College Love - Cuckold Family

[desertsub]

I just bought both books for my wife to read. If I know her (we've only been married for 30+ years and I could be wrong ) she will love reading them!

[aniceguy77]

Good luck. Looking forward to reading more from you. Just bought the books, I'm sure I will give them a re-read sometime.

On earning money with Erotica stories, I would recommend the Reddit Erotica Authors. The most important marketing are your cover and blurb, which both could use some work.

Well firstly, thank you very much! That really means a lot. Know that there is additional content at the end, but without a re-read it may not make 100% sense. Or it may, I have no idea

I will check out that reddit! I probably should have beforehand, but will now anyway.

All the covers seem to tell you what the girl looks like, which I HATE. Like let me decide right? But, like they say, 'sex sells'.

Thanks again for your support

[aniceguy77]

I just bought both books for my wife to read. If I know her (we've only been married for 30+ years and I could be wrong ) she will love reading them!

Awesome to hear! I hope that she really does enjoy it. It seems like she really is into male humiliation, so it should be right up her alley!

BTW, I am really stressing about the cover. Does anyone have any tips as to what they would expect to be the good qualities of a cuckold humiliation cover?

Edit: NVM, I just made some changes cause I was sick of stressing lol. It takes a few days for them to update but it's out of my mind now;]

[aniceguy77]

As I exited the room cock-caged and naked, I saw a very expected sight. Brit was standing there with her classic Mary Jane's, white stockings, a short white dress, and her hair up in a pony tail. Her smile was as magnetic as ever.

I smiled back at her and slightly nodded.

She wrapped her arms around me in glee. "I was worried!" she said releasing me from her grip. "Well, I wasn't too worried. I knew you could handle it," she said excitedly. "Well, sort of..."

"Thanks Brit," I said honestly, "For everything..."

We walked off together toward the supply room.

As I gather everything up and got it ready, she just looked at me in somewhat amazement.

I started down the hall.

She quickly caught up, "Well aren't you gonna tell me?"

"Tell you what?" I asked honestly.

Brit looked a little incredulous. "Well I don't know, anything? Like, weren't you scared?"

I nodded that I was, "Hell, yea I was. That thing is a monster."

"I know right?" Brit agreed and then seemed to run with it. "I was so scared for you. I really thought he was gonna give you a whooping. Thank god you came to your senses!"

We arrived at the first room and I began cleaning. There was no more pretense of her helping me. She was probably just there to hear what I had to say, which was fine with me, I needed to chip in and do my part.

"When you jumped to your knees after that failed punchy thing you did, I was half ready to throw myself in front of you to protect you from him," she said with pride and honestly. "Then I saw Jenna run in and I thought it might turn out okay. When I saw him pause and more or less let you off the hook I was so thankful."

I nodded in agreement, "This is humiliating to say, but I was so scared I didn't know what else to do."

"And thank god for it!" Brit exclaimed.

There seemed to be a pauses as Brit was remembering the night prior. It seemed to have almost as large an impact on her as it did for me.

She got a big smile on her face, "And then you knew what to do after that also!"

I was too embarrassed to nod at this.

"Bending over like that must have been crazy humiliating," she said genially, "'Specially with all of us watching on and whatnot."

Boy was she right.

"I just wanted it to all be over," she said in her guileless way. "I mean having a plug is one thing, but getting ploughed by a Bull like that is quite another." She seemed again to be deep in thought remembering. "You did great though. Going limp and stuff, letting him have his way. You were smart," she said in almost admiration.

If it wasn't so humiliating and emasculating, I might almost feel pride at impressing such a beauty.

She got a slight frown on her face, "I'm not sure he had to hoist you up on his shoulder like that, show us his handiwork. I mean, we all got the point right?"

Replaying all of this with Brit was filling my body with submissive angst. But, what was I going to do? I practically lived off that stuff now.

"But, whatever doesn't kill us, makes us stronger right?" she said smiling.

I nodded in agreement.

Just then Dennis entered the room. Both Brit and I got quiet and at attention.

Without a word he walked up to Brit and smacked her bubbly ass. She blushed a little at the attention.

"Let's go," he said and indicated for her to get on the ground. She quickly got down on her knees at his feet.

He unceremoniously pulled down his swim trunks. Without any words she knew to take his thick snake right into her pretty mouth.

At this point he first seem to notice me and snapped his finger at me. I was so insignificant, he didn't even give me derision, just an order. "Hold her hair," was all he said.

I quickly scurried over and pulled her loose strands behind her ears. I then got a good grip on her pony tail. He wanted me to make sure it didn't fall apart and get in the way I supposed.

He pulled out his phone and seemed to be casually going through it. He even laughed a few times at whatever he was looking at.

Brit seemed to know exactly what she was doing. She also seemed to be extremely happy to get to worship his amazing cock.

I looked up at him once, but then had to look back down at Brit. Looking up at the muscular Bull was too painful still. It was somewhat like looking into the sun. He had cucked me. He had fucked me. Looking at him any more than I had to at this point hit still too raw a nerve.

Instead, I was forced to watch the beautiful Brit take in his thick snake over and over again. As crazy as this sounds, I found it fascinating and, to be quite honest, exhilarating.

She really sucked him like a pro and part of me was actually happy it was getting the attention it deserved.

For whatever reason, looking at his cock now was like a new experience. I somehow felt like the girls did, that that cock needed to honored. It had conquered me. Of course it deserved the upmost respect and attention.

And Brit was certainly showing it both. She sucked on it like it had the key to life.

I could tell that this was not her first time getting him off as she knew when to go down the shaft, and when to use her hands. Brit was on a mission, and that mission was making this thing explode.

Pretty soon Dennis started to make some grunts and put his phone down. "Fuck yea," he said down to us.

He swatted my hand away and grabbed Brit's ponytail for his own. He forced himself deep down her throat as his body began to shake. Brit knew what was coming and held on best she could with her pretty mouth fully jammed with his dark snake.

"Fuck yea!" Dennis exclaimed as his body shook as he unloaded deep into Brit. Brit looked up to his face as he looked down at his conquest. She wanted to see his approval.

I simply sat there naked, caged and in awe.

He began to release his grip as she was able to slowly pull her mouth off of his shaft. She kept her mouth open to him however as she showed him a relatively clean mouth that he then proceeded to fill with a few more spurts.

"Share that," he said before wringing the last of it onto her tongue. He then pulled up his shorts and unceremoniously as he had pulled them down. He patted her cheek and walked off.

As he walked off his phone rang. He causally answered it. "What up?"

We didn't get to hear the rest of the conversation as he had turned the corner and was gone.

Brit turned to me and pulled me by the back of my neck toward her. She gave me a very deep, passionate open-mouthed kiss. I had had passionate kisses before, only this one was filled with an Alpha's thick seed.

We sat knee to knee almost making out as we shared his cum between us. Some came out of both of our mouths and Brit picked it up with her finger and sweetly placed it back into my mouth.

"He said to 'share'," Brit said smiling.

I have no idea what you would call that moment that Brit and I had, but sharing the Bull's load with this beautiful girl who had been so sweet to me really meant a lot. We held each other for a few moments after we had swallowed what was left.

"Well," she said looking me in the eye with her sweet look, "Wasn't that something?"

I sort of half-nodded.

"I reckon, that will be a normal thing now," she said again smiling. She playfully poked me, "Only next time I bet you'll be the one who gets to give him head!"

"Yea right!" I said feeling the sting of her accusation.

She stood up laughing, "Oh come on, you can't tell me you weren't jealous."

"I was not," I said embarrassed.

"Yea whatever," she said playfully, "By next week you'll be begging for it!"

"I will not," I said calming down a bit.

She shot me the evilest smile she could muster, "Yea? We'll see..."

We continued through our routine. As I cleaned I thought that Brit may have a point. Dennis stopping by for head might be a regular thing now. Why wouldn't he? He had the option and the power to do so. Making me help was probably part of my training. I certainly was humiliating to see him do that to Brit and fighting the urge to stop him was apparently exactly what I needed.

'Man, Bulls were so lucky,' I thought.

As Brit and I reached the end it felt a little bitter-sweet. We had just had a very special moment together and we might never reach that again. We were sure there would be other blowjobs, but we would only ever get one first snowball.

"You are a very special boy," Brit said smiling.

"You are pretty special too Brit," I replied.

"I said it once, and I'll say it again," she moved in and gave me a kiss on the cheek, "Jenna is lucky to have you as her cuckold."

"Thanks," I said to what almost amounted to pride.

There was a moment of silence before Brit spoke back up.

"I'd hate to see you go, but isn't there someone else who you need to see right now?"

Kat.

[FaithfulHero]

Amazing chapters! Got both books from amazon. The ending was open for some interpretation. Maybe the ultimate ”gift” from their bull was already growing inside Jenna as they drove off down the road….
Looking forward to new books , any chance on an update on how its going with those?

[MellowJoe]

Seriously intense emotional rollercoaster here. Well done! But so many questions...

When did the Andersons incorporate Mr Johnson and son into it?

How old were Jenna and Dennis when this happened? How and when was she introduced to it?

What's Brit's story? How did she come to be there?

What's Kat's story? How did she come to be there?

Are there other servants? Are they incorporated into their employers' lifestyle as well? Are they even aware of it? Was this a special weekend to introduce the new guy to the lifestyle with any outsider servants given the time off? Or is this how life at the mansion is all the time?

[armyguyot1]

Welcome to the forum MellowJoe.

[MellowJoe]

Welcome to the forum MellowJoe.

Thank you kind sir!

[aniceguy77]

Amazing chapters! Got both books from amazon. The ending was open for some interpretation. Maybe the ultimate ”gift” from their bull was already growing inside Jenna as they drove off down the road….
Looking forward to new books , any chance on an update on how its going with those?

Thank you very much for your kind words! The epilogue did have some ambiguity, but there were some hints along the way as to 'what really happened'

As far as the next book goes, I have outlined the book and the first chapter is written. But, as I am sure with everyone recently, life has thrown up some roadblocks and I haven't been able to work on it as much as I would have liked as yet. However, I can promise that it will happen, though it will be somewhat different than this one.

Thanks again for reading!

[aniceguy77]

Seriously intense emotional rollercoaster here. Well done! But so many questions...

When did the Andersons incorporate Mr Johnson and son into it?

How old were Jenna and Dennis when this happened? How and when was she introduced to it?

What's Brit's story? How did she come to be there?

What's Kat's story? How did she come to be there?

Are there other servants? Are they incorporated into their employers' lifestyle as well? Are they even aware of it? Was this a special weekend to introduce the new guy to the lifestyle with any outsider servants given the time off? Or is this how life at the mansion is all the time?

Lots of great questions here! And yes, there is an answer to all of them! Maybe if there is ever a sequel these questions will be addressed!

[Chrislydi]

I turned to look at her. She was standing there in nothing but a sheer kimono covering her amazingly fit body with a very thin bikini and sandals. She looked elegant and classy and even though she looked like she had money, thankfully not a bit gaudy. She also looked amazingly sexy. For being a late sexual bloomer, I was suddenly spending a lot of time around beautiful, sexy females, albeit I was effectively neutered and couldn't achieve an erection. But, it was still a nice change............

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........."Yes Mrs. Anderson," I agreed with her.

She patted my hand as we walked. "That's why I like you honey, you are so smart." She continued, "Before, strong women were in a tough place. They only had two choices, deny who they were, which was personally unacceptable, or be openly strong, which was socially unacceptable." She seemed to be lost in thought a bit. "And yet they existed..."

I'm relatively new to this site and have only just discovered your thread. I hope you'll excuse the long quote - although I have cut most of the meat from it, it was to give you an indication as to where I'd actually got up to, as you can see, very early days indeed.

I've seen enough though to offer my congratulations on what looks to be a very well written and well thought out piece. An original idea, rather in the way you've done it than the actual subject matter itself, and one that grabs you by the throat so you're desperate to read more. You've certainly hooked me.

I would however agree with some of the early criticism - if you look back at page one and two of the thread - the early days, It does tend to go from 0 to 60 at the speed of light, from being an apparently quite vanilla and normal household to one completely 'abnormal', or perhaps better described as a very unusual one.

Anyway it's a first class start and I wish you all the luck with future sales on Amazon, I for one will look up any future offerings.

All the best with your new venture,

Chrislydi.

[Chrislydi]

I've now read all on this OHW thread and thoroughly enjoyed it. There are many open questions but these have been asked by others (and answered) months ago, that's one advantage of being so late on parade reading this

You're an extremely talented writer and storyteller, especially in this genre, so I'll certainly be looking on Amazon under your real name (or the pseudonym you're using) as this has merely whetted my appetite for more.

Thank you so much for sharing.

[brownbetaboiii]

Hi I cant seem to find your books on amazon, would really like to read them.

[armyguyot1]

Welcome to the forum brownbetaboiii.