michey wrote:It would be easier to understand if they had full names, even if they were fake names just for the context of your story, as it is i find it very confusing and have to go back to work out "who is screwing who"Wisher wrote:D+D wrote:I think that S should be the center of entertainment at M's stag party.
I still can't figure out the alphabet ... S is the Mother?
I might rather the twin sister be the center of attention, dressed in bridal white.literally, it is a great continuing story though and i love hearing it.
You are exactly right. If the mother's real name is Mary, call her Bertha, just put out a name as opposed to an initial so we all know who's who.