Candy too (part 2 of Candy)

[Chrislydi]

I am blown away. Last time I looked here I read chapter 50 and now Goyse has posted the end. Thanks Goyse I will start catching up and by the comments I have seen I will not be disappointed.

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I think I said on one of the posts that I work around 3 to 5 chapters ahead so given the story had reached its end point, I thought I may as well send it all in.

I have been giving some thoughts to a third chapter but for now, I may take a rest and enjoy the wonderful WA May weather. Oops, just looked at the forecast and it's going to rain. Sorry for saying that folks....... Damn, every time I take a break it rains! Never worked that way on the farm.

Perhaps Candy could add a Western Australia or at least a visit to Perth onto her crowded itinerary in the third part, but how on earth could you write Michael meeting Goyse, that could be a little problematic?

[goyse]

I am blown away. Last time I looked here I read chapter 50 and now Goyse has posted the end. Thanks Goyse I will start catching up and by the comments I have seen I will not be disappointed.

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I think I said on one of the posts that I work around 3 to 5 chapters ahead so given the story had reached its end point, I thought I may as well send it all in.

I have been giving some thoughts to a third chapter but for now, I may take a rest and enjoy the wonderful WA May weather. Oops, just looked at the forecast and it's going to rain. Sorry for saying that folks....... Damn, every time I take a break it rains! Never worked that way on the farm.

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Oscar met Goyse so why couldn't Michael
Perhaps Candy could add a Western Australia or at least a visit to Perth onto her crowded itinerary in the third part, but how on earth could you write Michael meeting Goyse, that could be a little problematic?

[Chrislydi]

Oscar met Goyse so why couldn't Michael

I suppose it might be analogous to looking at a mirror image of yourself

[goyse]

Okay so here goes, Candy 3 is underway. Just goes to show how some of the suggestions made here do have some inspirational impact.

I just couldn't help myself. How sick is that! Sad, isn't it?

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[Chrislydi]

Excellent news, but no rush at all for it as you're not a machine and deserve a break - I suppose the prospect of actually meeting Candy, Jill and Michael is just too enticing.

The story of Candy trio has begun - I'm onto it!!

[Asterix42]

Okay so here goes, Candy 3 is underway. Just goes to show how some of the suggestions made here do have some inspirational impact.

I just couldn't help myself. How sick is that! Sad, isn't it?

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Excellent news, thanks Goyse

[OOAA]

Okay so here goes, Candy 3 is underway. Just goes to show how some of the suggestions made here do have some inspirational impact.

I just couldn't help myself. How sick is that! Sad, isn't it?

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Yeahhhhhhhh!!!!

[OZCPL]

I have now caught up reading the last six chapters and I feel I have to comment.

The written pros are good and the sentences flow smoothly, making your work easy and quick to absorb and understand. Without any analytical thought about the story it is interesting, exciting and evokes emotional feelings, as have even been displayed by other readers, when they thought Candy may have been neglecting her motherly duties. I think you made us laugh, made us cry and made us a bit angry. That indicates the skill of a master story teller who has accurately taken us down the rabbit hole to a depth where few of us would feel at ease in real life.

However, I think the real genius of the Candy series lies in the way Goyse has portrayed a complex plot, as real life experiences, in a subject matter not yet widely written about or produced on movie screens. Only a writer with extensive practical knowledge, acquired in the university of life, could so accurately portray such a plot and dialog as sensitively as he has.

Thanks Goyse you do deserve a holiday after this one.

[goyse]

Okay so here goes, Candy 3 is underway. Just goes to show how some of the suggestions made here do have some inspirational impact.

I just couldn't help myself. How sick is that! Sad, isn't it?

viewtopic.php?f=8&t=66302

Yeahhhhhhhh!!!!

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[Asterix42]

Back in ch52 Michael is surprised that pregnant Candy isn’t at work, yet as far as I can tell there has never been any mention of her having any job other than as a porn star/pretend admin helper with Tod. Earlier chapters made it pretty clear that she has spent most of her days with Tod. So what job does she have, or is she making pornos again?

[Chrislydi]

Back in ch52 Michael is surprised that pregnant Candy isn’t at work, yet as far as I can tell there has never been any mention of her having any job other than as a porn star/pretend admin helper with Tod. Earlier chapters made it pretty clear that she has spent most of her days with Tod. So what job does she have, or is she making pornos again?

Great stuff Asterix, you're nothing if not meticulous, I wish I was half as attentive to detail when I read it, I'm glad someone's far better at it though.

[Breakerhymen]

When a woman gives birth hormones are produced (prostaglandin) that, together with repeated uterine contractions allow the cervix to thin and relax. Even then it's a long process.
As to medical information just google cervical penetration. I'd be interested in hearing about any non-porn site that says it's possible unless the woman has a severe malformation of her cervix.

Well I did say 'relevant professional medical knowledge" but I also mentioned "reliable factual information" because I don't regard the internet as being that. I know for a fact that, on at least two occasions, there was nothing in there except her cervix and my penis and I know what I felt and how extraordinarily good it was, as it wrapped snugly around me. I did not have to force in, it dilated for me when I nudged it centre top.

You mentioned that when a woman has a baby it is a long process. Well that certainly is so and is necessary, because she has to fit a whole new baby through there but that only goes to show just what wondrous things her cervix is capable of. My penis is only of ordinary size and nothing even comparable to the size of most new babies. With that in mind I am not about to change my opinion of what most likely occurred. I don't have a medical degree and at this time I suspect that you, my friend, don't either so I am not prepared to debate the subject any further.

It is a subject that I would enjoy seeing a medical research group study, to determine the probability of a woman's body being capable of accepting a man, in that way, and in the correct circumstances.

I am a physician, my wife a gynecologist and I know of at least one detailed Swedish study that used cine mri to record penetrative sex. The cervix doesn’t open as you think it does. Also there have been several studies documenting penetrative sex with endoscopy a thin fiber optic scope inserted next to penis. The cervix contracts during orgasm designed to help propel sperm inward. A multiparous female may have a prominent external os that you might get the feel you’re talking about. Also the cervix could be altered by surgery which might give a sensation of entry like you describe. But that’s speculation. Medically what we know about anatomy, female physiology, and function says their is no penetration of the cervix with sex. My own experience with cannulating cervix during HSG procedures proves you wrong. The very act of entering cervix with a sound or probe in most women produces uncomfortable cramps often worse than that experienced during menstruation. That in itself suggests that you likely didn’t enter her cervix.

[Chrislydi]

I am a physician, my wife a gynecologist

Breakerhymen, at last we have a man and his wife who have the medical expertise to make informed comments on some of the issues raised on this forum. (Even if I know there are others too)

On my own thread there was a point raised about whether the actual ingestion of semen can affect a woman's feelings of closeness to her lover, I would make clear that it's not so much the act of doing it which is at issue here but rather the chemical constituents of the semen being absorbed and changing behaviour. I find it incredibly hard to see how any such study could isolate and separate such things, as both might be contributory factors as might be a whole host of other factors too. There would have to be so many controls to determine just what causes which affect and how on earth it's measured. I just found it hard to believe it's possible to satisfactorily perform such a study. Apparently it has been done although I remain sceptical of any results.

I would ask my brother who's a doctor (consultant) too but he specialises in the wrong field, and it's too embarrassing to pursue further.

So this was a quote from my thread, which I really couldn't dispute despite my scepticism incase I was wrong.

John Smith, "I’ve read scientific journals that the semen of a man being absorbed by a woman after intercourse draws her closer to him and even penetrates her brain cells, modifying her body chemistry to make her even more compatible with him. At times I have wondered whether this process was at work between my wife and her lovers."

I would be grateful if you could shed any light on this.

Chris.

[Breakerhymen]

I can only speculate meaning provide an educated guess. I’d say that mixed up in all the chemicals within semen there are likely pheromones as well as constituents from diet food etc that help to make some semen more conducive or attractive to a lover. In my own experience having switched to a near vegan diet my wife says my semen tastes better. Eating pineapple and healthier high fruit content diet seems to please her as well. No idea if it was my semen, my skills, or future earning potential that sealed the deal for us……

[Chrislydi]

I can only speculate meaning provide an educated guess. I’d say that mixed up in all the chemicals within semen there are likely pheromones as well as constituents from diet food etc that help to make some semen more conducive or attractive to a lover. In my own experience having switched to a near vegan diet my wife says my semen tastes better. Eating pineapple and healthier high fruit content diet seems to please her as well. No idea if it was my semen, my skills, or future earning potential that sealed the deal for us……

Thanks Breakerhymen,

In my mind the hardest thing from a scientific viewpoint is satisfactorily separating, as to cause and effect, the actual psychological contribution such an act of repeated submission for the man's pleasure (as well as her own) has on her psyche and hence the brain from that of the actual chemical constituents withing the semen and their effect.

It's amazing how increasing your earning potential can have a such magical effect on just how attractive you are to women.

Chris

[Asterix42]

I can only speculate meaning provide an educated guess. I’d say that mixed up in all the chemicals within semen there are likely pheromones as well as constituents from diet food etc that help to make some semen more conducive or attractive to a lover. In my own experience having switched to a near vegan diet my wife says my semen tastes better. Eating pineapple and healthier high fruit content diet seems to please her as well. No idea if it was my semen, my skills, or future earning potential that sealed the deal for us……

Thanks Breakerhymen,

In my mind the hardest thing from a scientific viewpoint is satisfactorily separating, as to cause and effect, the actual psychological contribution such an act of repeated submission for the man's pleasure (as well as her own) has on her psyche and hence the brain from that of the actual chemical constituents withing the semen and their effect.

It's amazing how increasing your earning potential can have a such magical effect on just how attractive you are to women.

Chris

Not to mention the classic “positional power” attraction factor that still has a degree of attraction for many when otherwise ordinary looking people are promoted into senior executive jobs.

[Chrislydi]

I can only speculate meaning provide an educated guess. I’d say that mixed up in all the chemicals within semen there are likely pheromones as well as constituents from diet food etc that help to make some semen more conducive or attractive to a lover. In my own experience having switched to a near vegan diet my wife says my semen tastes better. Eating pineapple and healthier high fruit content diet seems to please her as well. No idea if it was my semen, my skills, or future earning potential that sealed the deal for us……

Thanks Breakerhymen,

In my mind the hardest thing from a scientific viewpoint is satisfactorily separating, as to cause and effect, the actual psychological contribution such an act of repeated submission for the man's pleasure (as well as her own) has on her psyche and hence the brain from that of the actual chemical constituents withing the semen and their effect.

It's amazing how increasing your earning potential can have a such magical effect on just how attractive you are to women.

Chris

Not to mention the classic “positional power” attraction factor that still has a degree of attraction for many when otherwise ordinary looking people are promoted into senior executive jobs.

My brain power has been fully demonstrated with the invention and introduction of the new word 'withing', meaning I don't really bother rereading my posts before I press submit.

Chris

[OZCPL]

When a woman gives birth hormones are produced (prostaglandin) that, together with repeated uterine contractions allow the cervix to thin and relax. Even then it's a long process.
As to medical information just google cervical penetration. I'd be interested in hearing about any non-porn site that says it's possible unless the woman has a severe malformation of her cervix.

Well I did say 'relevant professional medical knowledge" but I also mentioned "reliable factual information" because I don't regard the internet as being that. I know for a fact that, on at least two occasions, there was nothing in there except her cervix and my penis and I know what I felt and how extraordinarily good it was, as it wrapped snugly around me. I did not have to force in, it dilated for me when I nudged it centre top.

You mentioned that when a woman has a baby it is a long process. Well that certainly is so and is necessary, because she has to fit a whole new baby through there but that only goes to show just what wondrous things her cervix is capable of. My penis is only of ordinary size and nothing even comparable to the size of most new babies. With that in mind I am not about to change my opinion of what most likely occurred. I don't have a medical degree and at this time I suspect that you, my friend, don't either so I am not prepared to debate the subject any further.

It is a subject that I would enjoy seeing a medical research group study, to determine the probability of a woman's body being capable of accepting a man, in that way, and in the correct circumstances.

I am a physician, my wife a gynecologist and I know of at least one detailed Swedish study that used cine mri to record penetrative sex. The cervix doesn’t open as you think it does. Also there have been several studies documenting penetrative sex with endoscopy a thin fiber optic scope inserted next to penis. The cervix contracts during orgasm designed to help propel sperm inward. A multiparous female may have a prominent external os that you might get the feel you’re talking about. Also the cervix could be altered by surgery which might give a sensation of entry like you describe. But that’s speculation. Medically what we know about anatomy, female physiology, and function says their is no penetration of the cervix with sex. My own experience with cannulating cervix during HSG procedures proves you wrong. The very act of entering cervix with a sound or probe in most women produces uncomfortable cramps often worse than that experienced during menstruation. That in itself suggests that you likely didn’t enter her cervix.

I thanks you for your interest and educated opinion but I would like to also comment.
So you were unable to reproduce a situation where the cervix dilated of its own accord and therefore you appear to believe that is proof that it cannot happen. Doesnt sound very scientific to me.

Also if a lady feels uncomfortable, in laboratory conditions, having a probe shoved into her cervix, you appear to think she will not want anything else going in there, any other time and under different circumstances. I am not unfamiliar with doing science experiments but am sorry, I do fail to follow your logic there.

Still its always valuable to consider others views and knowledge on a subject.

[veub]

OZCPL,
The examination information was merely an additional confirmation of the fact that this is impossible.
I asked before but no one responded: is there any non-porn site that says this is physically possible. If it is possible, you would think that at least one medical/scientific site would mention it.
Or try this: get a woman worked up and try to insert a dildo thinner than your penis through her cervix. What's her reaction? She will scream and not from pleasure.

[Breakerhymen]

He’s worked himself up to the fantasy so much reality and fantasy have merged. Doesn’t happen in real life…..

[goyse]

When a woman gives birth hormones are produced (prostaglandin) that, together with repeated uterine contractions allow the cervix to thin and relax. Even then it's a long process.
As to medical information just google cervical penetration. I'd be interested in hearing about any non-porn site that says it's possible unless the woman has a severe malformation of her cervix.

Well I did say 'relevant professional medical knowledge" but I also mentioned "reliable factual information" because I don't regard the internet as being that. I know for a fact that, on at least two occasions, there was nothing in there except her cervix and my penis and I know what I felt and how extraordinarily good it was, as it wrapped snugly around me. I did not have to force in, it dilated for me when I nudged it centre top.

You mentioned that when a woman has a baby it is a long process. Well that certainly is so and is necessary, because she has to fit a whole new baby through there but that only goes to show just what wondrous things her cervix is capable of. My penis is only of ordinary size and nothing even comparable to the size of most new babies. With that in mind I am not about to change my opinion of what most likely occurred. I don't have a medical degree and at this time I suspect that you, my friend, don't either so I am not prepared to debate the subject any further.

It is a subject that I would enjoy seeing a medical research group study, to determine the probability of a woman's body being capable of accepting a man, in that way, and in the correct circumstances.

I am a physician, my wife a gynecologist and I know of at least one detailed Swedish study that used cine mri to record penetrative sex. The cervix doesn’t open as you think it does. Also there have been several studies documenting penetrative sex with endoscopy a thin fiber optic scope inserted next to penis. The cervix contracts during orgasm designed to help propel sperm inward. A multiparous female may have a prominent external os that you might get the feel you’re talking about. Also the cervix could be altered by surgery which might give a sensation of entry like you describe. But that’s speculation. Medically what we know about anatomy, female physiology, and function says their is no penetration of the cervix with sex. My own experience with cannulating cervix during HSG procedures proves you wrong. The very act of entering cervix with a sound or probe in most women produces uncomfortable cramps often worse than that experienced during menstruation. That in itself suggests that you likely didn’t enter her cervix.

I thanks you for your interest and educated opinion but I would like to also comment.
So you were unable to reproduce a situation where the cervix dilated of its own accord and therefore you appear to believe that is proof that it cannot happen. Doesnt sound very scientific to me.

Also if a lady feels uncomfortable, in laboratory conditions, having a probe shoved into her cervix, you appear to think she will not want anything else going in there, any other time and under different circumstances. I am not unfamiliar with doing science experiments but am sorry, I do fail to follow your logic there.

Still its always valuable to consider others views and knowledge on a subject.

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Wow! What have I started? And here I was thinking it would be a bit of fun to write a little fantasy series based on things that I have thought possible and of course a little hands-on background and experience simply and hopefully, to put some excitement in some people's lives.

Instead, I have stimulated the world's scientific community involved in the study of the vulva, the clitoris and the cervix to get seriously involved in the debate on a little fun writing! As I say, "WOW!"

He, he, he, he..... wait until they read series three and four. This could get on the national news headlines. Just imagine the headlines, "Goyse tells cock and bull story," (in headlines then underneath) "to the detriment of the social understanding of the female vagina and its functions. World-famous scientists and sociologists speak out on how such stories are misleading the cuckolds and hotwives of the nation. We demand action... and we want it Now!"

Mister Pork-her of the international guild, chief of the Hotwife's stories branch was quoted this afternoon as saying, "Araaa, what?...... wanking has an impact on the sight and hearing of the nation you know..... Oh, sorry. I thought you were asking me about my hearing...... Now I've got my aids in..... Oh,... Yes, there has been some conjecture about Goyse's suggestion in one of his stories that some pussies take more than their share of the available meat if they can get away with it."

"No, no, please don't misunderstand me. I wasn't talking about the feline variety but maybe if you poke them with a stick enough they too will probably get angry as well. But no, the debate centres around just how that may occur with some taking the approach that there is a certain space that can only accommodate a certain amount. Personally, I have no idea because I'm a vegetarian but Goyse has this theory that something if poked adequately and in the correct fashion may get more responsive and even react as if angry enough to swallow a lot more than is normal. Unfortunately for Goyse, our resident expert does not agree."

"Is he concerned? No, no, I don't believe so. I think he will continue to write this cock and bull stuff until the cows come home and if people don't want to read it then it doesn't really matter that much to him. It's all about the whitting and little to do with the weeding to Goyse. Sorry, that should have been the writing and the reading."

"What was that? No, I was not calling Candy or Jill a cow although the judge might think differently. But all I can say to that is that Candy is not purple! She has been a blond and a bottle brunette but purple, I don't think so... unless, you know, when you use these hair colours these days it sometimes goes wrong. You must excuse me now as there is a new series about to be published and I need to go into my office to lock the door to read the most recent chapter."

"Yes, yes, that is correct. Candy is definitely a blond. There are parts of her that have not been dyed. No, it's not under her armpits at all but somewhere much lower and more concealed...... well concealed to some. Michael has confirmed that as have other people who will, for now, remain nameless."

We are thankful for the feedback on this series issue from Mister Pork-her, chief of the Hotwife's stories branch of the international guild for bullshit artists incorporated in Candyland.

[veub]

. I wasn't talking about the feline variety but maybe if you poke them with a stick enough they too will probably get angry as well.

Cats ALWAYS get angry when being fucked. I think even Candy would get angry if this is the way people worked:

It’s not easy to thoroughly understand the male anatomy of a cat. The male cat penis is known for having penile spines that resemble small spikes and only present themselves when they mate with a female feline. They immediately disappear when the penis retracts back into the skin once the mating is over. These barbs are rough like a cat’s tongue. The texture of a cat’s tongue papillae helps to grip the food ripping the flesh from the bones while they eat. But that doesn’t seem useful for mating, right? What do the barbs do?

This seems a little brutal, but the barbs on the male’s penis keep the female from running away before the mating process has been completed. Cats are animals that prefer to be alone and run from pain. Mating is painful for female cats, not only because of the barbs but because the males also bite the back of their necks during intercourse.

[Johng1953]

Tod is an arsehole, they will have one kid by him who will inevitably inherit some pretty unpleasant characteristics from his/her genetic father. Nurture and upbringing over nature can lessen the fault lines but you can't eliminate them. To have two kids from the same vile father isn't exactly a welcone outcome no matter the short term desire.

Yes, there seems to be a vile side to Tod and arseholes, well, they are just that, arseholes, aren't they? On the positive side, Did you notice though that Tod had an opportunity to make it difficult for Michael when he was with the nurse and at least embarrass him? He could have confronted Michael and said something like "what are you doing with my kid," in front of the nurse but he just looked. Michael however ran away no doubt fearing the worst and Debra helped him.

When you look at the limited things we know of Tod, he is possessive, he doesn't take responsibility, he must not because who has heaps of children without supporting the mothers or does he? None of us know his background only that he has a gang he hangs around with. Candy told him off and obviously walked away and yet now she has accepted him back. Doesn't that leave a big question mark on how did he achieve that? Is there a different side to Tod that we haven't seen yet?

They say that even arseholes have some good characteristics or maybe Candy is just a slut who has no values and just wants to screw around with Michael's brain. Obviously, Michael is a softy so it would be easy for her to do that and knowing what I do about some men, Michael might even enjoy it in some sick way.

There seems to be a lot to learn yet about these people and if anyone knew the answers I would, wouldn't I but as yet, I'm still looking for answers. Who knows what might happen tomorrow or next week or next month.

I'm pleased to have you onboard, Chrislydi. Please keep giving me feedback. I love it and it inspires me to new and hopefully better things. Let's see what tomorrow brings shall we?

Goyse.

No, Tod doesn't have a good side, he drugs and rapes women (Candy 1).