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Unread post by aniceguy77 » Tue Dec 01, 2020 11:31 am

Jenna and I were coming home from college our final year. We had met just six months ago, but things had moved along fast. I was convinced that this was the girl I was going to marry. She was smart, sexy, and very personable. Her body was fit too, as she had been on the track team at college. Sexually, we were having a good time. It was the best sex I had ever had. Although she looked kind of innocent, she had a really strong sexual side. Hell, she certainly could suck a man dry!

We were going home straight to her parent’s house and I was going to meet them for the first time. Hopefully, they would be my future in-laws.
“Don’t worry honey,” Jenna said as we walked up to the door, “They are going to love you.” By the way, their house was
When we walked into the house her mother and father had been waiting for us. They greeted us with big smiles. Her mother, who gave me a big hug and a kiss, was fucking smokin’ for an older woman. She still dressed the part too. She had on a short skirt and her top was low cut so I got a good look are her tight breasts. Looks like I could expect good things as Jenna aged.

Her dad didn’t say much. He kind of just greeted me with a friendly hello and then kind of stepped back. Jenna’s mom put her arm around me and started asking me all types of questions about my life. They were good questions too, so I could tell she was genuinely interested.
After some small talk and wine in the kitchen, we went into the dining room. This house was amazing and each room was impressive. Her dad, Mr. Anderson, did something in finance I was unfamiliar with, but they had also inherited a lot too.
Jenna’s mom did a lot of the conversing catching up with Jenna and asking me more about myself, and how we met and such. She thought it was so romantic.

“Oh young love,” Mrs. Anderson said, “Honey isn’t this so sweet? Our daughter is in love!”

“Um, yes dear,” her husband replied

“And if I may say so,” Mrs. Anderson said to me, “You really are a fine young man. I’m so happy Jenna found someone to care for her as sweet as you.”

“Oh, mom…” Jenna said.

“I’m sorry,” Mrs. Anderson replied, “I’m a mother. We get happy when we see good things happen to our children. You’ll see what I mean one day.”

“Mom!” Jenna said smiling.

The dinner was really nice and casual. I was really enjoying myself. Jenna had her hand on my knee and we were just relaxing.
Just then the doorbell rang. I thought it was kind of weird being that it was like ten in the evening.

“Please let them in dear,” Mrs. Anderson said to her husband. He got up without saying anything and we went back to talking.
A few moments later, two guys came into the dining room. They were both over six feet, but one looked older than the other. The younger one seemed to be about Jenna and my age. Frankly, they looked a little rough to be friends with such high class people as the Andersons. Jenna exchanged smiles with the younger guy.

“I’d like you to meet Mr. Johnson and his son, Dennis,” Mrs. Anderson said to me.

“Um, hello,” I said, still not sure what was going on.

Mr. Johnson took the seat Mr. Anderson had sat at at the head of the table. Maybe Mr. Anderson wasn’t returning. Dennis sat down across from me next to Mrs. Anderson. Dennis was staring at Jenna in a way that was making me a bit nervous.

“These are friends of ours,” Mrs. Anderson said, “Jenna and Dennis have known each other for quite a while. Isn’t that right?”

“Yea Steph,” Dennis replied. Again Dennis and Jenna exchanged smiles. Jenna gripped my knee with her hand a little harder.

“Well, guys,” Mrs. Anderson spoke, “This is Jenna’s new friend from school. It’s so cute to see a young couple in love.”
Dennis still staring at my girlfriend answered, “Is that so?”

“Dennis here is professional fighter, you know, that new UFC thing?” Mrs. Anderson said sipping her wine. “You’re still undefeated aren’t you Dennis?”

Mr. Johnson spoke, “Well he was… but he broke that guy’s arm in the last match and was disqualified.” Then, he looked straight at me and said, “Dennis is still learning control.”

There suddenly was some weird tension in the air. Dennis was still staring at Jenna a very possessive stare that was making me uncomfortable.

Then Dennis looked right at me and said, “Yeah, whenever I see something I want, I just have to have it.”

Never before had this happened to me, but it seemed like my penis actually shrank. Like, I could feel it shrinking. Jenna just gripped my leg tighter. Dennis resumed his glare at my girlfriend. She didn’t seem bothered by it at all. In fact it seemed like she was blushing a bit.

Mr. Johnson made a gesture to Mrs. Anderson. She acknowledge than said to me, “Hey, why don’t you come out by the pool with me. I want to learn more about my little girl’s new love.”

“Um…sure,” I said rising.

Jenna took here eyes off of Dennis for a brief moment and looked me dead in the eyes and said, “I love you honey.”

“I love you too,” I replied.

Mrs. Anderson hooked her arm into mine and with her glass of wine we left them in the dining room. We walked out some double doors to the pool. It was really beautiful out there.

“Son,” Mrs. Anderson spoke, “You really do love my daughter don’t you?”

“Oh yes Mrs. Anderson,” I replied. “I mean, she has so many great qualities. She’s smart, good hearted, athletic, and so many other great things. She’s like any guy’s dream girl.”

“Yes, I know. I’m very proud of her,” Mrs. Anderson said as we walked around the lit up pool. “I’m going to be honest. Jenna might kill me if she knew we were talking about this but…I know that Jenna is crazy about you. She talks about you all the time.” She paused for a second. “I’ve even heard, or should I say, it seems to me like you too might even be talking marriage?”

I was a little taken aback. “Well, kind of,” I replied. “I mean, I’ve been thinking about it constantly. I didn’t know that Jenna also felt this way. I was afraid to bring it up. I didn’t want to scare her off or anything. You know how people our age can sometimes be.”

“Well like I said,” Mrs. Anderson said, “This is just between you and me. But I thing you would make an excellent husband.” She paused again. “I just need to know how much you really love my daughter.”

“Oh Mrs. Anderson,” I replied, “I really can’t say how much. She means the world to me. She’s unlike anyone I have ever met! I really would do anything for her.”

When I said this Mrs. Anderson took special notice. “That’s good. That’s really good.” She took another sip of her wine. “You see, Mr. Anderson feels the same way toward me. The importance of devotion for a marriage to work is tantamount. You must love each other so much, that you are willing to do whatever it takes to make it work.”

“Oh, I definitely feel that way,” I said. “I really can’t express how much I love your daughter.”

Mrs. Anderson smiled at me and said, “That’s good. And I know Jenna feels the same way about you. Trust me!” Mrs. Anderson finished her glass. “Let’s go back inside. I think it’s starting to get cold.”

We went back inside the house. No one seemed to be around. Mrs. Anderson was leading me to a part of the house I hadn’t seen yet. It would probably take me a long while to see the entire house. We went down a flight of stairs. We came to another double door.

Mrs. Anderson gripped my hand and said, “Remember what you told me honey. I’m so happy Jenna met you!”

We walked through the doors into a large room. I wasn’t sure what you would call this room. It was just big, with different types of couches and such tastefully placed. It was pretty dark except for a few lights pointed down from the ceiling.

As we walked further in there I saw it. Jenna was bare ass naked sitting on her pretty feet with her back to me. Standing directly in front of her was a bare-chested, muscle ripped Dennis. Jenna’s head was buried in his crotch. She was sucking him off!

I was absolutely shocked! I couldn’t move, but Mrs. Anderson walked me over to the side. I was still in shock. What was going on? Should I go over there and punch him in the face? Looking at his body and remembering what he does, told me that that might not be a good idea. I was too dumbfounded to speak.

As Mrs. Anderson walked me over I noticed someone on the ground. I looked closely in the dark light and it appeared to be Mr. Anderson. He was naked except for a collar around his neck that was fastened to a thick chain and. His hands were behind his back in handcuffs. His head was between his knees and he didn’t move or say anything. What the hell was going on here?

When I looked up again Mrs. Anderson was gone, but Mr. Johnson was standing there looming over me. Before I could think to say anything he barked at me.

“Take off your clothing boy!” he yelled.
“Umm…Mrs. Ande,” I stammered.

“SHUT THE FUCK UP!” He yelled. “Take, your, clothing, off, NOW!”

Scared shitless I just took my clothing off as fast as I could. When it was all off Mr. Johnson pointed at the ground, “Now, SIT!” I listened and immediately shot to my knees.

“Good boy,” Mr. Johnson said, “Now don’t fucking move!” He stared right into my frightened eyes as he spoke. When he was satisfied that I would listen he walked off into the darkness.

I looked back up and Jenna was still felating Dennis. He grabbed her pony tail and was pumping her head back and forth. I had to admit, she looked very hot sitting her nice ass on her beautiful feet. I had to find what the hell was going on though.

Dennis looked up and saw me sitting nude in the corner with Mr. Anderson next to me. Dennis shot me an evil smile as my girlfriend deepthroated his cock. From where I was sitting, it seemed that she needed both hands to hold it. He returned to looking down at her suck in his cock.

Again, just like before, my penis actually shrank. I looked down at it and it was almost completely inside my body. It wasn’t big to begin with, but I had never seen it this small. It was like the size of nickel.

Suddenly, Dennis’s muscle-ripped body started to shake. He started grunting very loudly. Jenna started sucking even harder. He grabbed her head as he unloaded in her mouth. She was swallowing his load like an expert.

He grabbed his cock and rubbed the last of his load out. Jenna sucked and sucked on the big head and got every drop.
When she was done he patted her cheek and walked off into the darkness with his cock swinging as he walked. Jenna sat there for just a second to get her composure. She then jumped up and started to walk over to where I was sitting.

Her body looked amazing as she walked up to me nude. When she got close she said, “Don’t say anything, just come with me.” (TBC?)
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Unread post by afagehi7 » Tue Dec 01, 2020 1:14 pm

Continue! I thought he was going to have to service mom. So dad and mom watched their daughter give head?

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Unread post by OOAA » Tue Dec 01, 2020 6:46 pm

Poor young boyfriend....

Continue it, please ;)

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Unread post by aniceguy77 » Tue Dec 01, 2020 10:10 pm

Thanks guys. This was just something I whipped up a while ago. I usually don't write too graphic, just mind stuff I guess.

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Unread post by aniceguy77 » Tue Dec 01, 2020 10:14 pm

She held out her hand and I grabbed it. She walked me toward a different door. Mr. Anderson was still huddled over. He hadn’t moved the entire time. When we got to the door I looked and saw that on the other side of the room it looked like Mrs. Anderson was bent over a couch and Mr. Johnson was pumping her hard from behind.

We went out the door and up some stairs. I just followed behind Jenna, both of us nude. We went into a door into what appeared to be Jenna’s room. We sat down on the bed. Jenna must have seen the look of confusion on my face.

“Ok, let me speak,” Jenna said. “I know you must be very confused right now. But let’s just say that the Anderson life is somewhat…complicated.”

“Complicated!?” I said loudly.

“Please,” she said, “Let me finish. You see, my parents love each other very much. They always have. There is nothing my father wouldn’t do for my mother, please believe me.” She paused and took in a breath. “It’s just that although they have a wonderful marriage, they really do, my mother’s body belongs to another man….”

“Mr. Johnson?” I answered still very confused.

“Exactly,” Jenna said nervously, “And it’s more than that. Because Mr. Johnson owns my mother’s body, by extension his son owns mine….”
I must have looked absolutely shocked, because Jenna stopped so I could absorb what she was telling me.

“What?!” I answered.

“I know, I wanted to tell you earlier,” Jenna said passionately, “But I was so worried as to what you would think!” She looked right in my eyes, “Look at me…look at me. I love you darling. I really do! You are the greatest guy I have ever met. I want to spend the rest of my life with you. And I think you feel the same way, or I wouldn’t have shown this too you.”

I looked down, “Umm… I don’t know…”

“You have my heart,” Jenna said somewhat desperately, “You will always have my heart….so long as you accept the fact that Dennis has my body….”
We sat there in silence a little. It was a very strange moment in my life. I really did love her. She was my everything. But, could two people really live like this?

I took a deep breath and looked at Jenna. “Jenna,” I said, “I really do love you. I would marry you. But how on earth can this….”

“Listen,” she interrupted, “My parents are two of the greatest people on earth. They loved me very much my whole life. I know they will be together forever. It’s just that they live a little differently than most people. But, trust me, the love they have is real.” She paused before saying, “And I know what we have is real too. Please, for me, can we make this work?”

I looked at Jenna. She looked lovely. I really did love her. I thought to myself for a moment. Then, like a weight had been lifted I decided.
“Yes Jenna,” I answered, “I would do anything for you. You know that. And if this is what it takes to be with you…then so be it!”

Jenna smiled excitedly and we hugged in joy. “I’m so happy! I just knew you were the one.” She jumped up and went over to her dresser. She got out a pink little plastic contraption. She hopped up onto the bed with me.

“Lean back honey,” she said softly. I did so and my shrunken penis was exposed on my shaven body. Jenna like me shaven so I did so. She grabbed my penis with two fingers. “This is your new little piece of jewelry,” Jenna said.

“What is it?” I asked.

“This is part of our marriage vow,” she answered, “It’s your cock-cage. Dennis needs to know that I am true to him. This is the only way to insure it.” With her two fingers she placed the cage on my dick and closed it tight. It sure was tight. She pulled out a little lock and put it through the loop.
She paused and looked right into my eyes. “I love you honey,” she said.

“I love you too,” I replied.

CLICK!

The lock went into place and my cock-cage was securely on. I looked down at my little guy all tied up in its pink prison. It looked very feminine and feeble. Jenna just smiled at me and gave me a big hug.

Just then there was a knock and the door. “Come in,” Jenna said.

Mrs. Anderson, in just a thong and a bra, popped her head in the door. “Is it on?” she asked.

“Yes!” Jenna answered. “I told you I had met the one!”

“Oh honey,” Mrs. Anderson, “You don’t know how happy I am! You two are very lucky people!” She looked at me, “Well, you weren’t lying when you said that you would do anything for my daughter. I’m so glad that Jenna can trust you. You two will have a wonderful life together!”
Jenna pulled me to her and gave me a big kiss. “Ok let’s go,” Mrs. Anderson said. “He has to meet the men.” (TBC)

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Jenna hopped off the bed and I followed behind her. The two of us were naked as we walked behind Mrs. Anderson. We walked out the double doors into the pool area. On the far side of the pool, Dennis and Mr. Johnson were sitting in lounge chairs drinking beers and smoking cigarettes. They watched us as we walked up to them.

When we got close Mrs. Anderson went over to Mr. Johnson and sat down on his lap. Jenna and I stood there nude holding hands. Dennis’ long, thick cock was laying against his leg. Suddenly, I got extremely terrified. If it wasn't for my loving girlfriend, I would have run out of there immediately.

Jenna handed Dennis my cock-cage key.

Dennis looked right at my pink cock-cage. “Great,” he said, “That little fucking nub is tied up tight!” He and Mr. Johnson laughed. Mrs. Anderson and Jenna just gave big smiles.

Dennis looked right at me. “So bitch,” he spoke with a commanding tone, “You know Jenna’s mine right?”

His presence was extremely self-assured. The guy was ripped, and I had definitely not forgotten what he did professionally. I tried to be brave however, "Well, she's uh... she's my girlfriend...."

Everyone there let out a collective sigh. Jenna gripped my hand tighter and whispered in my ear, "Honey please don't...."

Dennis addressed my girlfriend, "I thought that this bitch was trained?"

"He's new to this Daddy," she said somewhat meekly, "Please be patient with him."

"Fuck that!" Dennis said rising from his chair. As he approached me and got right in my face I could feel a hole in the pit of my stomach. This was an Alpha staring down his prey. He glared right into my eyes. "I don't give a shit what you call her boy. Jenna is my slut. I will fuck her and use her when and where I want. You understand that right?"

I hesitated a bit. "Right?!" he bellowed. For some strange reason, perhaps a combination of dwindling pride and intense fear, I lunged at him. Big mistake.

"Honey no!" Jenna cried out in fear.

Dennis for his part simply enacted a backhand slap across my face that instantly dropped me on my knees at his feet. I was huddled in a puddle as Jenna dropped down beside me as I cowered below the Alpha's presence.

She consoled me as best she could, "Honey, please stop. Dennis is right. We discussed this."

"Do the right thing honey," Mrs. Anderson said from Mr. Johnson's lap.

I pulled myself together and looked up at the adonis looming over me. He leered down at me in contempt with a smug look of earned superiority. "Do you understand now boy?" He mocked.

There was no point in resisting. I lowered my head in submission and nodded.

“Well prove it,” he said, “Get your bitch ass up and plant a big, fat kiss on my cock. I want you to thank it for fucking Jenna.”

"What?" I somehow whimpered.

"Honey please don't!" Jenna squeeze me tighter in solidarity.

"But... I'm not, I'm not gay..." I managed to say.

"What your really aren't a man, are you son?" Mr. Johnson spoke up for the first time. He indicated to my newly attached cock-cage. Drawing attention to my new pink fixture, everyone seemed to find that argument wholly compelling.

I shook my head 'no' in defeat and acceptance.

"Well then, get on with it boy," Dennis commanded.

Something in me gave way to utter submission. I was naked on my knees cowering at the man who had been and would be fucking the love of my life for the foreseeable future. My tiny cock was tied and I was agreeing to the entire arrangement. It just made sense to surrender to the better male.

"Do it for us honey," Jenna said sweetly holding me tight.

All my submissive instincts kick into high gear. I looked up at his cock. The cock that had and would be giving my love so much pleasure. Suddenly, I looked at with almost a sense of awe.

His cock was like half-way to his knee. I slowly raised myself to the big head. Everyone was watching me. I got really close to this dominant male and placed my lips on this huge cock-head. I gave it a sincere kiss.

“What do you tell it?” Dennis said mockingly.

“Um…” I stammered, “Thank you for fucking Jenna like I know she needs.”

Mr. Johnson and Mrs. Anderson applauded in delight.

“Well just so you understand that you are worthless,” Dennis said, “This family has a totem pole and you are coming and staying at the dead bottom. Got it??”

With lowered eyes I nodded again.

“Oh, and one last thing,” Dennis said, “Whenever I decide that my seed is going to impregnate Jenna, your bitch-ass is going to raise the child. That is something else we will eventually add to your house-duties. You got that boy?”

Again, I nodded in submission.

“Good fucking job bitch,” Dennis said smugly. “Now get the fuck out of here!”

Jenna motioned for me to come with her. “Take him with the other bitch!” Mr. Johnson yelled.

“So long cuckold!” Dennis yelled before they all broke out in laughter.

“I’m so proud of you! I know that must have been tough, but you did it!” Jenna said to me as we walked off naked. I felt extremely emasculated having had kissed another man’s cock in front of my girlfriend and her mom. My head was swimming in submissive thoughts.

Jenna took me into one of the upper hallway. Both her and her parent’s rooms were within earshot. There was a little foyer there. Again I saw Mr. Anderson. He was collared and handcuffed and in the same position I had seen him before. Again he didn’t move. But, this time I could clearly see that he was wearing a cock-cage too.

“Turn around,” she said.

I listened and she put handcuffs on me. Jenna pulled out a collar and fit it around my neck. She pulled the attached chain so I had to go down onto the ground with my face between my knees. She then tied the chain to a metal pylon that seemed to be there for just that purpose. I was in a tucked up position with my head between my knees, just like Mr. Anderson. My bare ass was sticking up behind me.

“Don’t worry honey,” Jenna said to me, “I’ll be back. Just know that I am so proud of you and I know that we will have a wonderful life together.” She started to walk off. She turned one last time to me, “I love you honey!” With that she walked off and out of sight leaving me chained, cuckolded, helpless, and with my nub tied tight. (TBC)
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An hour or so went by with nothing happening. Mr. Anderson didn’t speak. Suddenly, I heard people talking. All four of them were coming up the hallway. I couldn’t see any of them, but I heard Mr. Johnson and Mrs. Anderson go into the master bedroom and Dennis and Jenna go into her room. None of them acknowledged me.

Then, for the next two or so hours, which seemed like eternity, I was forced to listen to the two males of the house banging and banging the two girls of the house. Both Jenna and her mom must have screamed in ecstasy at least six times a piece. The banging noises they were all making was pretty impressive. Both Dennis and his dad were very muscular, they must also be pretty powerful fuckers. It was obvious that Dennis was much better at fucking Jenna than I ever could. I began to understand why she honored Dennis’s possession of her body. He could fuck her like I never could.

After a long time I heard someone exit Jenna’s room and go down the stairs. A few moments later, Jenna came out and over to me. She unlocked my collar and handcuffs. She took my hand. “Come with me,” she said softly.

We went into her room. It smelled very much like lots of fucking had happened in this room. Jenna looked very disheveled, but she still looked very hot. “Thank god!” I said. “I thought you were going to leave me out there all night!”

Jenna laughed. “Oh honey, not on your first night!” she said. “Dennis went out drinking with a few friends and he won’t be back tonight, so I thought it would be nice for use to sleep together.”

I looked down at my cock-cage. “So does that mean this thing can come off?” I asked.

Jenna kind of laughed. “I don’t think so! Dennis would fucking freak! Plus, he has the only key. He gets to decide when and if you get to get hard again.” She noticed my face. “Don’t worry honey. I’ll put in a good word for you,” she said with a smile. “I’d let you go down on me, but I’m just too tired. Maybe tomorrow night,” she said coolly.

Her nude body hopped into bed. “Come on honey,” she said, “Let’s get some sleep. Tomorrow starts the rest of our life together.”
I got into the bed and Jenna put her nice ass to me. I leaned over and kissed her on her cheek. We spooned together and my cock-caged nub fit snugly between her firm ass cheeks.

Well, we were together. And we would be together forever. Finally, I had the girl of my dreams, if only a little differently than I could have possibly imagined. (TE)
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Unread post by afagehi7 » Wed Dec 02, 2020 12:13 am

Not my thing but well written and interesting plot line which is going to thicken (pun intended).

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Unread post by aniceguy77 » Wed Dec 02, 2020 12:33 pm

afagehi7 wrote:
Wed Dec 02, 2020 12:13 am
Not my thing but well written and interesting plot line which is going to thicken (pun intended).
Well thanks for those kind words! :up:

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Unread post by SteelRidge » Wed Dec 02, 2020 12:37 pm

Yes, this is a well written short story. It did get me hard.

There are a lot of cuck fiction out there, wish there was more from the bull POV.

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Unread post by SteelRidge » Wed Dec 02, 2020 2:43 pm

The part that seemed least real to me was the kissing of the dick. Seems like real cucks almost always have to work up to a bull cock honoring/worship situation.

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Unread post by aniceguy77 » Wed Dec 02, 2020 2:59 pm

SteelRidge wrote:
Wed Dec 02, 2020 2:43 pm
The part that seemed least real to me was the kissing of the dick. Seems like real cucks almost always have to work up to a bull cock honoring/worship situation.
Heh, I agree. I guess I could punch that part up a little ;)

Thanks for the kind words earlier btw. :up:

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Unread post by SteelRidge » Wed Dec 02, 2020 4:00 pm

aniceguy77 wrote:
Wed Dec 02, 2020 2:59 pm
SteelRidge wrote:
Wed Dec 02, 2020 2:43 pm
The part that seemed least real to me was the kissing of the dick. Seems like real cucks almost always have to work up to a bull cock honoring/worship situation.
Heh, I agree. I guess I could punch that part up a little ;)

Thanks for the kind words earlier btw. :up:
Well, I mean real cucks seem to take quite awhile (months) to work up the nerve to do it. And bulls seem to give them time.

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Unread post by OOAA » Wed Dec 02, 2020 6:52 pm

This story sounds too weird for me...

... I would expect something for the "caged-for-now" boyfriend..., for example... does he have a gun? Maybe he could make the Jonhsons disappear...

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Unread post by Captain6 » Wed Dec 02, 2020 7:24 pm

I think a little more build up would work. The story is good and plot excellent, but definitely went from 0 to 60 in quite a hurry. Perhaps if the mom had distracted him while the daughter was fucked. Then she had him he the creampie without knowing thus easing him into it.

Anyway, great start. You are definitely on your way..... We are appreciative of your effort. Keep at it

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Unread post by aniceguy77 » Thu Dec 03, 2020 11:05 am

Captain6 wrote:
Wed Dec 02, 2020 7:24 pm
I think a little more build up would work. The story is good and plot excellent, but definitely went from 0 to 60 in quite a hurry. Perhaps if the mom had distracted him while the daughter was fucked. Then she had him he the creampie without knowing thus easing him into it.

Anyway, great start. You are definitely on your way..... We are appreciative of your effort. Keep at it
Thank you for your kind and constructive words.

I made some changes to the middle portion. I have plenty of other stories where different things happen and they get much more graphic. This is sort of my subtle one.

By the way, when you do this sort of thing you can NEVER make everyone happy, so I certainly don't try. But if you did enjoy any portion, then I am glad.

Thanks all for reading. :up:

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Unread post by Captain6 » Thu Dec 03, 2020 4:38 pm

The story is incredible and the concept great. You have an untapped talent that’s bubbling beneath the surface. Your observation is spot on - you can’t make everyone happy, but follow your muse and be happy with what you do.

Thank you for your submission and write for you; not anyone else.

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Unread post by wpaman » Thu Dec 03, 2020 6:48 pm

Cuckie nonsense, I am out.

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Re: College Love - Cuckold Family

Unread post by Captain6 » Thu Dec 03, 2020 7:27 pm

Definitely your prerogative on whether to read or not, but how is it cuckie nonsense? The story is definitely a cuckold story whether it is your type or version is your choice.

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Re: College Love - Cuckold Family

Unread post by SteelRidge » Fri Dec 04, 2020 5:29 am

Captain6 wrote:
Thu Dec 03, 2020 7:27 pm
Definitely your prerogative on whether to read or not, but how is it cuckie nonsense? The story is definitely a cuckold story whether it is your type or version is your choice.
Agree.

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Re: College Love - Cuckold Family

Unread post by p_revere » Fri Dec 04, 2020 11:05 am

I think one correction you should make is to decide if their name is Jackson or Johnson. Otherwise, wee written.

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Re: College Love - Cuckold Family

Unread post by aniceguy77 » Sat Dec 05, 2020 10:14 am

p_revere wrote:
Fri Dec 04, 2020 11:05 am
I think one correction you should make is to decide if their name is Jackson or Johnson. Otherwise, wee written.
Changes made. Thanks for looking out and the kind words buddy.

Also, thanks to everyone who enjoyed it :up:

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Re: College Love - Cuckold Family

Unread post by subtoall » Sun Dec 06, 2020 12:36 pm

wpaman wrote:
Thu Dec 03, 2020 6:48 pm
Cuckie nonsense, I am out.
Great job providing constructive feedback and encouragement to an amateur writer. You'd make a great parent.

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Re: College Love - Cuckold Family

Unread post by Captain6 » Thu Dec 10, 2020 9:45 am

I hooe he hasn’t given up

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Re: College Love - Cuckold Family

Unread post by aniceguy77 » Thu Dec 10, 2020 9:51 am

Captain6 wrote:
Thu Dec 10, 2020 9:45 am
I hooe he hasn’t given up
Hey-o Captain!

I have not quit writing if that's what you are asking. That was just the end of this short story. I guess I could continue it. See what the next day holds??

I have written many of stories. If anyone has any requests, I probably could come up with something ;)

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