picked up the cups and washed them as Jill watched. She smiled waiting for him to speak. Eventually, Michael turned to her.

“You know, I had prepared myself to raise someone else’s child. Not for one moment did I think she would be mine but you and Candy are right. She’s the spitting image of me so I believe that she is my child but the real test comes tomorrow.”

“The real test, what’s that?”

“My mum will want to meet her granddaughter tomorrow. She will know for sure but no matter what the outcome she will always be my child anyway even if others don’t accept it.”

“What about Jeff. Should we notify him?”

“I’d love to but if Candy wanted us to do that she would have told us but she didn’t. I’m not sure what is going on there so I have no right to interfere in their relationship. Come on, let’s go to bed. It’s been a big night for us all.”

As they walked towards the bedroom Jill reached across and took Michael’s hand. He looked down at her and smiled.

“I love you as much as I love Candy, you know.”

“Yes, I know and I love you too, Jill.”

“I’m a little frightened after seeing what Candy went through, you know the birth and all that.”

“Yes, I can understand. Is there some way that I can help?”

“No, just be there for me, that’s all.”

“I’ll always be there for you Jill no matter what happens in the same way as I’ll always be there for Candy.”

“I think Candy and Jeff may have split up.”

“Did Candy tell you that?”

“No, she hasn’t said anything at all. It is just that he wasn’t there and she didn’t try to contact him.”

“I’ll go check his room to see if his gear has gone.”

“Alright.”

Michael made his way to Candy and Jeff’s room. It didn’t take him long to find out that Jeff’s clothes and gear were gone. He returned to Jill and told her, “Yes, all his gear is gone. He has left her.”

“If she knows she hasn’t let on at all.”

“No, I guess we just have to wait to see what happens. She will tell us when she is ready. She is in love with him, you know.”

“Yes, I know. She told me that she loved him as much as she does you. She also told me that he was perfect except for one big problem. He continually wanted her to leave us to go live with him.”

“Yes, she didn’t tell me but I overheard them talking about it.”

“You heard that and you didn’t say anything.”

“No, it would have been wrong of me to interfere because it was a decision that Candy had to make without due pressure. I’m glad that she didn’t leave.”

“Yes, so am I but I have to say something to you, Michael. It was wrong of you not to talk to me about it.”

“She must have been under intense pressure. I couldn’t put her in a situation where that pressure was increased by you telling her not to go.”

Jill shook her head, “I would have helped her through it without putting more pressure on her. She probably needed someone to talk to about it all.”

“She had two people to talk to but she chose not to. I was always there and she knows I would have accepted her decision no matter how much it hurt me.”

“Anyhow, it looks as if it is all over. We need to be there for her as much as possible. It’ll take a while to recover.”

“Come here, Jill and lay on my shoulder.” Jill moved across and put her head on his shoulder as she had done many times before. He held her tightly thinking about Candy and the baby as well as Jeff. After about fifteen minutes Jill gave a little snort followed by a quiet little snore as she drifted off to sleep.

He smiled and thought how lucky he was to have such wonderful women to share his life with and before long he too drifted off to sleep dreaming about Jill and Jeff making love. In his sleep, out of force of habit, he reached down and adjusted himself in his PJ pants. Jill felt him move and wondered if he was dreaming of Candy and Jeff making love in his computer room. The thought of it turned her on and she felt her juices rising. Little did she know that she was to be the starring attraction in his dreams that night and many others to come?

She rolled over away from him and pushed her buttock back against him hard enough to disturb him a little. His reaction was to roll toward her as he always did so his crotch was pushing up against her buttock. She reached back and managed to remove his stiff cock from the fly in his PJs. She then directed him to her pussy and then pushed back against him.

In his dream, Jeff had just cum inside Jill and she had moved over to him to push her cream filled bottom up against him as he slid all the way inside her. The feeling was wonderful so he humped up at her sliding as far inside her as he could while placing his arms around her to hold her breasts, one in each hand. He was surprised that her usual small breasts seemed so full as Candy had been when she was about to bear his child.

He tried to fathom it but then decided, ‘of course, she is breastfeeding their son,’ but something didn’t quite fit so he opened his eyes to find he was in fact as his dream suggested inside Jill and she was pushing back against him.

The surprise made him start to pull out of her but she mumbled as she moaned, “Oh, Michael, please, don’t pull out. Fuck me. I’m about to cum.”

Michael needed no more invitation. He thrust forward as he squeezed her tight against his body. He felt the rhythm of her orgasm and the wetness of her juices between them as he joined her in orgasm.

They lay quiet for quite a while as they both recovered before she told him, “I love you, Michael. There was a time in my life when I thought that love had passed me by and if it wasn’t for Candy I may never have found it. I owe her big time. It’s a debt that I may never be able to pay.”

“Yes, I know. We both owe her big time. That is the reason why I can never even try to stop her if she decides that she wants to be with someone else. It will almost kill me if it ever happens but after what she has done for us we don’t have the right to stop her from having what she desires.”

“Yes, I understand. We are so lucky to have her.”

“Yes,” Michael said as once more he drifted off to sleep.

Jill smiled and mumbled, “Men, they always want to sleep when women want to talk especially after sex.” She shook her head and pushed back a little more to keep him inside her as she too closed her eyes to allow her dreams to control her mind.

Jeff was never to know how often he was the star in the dreams in that house.

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Re: Candy too (part 2 of Candy)

Unread post by Chrislydi » Mon May 02, 2022 8:57 pm

Wow Goyse, brilliant.

That was one of your best ever chapters for my money.

There was more about real feelings, a sensuous quality and confirmation of a lasting bond between the three, what they share and what they owe to each other.

Jeff looks for all money like a second Greg, Greg couldn't handle Teddy not being his, and maybe the possibility, well almost certainty that Candy wasn't pregnant by him proved too much to handle. A few of us had speculated Candy's second child might be Michael's, and although it wouldn't have made any difference to how he felt, there seemed a fitting and perhaps 'rightness' about him being the biological as well as real father.

Jill is so perfect in every way, I think a few of us are falling for her, if only it wasn't just a story - she may still be behind xleg's Jen in my heart but it's getting close 😀

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Re: Candy too (part 2 of Candy)

Unread post by goyse » Tue May 03, 2022 12:15 am

Candy too Chapter 54

“My God,” Michael’s mum said, “It is as if I was reliving the day that I first saw you in the hospital. She’s a female version of you.”

“Yes, Candy keeps telling me that she looks just like me.”

“She does. She’s not at all like her brother. I don’t know where Teddy came from.” She looked around to make sure no one could hear and asked quietly, “Are you sure Teddy in yours? You can tell me, you know.”

“Mum! What a terrible thing to ask! Don’t you love Teddy? You and dad seem to love him and you certainly like him to stay with you.”

“I’m sorry, Michael but there is no one in our family with his complexion. It’s so dark. Our family on both sides are so light-skinned and as I have said before he carries none of your features.”

“He’s a child, mum, my child so we should not be talking like this. Throwbacks happen in all families. You know that.”

“Yes, I know. Aunt Virginia had a boy who was a lot darker than Teddy. Everybody thought the father was that Negro gardener that her husband employed but we all believed she would never let that happen. If it did her husband would have thrown her out the door in seconds. I remember my mother telling me that her mum had an affair with an African man while they were in Nigeria when they were younger and my mum always said that she never understood why her mother would ever admit to such a thing. She told mum that dad knew about it but never batted an eyelid. He just accepted it.” Smiling she told him, “Maybe that is where it comes from. You know, there was no birth control those days.”

“Okay, well I didn’t expect the family history of love affairs, mum. I just wanted to say that throwbacks do happen in all families. Some are not picked up but occasionally some features show up that people notice. Does it matter, really?”

“Well, of course, it does. Love is so good and we can’t always control our emotions as well as many think. Affairs happen all the time if the opportunity is offered and presented. But then there is the perception, you know, what people think?”

“I don’t know what people think and I don’t really care. Teddy is a lovely child and we’re lucky to have him. Besides, if people want to invent stories to keep themselves amused then that is none of my business. Come on let's go see Candy before its feeding time.”

“Have you picked a name for her yet?”

“Yes, we’ve agreed to call her Michelle. It’s the female equivalent to Michael. Candy selected the name and how could I disagree with that?”

“Yes, I think it fits.”

They walked back to Candy’s room to find Jeff sitting beside the bed holding Candy’s hand while they talked quietly. When Candy saw Michael’s mum she pulled her hand away from Jeff who stood up.

“Hello, Jeff. This is my mother. Mum this is Jeff who has been renting the spare room from us.”

“Hello, mum,” he said. “How are you, Michael?”

“I’m fine, Jeff and you?”

“Same here.”

“Would you like to see our baby, Jeff?”

“Yes, I would.”

“Can you excuse us girls? I’ll take Jeff through to meet the baby and then we’ll rejoin you.”

Michael led the way down the corridor to the nursery. Around halfway there he stopped to turn towards Jeff. “Okay, mate, explain to me what is happening here?”

“I don’t understand?”

“Well, you should. All your gear has gone from the house and today your back holding Candy’s hand in public making my mum think my wife is cheating on me.”

“Your wife is cheating on you, Michael. You know that so why act so surprised?”

“Candy doesn’t cheat on me. We have a mutual agreement that she may take a lover with my knowledge and with my permission. That is not cheating.”

“I love her.”

“Yes, I know that too. She would not be showing interest in you if she didn’t believe that.”

“I’ve asked her to come live with me in my unit.”

“I was aware of that too but that changes nothing unless Candy chooses to change it.”

“She has told me that she will give me her answer in the next week or two.”

The information shocked Michael. “I see. So why is it being delayed?”

“She said she needs time to talk to you about it. In the meantime, I have moved back to my unit to give her the opportunity to discuss things with you and Jill.”

“What do you think gives you the right to come into my home where I welcomed you with open arms then the way you repay me is to try to take my wife off me.”

“I’m sorry. I’ve been with a number of women before but I’ve never ever fallen in love with any one of them. But I love Candy. I don’t think I can live without her. That’s the way I feel and I’m powerless to change it.”

“I see, so the fact that I feel the same way doesn’t even compute with you, does it? The fact that Jill feels the same way about Candy doesn’t even compute with you either, does it? You simply think about yourself so Jill and I don’t get offered any consideration at all.”

“How the hell can I consider you and Jill when I love her so much that I feel as if I can’t go on without her? I have tried. That is why I have been staying away for days at a time but it’s driving me mad.”

“You could move back into the room that we set aside for you so that candy can be shared amongst us. That way none of us gets destroyed by this.”

“When she goes to you I get so jealous that I feel like doing something stupid. I’m not able to share her as you do. That’s not me.”

“Yet you show interest in Jill. If you love her so much how can you do that?”

“I show interest in Jill because Candy asks me to. I don’t know why but she keeps egging me on to be with Jill after her baby is born. I like Jill as a friend and sexually Jill is very attractive to me because Candy encourages me but it’s not love.”

“I see. Well, do you really want to see our baby?”

“We might as well.”

“Good, let’s do it then.”

“You’re not angry with me?”

“I’m pissed right off with you but not because you love Candy. I understand that and accept that. I think that is healthy for you and for Candy. The reason why I’m angry with you is that I thought you could be trusted but I was wrong. You have deceived me.”

“I’m sorry.”

Michael turned around to face him. “Don’t give me that bullshit. You’re not sorry. Sorry means you didn’t mean to do it. Sorry means I’ll do whatever I can to try to fix it. This is something that makes you deceptive, unreliable and half a man. If you were a real man you would have approached me or Jill to try to work out a solution that suits us all and doesn’t hurt Candy.”

“I’m not out to hurt Candy.”

“Do you really think that you can take Candy away from the people who love her more than anything and not hurt her? Is that what you actually think because if it is then I have to tell you that you’re wrong?”

“I don’t believe that I’m wrong.”

“We’ll see. Anyhow, why do you want to see Michelle?”

“I’m taking this opportunity to have the privacy to try to talk to you about me and Candy.”

“Okay, well we’ve talked. Let’s go back then.”

“You’re not as receptive as Candy led me to believe you would be.”

“Well, obviously you have given me cause to not be as receptive as what Candy predicted. It’s not every day a man has someone tell him, ‘I’m going to take your wife off you, the very person that you love the most in this world.’ What about that do you think would make any man receptive. But despite that, I haven’t done what most men would do to you.”

“What’s that?”

“Give you the thrashing of your life. Belt you so much you would wish you were dead. That is what most men would do to you under the circumstances.”

“Do you really think you could do that?”

Michael once more stopped and turned to face him, “I know I could. The reason I don’t is that I care too much for Candy. That would hurt her.”

“I guess.”

Michael just shook his head and walked back to Candy’s hospital bed. He looked at Candy and shook his head then turned to his mother, “Come on mum. Jill is looking after Teddy and I told her I’d get back in time to allow her to visit Candy.”

“Okay, son.” She turned to Candy and told her, “Candy, no matter what your decision I want you to know that you will always be part of our family and you will be welcome in our home at any time. I hope you make the right decision because my son is the best man you will ever meet in your lifetime.”

Michael almost fell over backwards. Candy had spoken to his mother about the decision she had to make. Candy smiled at them both and answered, “Yes, you’re right about Michael. There is no one better than him but remember that I told you that I haven’t made any decision yet. All I have said is that I have a major decision to make.”

Candy then looked at Michael. “I guess Jeff has told you what he has asked of me. I have made no decision and I won’t until you and I have time to sit down together to talk. Now Jeff is going to leave as well because I want Jill to come to talk to me after everyone has left. Is that okay?”

Michael smiled, “That is perfectly okay with me. I’ll get Jill to come back to talk to you. Come on Jeff, show me the way out.”

Jeff looked at her and said, “Good night honey.”

“Good night, Jeff.” She then smiled at Michael and said, “Good night, Sweetheart. Don’t fret, okay. We’ll work it all out.”

For the first time in the last hour Michael felt his heart beat faster and he felt like yelling to the world, “She loves me!” but he knew he couldn’t. He understood just from her look that Candy was trying to let Jeff down gently at least he hoped that was what was going on with her.

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Re: Candy too (part 2 of Candy)

Unread post by goyse » Tue May 03, 2022 12:28 am

Candy too Chapter 55

Michael drove slowly on the way home wondering what his mother was thinking of him. Few words were spoken until his mother said, “Pull into this parking lot at the park. I want to tell you a story, son.”

Of course, he did as his mother wanted while thinking that she wanted the opportunity to verbally attack him. He stopped the car and then said, “Okay, mum, give me the lecture.”

“There is no lecture. I just want to tell you a story but first, you have to promise me that you’ll never repeat it to anyone. It will remain our secret.”

“Fine.”

“No, fine is not what I want to hear. I want you to swear to me that you will never repeat what I tell you.”

By this time Michael was starting to think that she is not going to lecture me so why not, “Okay mum. What you tell me tonight I will never repeat.”

“Good. Now to tell you I must have you sit there and listen with no interruptions and no questions until I finish my story. It will be hard enough to tell you this story without interruption. ”

“Okay.”

“When we married your dad had a good mate called Darren. Their friendship went back a long way. After we got married they remained good friends for many years. Darren was taller than your father and much better build. You know the type, wide shoulders, muscles everywhere and thin hips. He was also very good looking. He used to come around to our place when you kids were young and the three of us would play cards. I always wondered why Darren would always wear loose pants like you often see the Negro’s in the movies wearing.”

Michael nodded. He had heard of Darren but couldn’t remember him.

“About a year after you were born and your brother was about two, maybe a little older, one night playing cards I felt someone run their bare foot up along my leg. It had to be Darren. I didn’t know what to do about it so I just let it happen. If I made a fuss I thought I would destroy a lifetime friendship so I decided to let it go until I had a chance to tell Darren to never do that again. After Darren left we went to bed and your father asked me was there anything that I should tell him. I asked him what he meant and his reply surprised me. He asked me did Darren play footsies with me.”

Once more Michael nodded to show he was listening so his mother continued.

“I was in a spot. I didn’t want to cause trouble between them so I told him yes. His foot touched mine a couple of times. He then asked me did I like it. I asked him what he meant. That’s simple he told me, did you enjoy Darren playing footsies with you? So I told him, I guess it was alright. Would you like him to do things like that more often he asked? I had no idea of what to say so I said if it was alright with you and he wanted to do it then I guess it would be alright with me. All he replied was good then rolled over and went to sleep. I was confused. It was as if he was encouraging me to flirt with his mate and in those days men definitely didn’t do things like that.”

Once more Michael nodded.

“The next time we played cards with Darren your father excused himself and told us he had to go down to the hotel to buy a drink for us. This surprised me as we always kept some alcohol in case of guests. As he left he told me to put some music on so Darren can dance with me while he was gone. When I didn’t put the music on he came back inside and he put music on. The music he selected was Neil Diamond style music, the type where people dance closely together, the seductive type of music. Darren got up and asked me to dance. Your father smiled and said I’ll see you both in half an hour or so and promptly left.”

“Dad was encouraging you to have an affair?”

“Hey, the agreement was no questions until I finish.” Michael nodded so she continued. “Well we danced and half an hour passed then three-quarters of an hour then an hour. We danced like lovers so close together. It was then that I learned why he wore loose pants, as you might understand. I had never in my life felt so sexually excited but then your father returned. He took out the cards and then dealt a hand while pouring us all a drink. He bought no alcohol back. He took it from the cupboard.”

Michael smiled and nodded again.

“After Darren left I refused to go to bed with your dad until he explained what he was trying to do. He explained to me that Darren had never got married because he would have proposed to me if your father had not proposed first. He told me that Darren had got drunk with him and explained that he would live his life alone because he loved only one woman, me. Your father had known this for some time and so he decided to see if perhaps I would be willing to let Darren have a short term affair with me.”

Michael smiled finally understanding where he may have acquired the desire for his wife to have affairs. Perhaps it was a case of like father like son.

“We talked a long time that night and we made love many times as we talked. I admitted that I liked Darren and that had he asked me to marry him first I would have given it serious consideration. Your father seemed to like the idea so I told him that when we had danced I felt as if I could possibly go further if your dad had agreed. He surprised me when he said that if I had asked he would have agreed. By the end of that night, the arrangement we made was that Darren would take me on a date to dinner and if I felt it was right I had his permission to go home with Darren but on condition that he delivered me back to your father before midnight. I was never to tell your father if or when we had sex but if we did I was to return to him as Darren left me.”

Michael nodded and adjusted himself in his trousers.

“I believe Michael that from what I have seen you and Candy have a similar arrangement and she confirmed that with me tonight. I want you to know that I understand. You won’t lose her Michael. She loves you too much and appreciates what you do for her. I have never understood exactly why any man would give the woman he loves away to another man but I want you to know that I do understand that you do it because you love her.”

Michael smiled again, “Yes, I do love her but I want to hear the end of your story.”

“I hadn’t planned to tell you the ending but I guess I should now that I’ve told you this much. Your dad and I made love twice as often whenever I went to Darren. I never once cleaned up after Darren and your father loved it. Our affair continued for over two years until one day my period didn’t come. I was pregnant. Your father flipped out. It seemed that he had an agreement with Darren that he was to check with me and use a condom whenever there was a risk of conceiving. No one had told me that and in the excitement of it all I had made a mistake.”

“You had another child?”

“No, I lost the child. You may not remember but I suffered a bout of depression following that. I had dearly wanted to give Darren my child. Your father stuck with me and he helped me recover. I’m forever grateful for all he has done for me. Darren decided to go overseas after that and although from time to time I get a letter from him I have not seen him since.”

“Did you love him, mum?”

She looked at Michael for a time before she told him, “It’s difficult to make love to someone several times a week and not develop feelings for them as Candy is discovering.”

“And the sex was it alright.”

“The sex was outstanding. I had heard of women who had experienced orgasms but although I liked sex with your dad I didn’t understand what it was like to reach a real orgasm until that first time with Darren and then every time after. In fact, once Darren taught me how I often had orgasms with your father.”

“Were you tempted to leave dad for him?”

“Oh, yes, many times but in the light of day, I understood that was something that your father gave to me. He knew the risk but didn’t hesitate so our marriage was always safe the same way as yours always will be. Candy is a good woman. People like to paint women who have sex with men other than their husbands as whores but that is not the case in situations like this. They are just people living their lives as any other might be.”

“Thanks for telling this mum. I will never mention it to anyone.”

“I know you won’t. I would not have told you if I didn’t know that I could trust you.”

“And how exactly could you know that?”

“Well, it did help that Candy told me that I should tell you.”

“Are you telling me that Candy knows your story?”

“Yes, the horny parts, she does but she doesn’t know that I got pregnant. You’re the only person other than your father who knows that.”

“Were you ever tempted to do it again?”

“Yes, many, many times. In fact, last month when we went on that trip to Jamaica your dad noticed me eyeing off a man and suggested that I might like to bed him.”

“Did you?”

“Now that would be telling stories out of school, wouldn’t it?”

Michael smiled and laughed, “In other words you did. What did Dad do, I mean, did he watch?”

“After Darren, he told me that I was not to enter another man’s bedroom without him present. He did that because he told me that he could not trust me to make sure that my lover wore a condom.”

“So, did you?”

“I’m a lot like Candy. We girls love the feel of a man deep inside us, especially when he cums.”

“It sounds like you are a lot like Candy.”

She smiled and then told him, “No, Candy is a lot like me and I understand that she is like me because her husband loves her and wants nothing but the best for her.”

“Thank you.”

“I think you had better take me home before I tell you more than I should.”

“Yes, perhaps that’s a good idea. I’m proud of you mum for being willing to keep dad happy and do it in such a way that no one would ever have guessed.”

“A few close friends know. One suggested to dad that he should invite Darren to come to stay for a holiday.”

“And?”

“He is arriving in the week before Christmas and staying through into the New Year.”

“Are you excited about it?”

“You cannot imagine how excited I am. Your dad gets raped every night since he called Darren. This time I want your dad there with us and he has agreed.”

Michael smiled at her and told her, “You’re a dirty old bitch, aren’t you?”

“You have no idea, Son,”

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Re: Candy too (part 2 of Candy)

Unread post by goyse » Tue May 03, 2022 12:46 am

Candy too Chapter 56

Candy came home with Michelle the following week. Jill fussed over the baby and insisted that Candy and Michael spend as much time together as possible. They kissed and they cuddled and simply held each other most of the time. Candy did not say anything about her and Jeff for the next three days. Michael said little that didn’t need to be said and waited for her to raise the subject of her decision regarding Jeff. Eventually, she raised the issue.

They were lying in bed one evening together when she told him, “Jeff wants me to leave you to go live with him. “

“Alright, well, what did you decide?”

“Did you hear what I said, Michael?”

“Yes, you just told me what Jeff had told me at the hospital.”

“You think I’m going to leave you?”

“I didn’t say that. I said he told me that. It is Jeff that thinks that.”

“And what do you think?”

Michael had not expected her to turn the question around on him but he responded without delay. “Well first off I know that I love you and you love me. I know that Jeff gives you better sexual satisfaction than I ever could but despite that, I also think you are far too intelligent to waste your life simply for sexual pleasure when you know that with me you can have whatever you choose, including the sexual pleasure.” He expected her to respond but she just looked at him so after a delay, he continued. “I also know that with me if you get fed up with one man we can simply change without all the hassle you would have if you went with Jeff. So that is what I know. But…… you asked me what I think. I think I want you to stay with me but ultimately that decision has to be yours.”

“You’re sure of yourself, aren’t you?”

“I wish I could be certain, yes, but I wouldn’t say I am? Candy I want you to stay. Jill wants you to stay but I can’t hold you if you choose to go and I wouldn’t even try. All I can do is assure you that if you choose to leave then I won’t act in an inappropriate way but I also want you to know that my door will always be open for you to return.”

“So you’re saying you would let me go but welcome me back.”

“Yes but in saying that it would be better if you didn’t leave in the first place.”

“Why?”

“Because I can’t vouch for Jill. You would have to discuss this with her to know if she would accept you back if you deceived her.”

“I may take her with me.”

“No, that won’t be happening and it would be a serious mistake for you to try.”

“Why?”

“We are not fools, Candy but we do love you so we have discussed the possibilities and she knows I won’t leave her, in the same way, that I would never leave you and she has told me that she feels the same way. What we haven’t discussed is what happens if you decide to leave or would either of us want you to come back. That subject has been avoided by us both.”

“So you don’t really know if she would choose me or you?”

“Candy, please don’t play this game. Make your decision and tell me what you have decided. It has been hard enough over the last few days knowing that sooner or later I would have to face this without you playing games with me.” Michael stood up and slowly moved towards the door.

“Where are you going,” she asked?

“I’m leaving so you have a little quiet to make up your mind.”

“I don’t need quiet to make up my mind, Michael.”

“Well, what do you need?”

“I need my husband, the man I love to hold me and kiss me and to tell me how much he loves me. I need him to tell me that he wants me to stay with him. Maybe I need to hear that he can’t live without me in the same way that he did in the early days of my marriage before he started to push me away from him onto other men.”

Michael moved back to the foot of the bed to look down at her, “But I thought that is what you wanted. You never once told me that you didn’t want that so I thought….”

She cut him off. “Michael, just because I want something doesn’t mean you should give it to me. Almost every woman in the world would like an additional lover, especially one like Jeff or even Tod, the arsehole but don’t you understand that when a woman gets pushed away onto other men all the time especially if they are better sexual partners she starts to ask herself, ‘does my husband really love me? Can’t you see that?”

“I guess, but I thought you understood that the more I love you the more I want you to have. I want you to be happy and satisfied.” His mouth hung open in surprise. He had no idea that she might feel this way.

“Michael, I will not leave you without reason but I will leave you if you don’t want me and keep pushing me away. Sometimes you make me feel as if I don’t belong. We started this crap because I thought you wanted to see me, no… that’s not the word….. see is not the right word….. the word is watch me or enjoy seeing me have the ultimate sexual experience. I started doing this for you, not for me but as things progressed you were no longer there beside me. You were sending me out to be with men and I did it simply because I thought that is what you wanted.”

Michael felt a flash of anger course through him. It was unusual for Michael but he raised his voice and snapped back at her. “Yes, I did want that but you changed too. You enjoyed it and I could tell that you not only wanted the experience but you needed it.” He calmed himself to continue but as he spoke he moved closer and pointed down at her. “Candy, I’ll accept responsibility for starting this crap, as you call it but remember there were times when you took control and left me out so please don’t put all the blame on me for losing our way but I do agree that we have lost our way.” He realised he may sound aggressive so he took a step back away from the bed.

She smiled up at him, “I liked that,” she told him.

She shocked him with that statement but he also felt pissed off that she was smiling up at him when the subject of their discussion was so serious. “What!” he spat out as if offended.

“You actually stood up for yourself like that husband that I married. You didn’t buckle under and tell me I could have anything I want. For once you have stood your ground.”

He felt puzzled that she seemed to enjoy it when he got angry with her. “What do you mean?”

“Michael this crap we have been into has made you into….. I don’t know…. I guess it is something that floats with the flow like an iceberg in the ocean being taken where the tide flows while your needs, your desires become smaller and less important. You know that most of an iceberg is hidden below the water like your needs and desires and they dissolve and disappear out of sight just like the iceberg as it melts in the sun.” She looked up at him but he was too surprised to respond so she continued. “Michael, sure I enjoyed what we have done but what is more important to me is to have you there with me and I’d rather not have it at all if it means you’re not around for me. Can’t you understand that? You know we were so lost that I didn’t even know that Michelle was your baby. That’s crazy fucked up shit and it can’t be allowed to happen again.”

He nodded, “So you want me to take control?”

“Yes, just like you should have done in the first place.”

“And what about Jeff?”

She looked up at him and shook her head as if he should have known the answer to that.

Eventually, he smiled down at her, “You want me to tell him to fuck off?”

She held her hands with the palms up and shrugged her shoulders just looking up at him and smiling.

“I’ll tell him that you’re not going with him. You’re my wife and he should shove off.”

She smiled at him and nodded in the affirmative. “Get out of bed and come downstairs. It’s lunchtime,” he told her testing his newly earned authority.

“Okay.”

They walked down to the kitchen.

“After lunch, I’ll go over and put Jeff straight on the situation.”

“Okay, what would you like for lunch?”

“I’d like toasted sandwiches with cheese and ham. I’ll pour us a wine.”

“Thanks.”

As she set up to make him his sandwich he returned with a red for her and one for him. She smiled at him and asked, “Have you forgotten something?”

“Oh, Jill, I’ll pour her one too.”

“Anything else?”

“Oh the baby, you’re breastfeeding. I’ll get you a non-alcoholic drink.”

She smiled and as he went to get the drink she looked at him to say, “Michael.”

“Yes, honey.”

“I love you. I was never going to leave you. I just needed you to reaffirm your position in our household and deal with Jeff for me.”

“Yes, I knew you wouldn’t leave but I wanted you to have the opportunity to make the decision and tell me what you expect of me.”

“And do you know now?”

“Yes, so watch what you’re doing because if you burn my sandwich I’ll have to put you over my knee and paddle your arse.”

She smiled up at him and fluttered her eyes the way she knew he liked as she said quietly, “Promises, promises, promises." then, "You know, it’s a bit early for that yet. Maybe we could do it in a couple of weeks’ time.”

“Promises, promises, promises,” he said with a chuckle. As he wandered off to find Jill and his baby girl he heard her giggling like a little girl in the background. It made him feel good and secure to be master of the household once more and in control of his life.

The end.

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Re: Candy too (part 2 of Candy)

Unread post by Chrislydi » Tue May 03, 2022 1:22 am

What a lovely ending to another Goyse masterpiece. It's been a real pleasure reading this, and fitting that the two lovers we started with are closer and happier than ever at the finish. Jill has been there throughout and always an equal partner in the marriage, infact it had seemed Candy the more semi detached of the three, but now she's firmly welcomed back into a marriage she never really left.

Hoping for part three in Brisbane, New Zealand and Barcelona to begin soon, but you deserve a really long break after such a triumph.

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Re: Candy too (part 2 of Candy)

Unread post by OOAA » Tue May 03, 2022 1:56 am

FABULOUS!!!!! Thanks a lot Goyse for this EXCELLENT master piece!!!

Great last chapters, great surprising mum's confession and SUPERB Candy statements!!!

THANKS!!! 🥇

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Re: Candy too (part 2 of Candy)

Unread post by OZCPL » Tue May 03, 2022 7:43 pm

I am blown away. Last time I looked here I read chapter 50 and now Goyse has posted the end. Thanks Goyse I will start catching up and by the comments I have seen I will not be disappointed.

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Re: Candy too (part 2 of Candy)

Unread post by goyse » Thu May 05, 2022 5:08 am

OZCPL wrote:
Tue May 03, 2022 7:43 pm
I am blown away. Last time I looked here I read chapter 50 and now Goyse has posted the end. Thanks Goyse I will start catching up and by the comments I have seen I will not be disappointed.
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I think I said on one of the posts that I work around 3 to 5 chapters ahead so given the story had reached its end point, I thought I may as well send it all in.

I have been giving some thoughts to a third chapter but for now, I may take a rest and enjoy the wonderful WA May weather. Oops, just looked at the forecast and it's going to rain. Sorry for saying that folks....... Damn, every time I take a break it rains! Never worked that way on the farm.

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