Jordan

[Fred_Garvin]

I am dying to know what knowledge of good and evil will be imparted by the fruit Jordan shared with David this time. The letters she wrote before were amazing revelations, and I am sure her analytical mind and conflicting passions will produce another masterful opus.

[Shauncuckold]

Thank you for sharing your stories with us. I love your writing and appreciate the hard work that you put into your art.

Mr. Swan

[Luis]

I’d like to read the rest of this story too!

[Flipflop200]

Bumping this back to the top!

[Tire_Kicker]

This story will always be at the top as far as I'm concerned.

Hoping Crushing comes back soon...

[nnjcpl2002]

We miss you, Crushing. Hope everything is OK.
Best, NNJCPL.

[john jasson]

Crushing by name, crushing by nature. I don't have a lot of time at the moment either, so I understand your situation, but I wanted to echo what other posters have said about this majestic piece of work. I'm only on page 3, but goodness me, your story is incredible. It's weighty in the word count, and needs to be slowly absorbed to be properly appreciated, but it certainly repays the effort and time necessary for the reading and the savouring. I haven't encountered anything quite like this before for extremely deep and well crafted character development coupled with such erotic intensity, so thank you so much for sharing. Personally, I have quite a way to go to have read all you have posted to date, but I do hope you continue. Thank you again. Thank you SO much.

[Guhunkadorn]

Dear Mr. Crushing,

I hope your having a good summer, mines okay though my summer reading list would be substantially improved if you'd drop some more chapters.

All my best,

Guhunkadorn

[Fred_Garvin]

This story is my favorite on this site right now. I hate that work and life has taken you away from your writing, and I hope you have time to get back to finishing this.

[CTim]

This is incredibly well written. The individual character development is off the charts. For context on my compliment, I'm a happily long term married monogamous guy and I can't identify with David, Chris, or Jared at all! Can't really identify with Mark either, although that would be the closest. In spite of those facts, I still couldn't put it down. Well done!

[Oneillfranko]

Really hoping you continue with this epic tale…