That's exactly what I do too. You've nailed a perfect balance for me.scarfolamew wrote: ↑Wed Aug 21, 2024 7:08 amI really appreciate this comment. One of my largest motivators for writing this is that I adore stories that focus on dialogue and dirty talk. As a reader, I often find myself skipping over the physical descriptions of sex to get to what I consider "the good stuff."MrBoss62 wrote: ↑Tue Aug 20, 2024 6:25 amLoving the story so far, gotta say I think the dialogue is easily one of the strongest parts, you do a fantastic job. It’s been mentioned twice but Ollie looping in his online friends with Morgan either via sending them photos or videos is definitely an angle that should be explored more. Very excited to see where the story goes next!
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Seriously well written!
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Great detailed story. I get very excited with the concept of an incel getting to enjoy the woman at my expense and humiliation.
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Bump...we'd like to hear more!
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Thanks folks. Making steady progress on Chapter 10, hope to have it out soon!
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Looking forward to it!
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Chapter 10 - Our Little Secret is live! Hope you like it
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