A Beginning

[SamWarrens]

More, more!
Don't stop now!

[Peyton2323]

I have more coming very soon, this will continue to be my excuse but I just have to proofread and edit the next couple of chapters. I’m glad you’re enjoying these though. My hope is I can turn this into my outlet where i can relive Shannon and I’s real life exploits we’ve actually had and talk about my wildest fantasies we haven’t quite gotten to yet.

[afagehi7]

I have more coming very soon, this will continue to be my excuse but I just have to proofread and edit the next couple of chapters. I’m glad you’re enjoying these though. My hope is I can turn this into my outlet where i can relive Shannon and I’s real life exploits we’ve actually had and talk about my wildest fantasies we haven’t quite gotten to yet.

Is this a true story or a fantasy thread?
What is your wildest fantasy and what did she think about it? Perhaps you can fill us in between chapters.

[Peyton2323]

It’s a mix of fantasy and reality. So far this has been a lot of our shared fantasy.

Currently my wife has a boyfriend that she primarily has sex with. I’m denied most sexual sexual acts like blowjobs, her hands and ass (kind of) and only he’s allowed her bare. If we have sex it’s only for her to cum and I have to wear a condom. Anal is her favorite way to cum, specifically her on top grinding down on the person until she does. So if he busy or their schedules don’t align and she needs that release she’ll use me for that but I’m not allowed to cum still and once she’s done, we’re done. He on the other hand gets whatever he wants whenever he wants in any position and cums in her, or on her however much he wants.

She also controls when I cum, I’m actually at 2 weeks now and the previous length she made me wait was 31 days before she let me cum, which was her using a pussy sleeve which she ruined at the end.

This is what we both want. I like that she controls me and my sex life and she loves having the power and the love and attention I give her in between, which I love as well.

My Wildest fantasy is hard to pinpoint, maybe that’s why I decided to start writing this in the first place to help myself realize it.. but I know one the top things on my list is being in the room someday when she fucks someone else. So far I’ve only been able to hear recordings and see video.

[Peyton2323]

Chapter 10:

“Ryan. What’s going on in there? Please talk to me. “

Shannon had perched herself up on her elbow to look at Ryan’s face trying to gauge how he was feeling. His face wasn’t angry anymore and he didn’t look sad either. He looked thoughtful more than anything.

Ryan was processing what had just happened. He was furious at his wife just moments ago, right up to the point he was cumming as deep inside of her as he could manage. He knew deep down he was still upset about what she had done, but right now the curiousness of his feelings were taking priority in his head over everything else. Why was he so aroused at the thought of her and this other man in that VIP room?

“Why did you do it?” Ryan asked her.

Shannon sulked into her own body. She knew she was going to have to answer for what happened, deep down she knew Ryan wasn’t going to just forgive and forget. She also knew she didn’t have a good reason for what she did. She was silent and looking down into Ryan’s chest, tears falling again and raining onto him.

“Ryan I am so sorry for what I did, and i will keep telling you and showing you just how sorry i am for the rest of my life. I don't know why i did it. I... I... I don't know if it was the environment I was in or if I felt pressured...”

Ryan interrupted her..

“Don’t make an excuse Shannon. Just tell me the truth, i won't accept anything else from you right now. I know you’re sorry and feel guilty, otherwise you wouldn’t have admitted anything to me. I know you can still be honest with me about this. Just tell me the truth, you owe me that.”

Shannon looked up at him, tears still falling from her cheeks.

“I don't want to hurt you anymore than i already have.”

“It’s not going to get any better unless i can start to trust you again Shannon.”

Shannon thought about it, she knew she couldn’t live with herself if she lost Ryan. He was the love of her life and if this is what had to happen to have a chance at fixing themselves she needed to tell him what was going through her mind.

“I’m not making an excuse when i tell you it had to do with the environment. The club is very sexual. The outfit i was wearing, everyone’s eyes were on me and i could tell, and it started to turn me on. When I started to get physical attention, and Taylor started to touch me I got even more turned on.”

Ryan was still staring at her as she spoke, no emotion though, just listening and waiting for her to open up more. Shannon kept talking.

“I don't know how to answer your question any more honestly Ryan... I was just too turned on. I couldn’t control myself once I was in there. But i promise I’ll never go back there! I’ll take a job doing something else, I’ll go back to work for my sisters at the insurance agency, i don't care about anything else but what happens to us.”

Ryan was still just looking at her with that same emotionless face. Shannon couldn’t read him; she was starting to work herself up into a frantic state, almost hyperventilating.

“Please Ryan, say something! I’m not going to make it if I can't talk to you!” Tears were pouring now and she was sobbing into his chest grabbing at his arms.

Ryan was processing what she was saying and he could empathize partly with what she was telling him, but he also felt there was more to the story.

“Shannon, I just don't believe that’s all there is. You’re not giving me all the details.”

Shannon was trying desperately to control her breathing, she was about to have a panic attack over what she thought was about to happen. She was sure Ryan at any moment was going to push her away and get out of their bed and leave her there alone.

“I wanted to please him...”

Ryan snapped to look at her, but she was looking away from his stare now, avoiding eye contact.

“What do you mean, you ‘wanted to please him’?”

Shannon breathed deep and gave up what she was holding back, it was all she could do to have any chance at saving her marriage, at keeping her husband.

“Once I had him in the back, I could feel how much he wanted to have me, like he couldn’t take his eyes off of me and I couldn’t get enough of it Ryan. I wanted him to worship me and crave me after he left. So.... I made it my mission in that room to make his experience with me as amazing as I could.. and the whole time I was doing everything I did for him, it was turning me on more and more and I was getting off on it too.”

Ryan couldn’t believe what she had just said but he just stared at his wife. He thought to himself of course he wanted her, just look at her. Everything about her is beautiful and sexual. She has perfect round breasts, pierced nipples, tan and toned skin that is so smooth. Her butt is large, round and so soft and connects to her long thick thighs, which he himself can barely pull his hands away from whenever the opportunity arises. Even her face, everyone who meets her can't help but tell her how pretty she is, and even more so when she does her makeup, which she always does perfectly. Her long dark hair and beautiful smile, all these perfect features which only compliment her amazing personality that draws everyone closer to her. You can't have a conversation with her without laughing and she has a way making you feel like you are the most important person in the world at that moment.

Shannon was realizing that what she just said may be what ends her marriage to the man she shares her life with and desperately started to try and get a response from him.

“Ryan please say something to me... please i can't live with you not talking to me anymore.”

Ryan snapped from his internal dialogue and looked at his wife who was pulling his face towards hers.

“Please Ryan... I will spend the rest of my life making this up to you.. I swear I’ll make it right..”

Ryan could tell she was sincere, and he believed what she said, about making it up to him.. he also believed her when she said that she wanted to please another man other than him earlier that same night. What he still couldn’t believe was how turned on he was by the thought of it. He was hard again already after having just fucked Shannon with all of his might and he couldn’t shake it. He was starting to worry she would notice and start to question him about it.

“I don't want you to go back to your sister’s office... I want you to go back to the club, tomorrow night.”

“Wait... no baby, i don't want to go back there, i cant.. I would never do that to us. Why do you want that...?”

Ryan looked at her with that same impossible to read look.

“I need you to go back there and show me exactly what you did.”

“Wait show you? No you can't go there, I could never let you see me like that... I could never do those things again..”

“Well, that’s what I need Shannon.”

Shannon just looked at her husband, she knew she didn’t have any power in the situation, she also knew if he saw in person what happened tonight, he would surely leave her, but if she didn’t agree to this he was going to leave her anyways. This seemed like an impossible situation to her, but one option meant he left now, the other meant she gets another day being married to her husband. She sighed and finally relented.

“Okay... I’ll go back to the club.. but please don't make me do what I did tonight again.. i just don't think we could survive it if you.. if you actually saw it for yourself.”

Ryan leaned back against his pillow and turned over away from his wife.

“I’ll wake you up in the morning when i get back from the gym, I’m getting up early.”

Shannon started to reach for his shoulder but stopped herself. Shannon laid her head down to her pillow and fought back the tears until she finally fell asleep out of exhaustion. She dreamed of their wedding day and smiled as she slept.

[JustWantToWatch]

I cannot wait for the next chapter!

[SamWarrens]

Me neither!
Great story, keep it going!

[Chrislydi]

Having not been a member when this story was originally posted 18 months and more ago, i've only happened on it by chance recently, but what good fortune I had when I did. This is a wonderful story that may have a lot more unposted chapters to come, I certainly hope so.

I know there's been a long break since the first ten chapters were posted but they're absolutely outstanding, and it would be a real pity if you had more but had become distracted by real life and never returned to it. I'm hoping this response is the catalyst for more readers to discover this hidden gem, and maybe post a lot more praise, and that will encourage you to continue, even after all this time.

Whether or not you do, thank you Peyton2323 for giving us this.

Chris

[Chrislydi]

'She also didn’t say anything about Devon the bartender, she rationalized and thought about it to herself.'

Just a little thought that came into my head, I'd always wondered whatever became of former England pace bowler Devon Malcolm, now I know.

Thanks again,

Chris

[mundyman]

Chapter 10:

“Ryan. What’s going on in there? Please talk to me. “

Shannon had perched herself up on her elbow to look at Ryan’s face trying to gauge how he was feeling. His face wasn’t angry anymore and he didn’t look sad either. He looked thoughtful more than anything.

Ryan was processing what had just happened. He was furious at his wife just moments ago, right up to the point he was cumming as deep inside of her as he could manage. He knew deep down he was still upset about what she had done, but right now the curiousness of his feelings were taking priority in his head over everything else. Why was he so aroused at the thought of her and this other man in that VIP room?

“Why did you do it?” Ryan asked her.

Shannon sulked into her own body. She knew she was going to have to answer for what happened, deep down she knew Ryan wasn’t going to just forgive and forget. She also knew she didn’t have a good reason for what she did. She was silent and looking down into Ryan’s chest, tears falling again and raining onto him.

“Ryan I am so sorry for what I did, and i will keep telling you and showing you just how sorry i am for the rest of my life. I don't know why i did it. I... I... I don't know if it was the environment I was in or if I felt pressured...”

Ryan interrupted her..

“Don’t make an excuse Shannon. Just tell me the truth, i won't accept anything else from you right now. I know you’re sorry and feel guilty, otherwise you wouldn’t have admitted anything to me. I know you can still be honest with me about this. Just tell me the truth, you owe me that.”

Shannon looked up at him, tears still falling from her cheeks.

“I don't want to hurt you anymore than i already have.”

“It’s not going to get any better unless i can start to trust you again Shannon.”

Shannon thought about it, she knew she couldn’t live with herself if she lost Ryan. He was the love of her life and if this is what had to happen to have a chance at fixing themselves she needed to tell him what was going through her mind.

“I’m not making an excuse when i tell you it had to do with the environment. The club is very sexual. The outfit i was wearing, everyone’s eyes were on me and i could tell, and it started to turn me on. When I started to get physical attention, and Taylor started to touch me I got even more turned on.”

Ryan was still staring at her as she spoke, no emotion though, just listening and waiting for her to open up more. Shannon kept talking.

“I don't know how to answer your question any more honestly Ryan... I was just too turned on. I couldn’t control myself once I was in there. But i promise I’ll never go back there! I’ll take a job doing something else, I’ll go back to work for my sisters at the insurance agency, i don't care about anything else but what happens to us.”

Ryan was still just looking at her with that same emotionless face. Shannon couldn’t read him; she was starting to work herself up into a frantic state, almost hyperventilating.

“Please Ryan, say something! I’m not going to make it if I can't talk to you!” Tears were pouring now and she was sobbing into his chest grabbing at his arms.

Ryan was processing what she was saying and he could empathize partly with what she was telling him, but he also felt there was more to the story.

“Shannon, I just don't believe that’s all there is. You’re not giving me all the details.”

Shannon was trying desperately to control her breathing, she was about to have a panic attack over what she thought was about to happen. She was sure Ryan at any moment was going to push her away and get out of their bed and leave her there alone.

“I wanted to please him...”

Ryan snapped to look at her, but she was looking away from his stare now, avoiding eye contact.

“What do you mean, you ‘wanted to please him’?”

Shannon breathed deep and gave up what she was holding back, it was all she could do to have any chance at saving her marriage, at keeping her husband.

“Once I had him in the back, I could feel how much he wanted to have me, like he couldn’t take his eyes off of me and I couldn’t get enough of it Ryan. I wanted him to worship me and crave me after he left. So.... I made it my mission in that room to make his experience with me as amazing as I could.. and the whole time I was doing everything I did for him, it was turning me on more and more and I was getting off on it too.”

Ryan couldn’t believe what she had just said but he just stared at his wife. He thought to himself of course he wanted her, just look at her. Everything about her is beautiful and sexual. She has perfect round breasts, pierced nipples, tan and toned skin that is so smooth. Her butt is large, round and so soft and connects to her long thick thighs, which he himself can barely pull his hands away from whenever the opportunity arises. Even her face, everyone who meets her can't help but tell her how pretty she is, and even more so when she does her makeup, which she always does perfectly. Her long dark hair and beautiful smile, all these perfect features which only compliment her amazing personality that draws everyone closer to her. You can't have a conversation with her without laughing and she has a way making you feel like you are the most important person in the world at that moment.

Shannon was realizing that what she just said may be what ends her marriage to the man she shares her life with and desperately started to try and get a response from him.

“Ryan please say something to me... please i can't live with you not talking to me anymore.”

Ryan snapped from his internal dialogue and looked at his wife who was pulling his face towards hers.

“Please Ryan... I will spend the rest of my life making this up to you.. I swear I’ll make it right..”

Ryan could tell she was sincere, and he believed what she said, about making it up to him.. he also believed her when she said that she wanted to please another man other than him earlier that same night. What he still couldn’t believe was how turned on he was by the thought of it. He was hard again already after having just fucked Shannon with all of his might and he couldn’t shake it. He was starting to worry she would notice and start to question him about it.

“I don't want you to go back to your sister’s office... I want you to go back to the club, tomorrow night.”

“Wait... no baby, i don't want to go back there, i cant.. I would never do that to us. Why do you want that...?”

Ryan looked at her with that same impossible to read look.

“I need you to go back there and show me exactly what you did.”

“Wait show you? No you can't go there, I could never let you see me like that... I could never do those things again..”

“Well, that’s what I need Shannon.”

Shannon just looked at her husband, she knew she didn’t have any power in the situation, she also knew if he saw in person what happened tonight, he would surely leave her, but if she didn’t agree to this he was going to leave her anyways. This seemed like an impossible situation to her, but one option meant he left now, the other meant she gets another day being married to her husband. She sighed and finally relented.

“Okay... I’ll go back to the club.. but please don't make me do what I did tonight again.. i just don't think we could survive it if you.. if you actually saw it for yourself.”

Ryan leaned back against his pillow and turned over away from his wife.

“I’ll wake you up in the morning when i get back from the gym, I’m getting up early.”

Shannon started to reach for his shoulder but stopped herself. Shannon laid her head down to her pillow and fought back the tears until she finally fell asleep out of exhaustion. She dreamed of their wedding day and smiled as she slept.

Well done. I love where this story could go. So many possibilities.
I’m eagerly awaiting the next chapter.

[Peyton2323]

I really loved coming back to this story and reading your comments guys. I may be getting that itch back

[Peyton2323]

Chapter 11:

Ryan was finishing his workout, he wasn’t a huge muscular man like some of others that went to his gym, but he had an athletic body that he managed through working out a few times a week and managing his diet. Ryan left the shoulder press station he was working out at to go to the locker room to shower and spend some time in the sauna.

Upon entering the sauna there were two other men already inside. He recognized them as he’s seen them at the gym plenty of other times. Both men were significantly bigger than Ryan and towered over him while standing next to each other. One was white, European descent, probably 6’3” maybe 6’4” the other a black man, even taller, easily 6’5” maybe taller and packing much more muscle than the other man sitting across from him. They were both talking and laughing at something when Ryan joined them taking a seat on the bottom bench beneath where they were seated.

They kept talking not acknowledging he had joined them.

“Bro, she is easily the hottest thing I’ve seen in a very long time, and her ass! What the fuck, how does a white girl have an ass like that?!”

“I know, i know. Perks of the job i guess? Women like that tend to show up when the compensation opportunity is great enough. She easily made over $500 last night, and she was only there for an hour and a half. She took off for some reason, I’m really hoping she comes back, i definitely need to sample that, over and over and over.”

“Yeah i hear you, I talked to her a little bit outside, before she left, i think she was about to take off and never come back honestly.. she still may not come back.. but I think I gave her enough to think about she’ll at least want to come back and find out what she’s been missing.”

The black man grabbed between his legs while he said that and laughed hard which caused the other man sitting across from him to laugh at the same time just as hard.

The two men went to get up to leave the sauna and as they did Ryan looked towards the black man who was in front of him. As he stood to leave his towel moved away from his legs and he saw that he had an enormous cock between his legs, even soft much larger than his own when hard. He noticed it hung down between his legs due to the weight of it. He only caught a glimpse but he guessed it was probably 7 or 8 inches right now completely soft.

They left the sauna and closed the door behind them still talking about the same girl as they left. Ryan was wondering who they were and who they were talking about. $500 in an hour and a half was a lot and he could only think of a few professions that could afford that kind of compensation opportunity. He wrapped his head around it and got up to leave. He showered, changed into his street clothes and headed for home. He thought to himself on the drive home. He thought about what Shannon told him the night before, he was asking himself what he was getting himself and his wife into by sending her back there, and he kept repeating the conversation between the two strangers in the sauna.

“$500 in an hour and half... $500....”

[Chrislydi]

What an exciting continuation, Ryan might not have joined the dots yet but 500 dollars has set some lightbulbs in his brain alight. I'm sure he'll be able to put two and two together by the time Shannon and himself set off for the club again.

A great day for the OHW site too. Welcoming back one of the best writers around to once again honour us with his talents. Such truly hot tales and the anticipation for even more just keeps on building all the time.

Lovely to see you back in the saddle Peyton.

Chris

[Peyton2323]

Chapter 12:

Ryan opened the front door to his house and stepped inside. He noticed the house was already alive with activity. There was music playing over the house speakers and he could smell the scent of breakfast being made. He put his bag down in the entryway closet and walked towards the kitchen. As he turned the corner he saw the source of the smell, Shannon was in the kitchen hard at work cooking an elaborate breakfast spread no doubt for the two of them this morning. He noticed, eggs, bacon and potatoes already cooked and ready, he saw Shannon was currently working on crepes with fresh berries and cream. His favorite breakfast. What else he noticed right away is what Shannon was wearing, she was decked out in lingerie, full make up and hair completely done.

She was wearing one of his favorites. A purple very high waisted bodysuit that covered her front to right above her waistline where it opened to allow her large breasts to spill out and show plenty of cleavage. It covered the front of each breast but was sheer and wrapped around the back of her neck leaving her back completely open down to the top of her ass which was only covered by a thong in the back. She was wearing heels similar to the ones she wore to the club the previous night and nothing else.

Ryan couldn’t take his eyes off of her, she turned around working at the stove, dancing to the music playing while she did. She was so beautiful and his heart melted when he watched her. She had the most amazing spirit and it made him happier when she was happy. He knew he was risking something by going through with what he told her to do the previous night, but he also knew he had to in order to figure this out and save their marriage.

Ryan cleared his throat, but not loud enough for Shannon to hear him. She instead just kept dancing and cooking. As she did she twirled around to grab something from the island counter behind her and scared herself not expecting Ryan to be standing there.

“Ahh.. Ryan! Oh my god you scared the shit out of me...” She was laughing about it but she really did scare herself at the surprise of seeing her husband there. “I’m so happy you’re home! I was so sad you weren’t still in bed when i woke up, come over here my love sit down and relax while i finish your breakfast.”

She was acting like the previous night had never happened. Or really she was acting like the two wanted to forget about it.

Ryan sat at the kitchen table and tried to relax like she told him too, but he was clearly very hard in his loose pants from watching her move her body in the lingerie she was wearing and Shannon noticed.

Shannon moved over to where Ryan sat and pulled his chair out so she could straddle his legs and drape them over on each side of him. She gave him a big wet kiss with a lot tongue just the way she knew he liked and grinding her lace covered crotch into his. “You know why I was so sad you weren’t in bed when i woke up?” She asked him while she grinded into him. She kept kissing him and grinding into him, but Ryan was keeping his hands to each side of himself being careful not to touch her yet, he knew if he did he wouldn’t be able to control himself, and Shannon knew this too. She went to grab his hands by each wrist and pulled them to each cheek of her large ass that was jutting out behind her. She placed each of his hands on her ass and dug them into each cheek. Ryan couldn’t help it any longer and relented starting to knead and rub his wife’s incredible ass.

She kept kissing and licking in his mouth, breaking only to tell him how much she missed him that morning and couldn’t stop thinking about him. She kept pulling at his shirt and raising it above his head so his torso was bare. She started kissing down his chest, licking and sucking around each of his nipples, which she knew drove him crazy. She worked her way down covering every inch she could with spit until she was on her knees in front of him. She grabbed at the waistline of his pants and underwear and pulled them down until she could pull them completely off his legs leaving him completely naked sitting in their kitchen chair in front of her. Ryan hadn’t stopped looking directly at his wife the entire time she working on his body and his cock grew harder and harder with each progressing touch. She grabbed his cock at the base, wrapping her fingers completely around it and looked up at him. In that moment Ryan couldn’t help but imagine her doing to the same to the black man in the sauna earlier that morning. He knew she wouldn’t be able to completely wrap her fingers around his cock or use just one hand. He wondered how she would even be able to put it in her mouth, or how much she could take down her throat, or anywhere else in her body.

Ryan noticed his cock grow harder and pulse more and more in her hand with each continuing thought. Shannon noticed his cock grow harder as well, not knowing the real reason though she assumed it was the anticipation of her putting his dick inside of her mouth.

“God baby your cock his so hard for me, I love it so much when you’re this hard for me. I cant wait to make you cum, just sit back let me make you feel good baby.”

With that she started working his cock, licking up his shaft, getting it really wet with her spit. Kissing up the sides of it and working it with her hands in the mean time. She would take the tip into her mouth and suck it until it would pop out of her mouth making the sound as she did and right after take his entire length into her mouth and throat making a choking noise as she did. She kept taking her mouth off and using her hands slick with the spit that would string from her chin. Each time she would look up at Ryan to ensure he was enjoying what she was doing to him. She knew everyone one of his buttons and knew how to get her husband off. She could make him cum from a blowjob in less than a minute if she wanted too, which sometimes she would want to if she felt like she needed to get it done quickly because she felt tired or felt too busy but obligated to make her husband cum.. but right now she wanted to make this last, to make him feel good again, like she did the previous night.

Ryan was watching her and he loved the sight of her choking on his dick and using so much spit. He knew this was show she was putting on for him. Before the previous night she hadn’t given him a blowjob like this in a long time. Generally it was exactly what it took to get him to cum and she had become incredibly efficient at doing that, to the point he wouldn’t last more than a minute if she used her mouth or her hands. She was a master when it came to making him cum, but right now she wasn’t trying to make him cum, she was making him feel worshipped.

Shannon took her mouth off of him but kept working his cock with her hands, one sliding and twisting around his shaft, the other she used her long manicured nails to scrap at the skin under his balls, something else she knew he loved. She looked up at him breathing hard and her mouth covered with her own spit.

“Do you like this baby? Do you want me to keep going? I will, I’ll do anything you want, you own me baby.”

She was panting but smiling up at him, her beautiful smile he loved so much. He did want her keep going, but now he also started to get upset. What was she doing? She was putting on a show to make him feel better and to make him forget about what had happened. He was getting angry and Shannon could see it on his face. She stopped working his cock and stood up to try and kiss him, but Ryan turned his face away from her.

“Baby please let me make you feel good, I want to make you feel good. What do you want...? I’ll do anything for you.”

Ryan turned to look at her. She looked amazing, she was in one of his favorite lingeries he bought for her, she had just been on her knees doing everything she could to make him feel good and worshipping his cock, but he only wanted one thing from her right now.

“I want you to do whatever you need to do to get ready for tonight and to come and get me when you’re ready to pick out your outfit for the club.”

Ryan gently put his arms over hers and pushed her to the side enough so that he could get up and leave to go upstairs to this office. Before he turned the corner to leave the kitchen he looked back and saw Shannon was back on the floor with her face in her hands fighting back tears. He wanted so badly to go and console her, tell her everything was okay and that he loved her, but right now he needed to get his mind right about what was coming later. He left the kitchen and went upstairs closing the door to his office behind him. He had a futon bed in his office he would use when he had still been employed and would often have to work well into the night so that he wouldnt wake his wife sleeping in their bed. He was going to take a nap and hopefully sleep until it was time for his wife to go to work.

Shannon was left in the kitchen sobbing, fighting to keep her breathing calm. She was not succeeding. She couldn’t see any way around what her husband wanted her to do. She knew she couldn’t risk not going through with it for fear of him not forgiving her and leaving. She finally relented and accepted the fact she was going to have to go back and do what he was asking. She gathered herself up off the floor, cleaned the kitchen and headed upstairs past the closed door to Ryan’s office, into their bedroom to get ready for the evening ahead.

[Chrislydi]

Wow Peyton, that was superb.

Poor Shannon, there's really nothing to be done but go back to the club, but she really pulled out all the stops to entice him and tried so hard to please him, you really can't help but feel so sorry for her. When Ryan pulled away and broke from her pleading, there must have been such a conflict of emotions, wanting to enjoy the moment but filled with confusion, doubt and anger about what lay behind all this effort. Those recent recollections about what was said by the black man, those sexual innuendos and the 'mystery woman - now you know he knows it's Shannon' are still ringing in his memory which makes the excitement/tension in the room so thick you could cut it with a knife. Perhaps most pertinent of all was just how hard and aroused Ryan became as those fleeting thoughts of Shannon with the black man lingered in his mind!

You have a great gift for describing these complicated scenes and getting it exactly right, from Shannon's disappointment after being so desperate to show her man who she really loves to Ryan's inner turmoil. Brilliant.

Chris